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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
eran.mwaaaaah! ur story is so much better than the original!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 25

DK: Disha have you seen Ved anywhere?

Disha: (Looks behind DK) He's right behind you

DK turns round to give him the papers which had arrived for Ved in the last part of the story!

DK: Ved these papers came for you.

Ved looks at them and then signs these papers and hands them to DK.

DK: Why are you giving these papers to me?

Ved: Because Kanaka belongs to you.

DK: What?

Ved: I don't want Kanaka, maa left the papers in my name and i am giving you your company back.

DK: Disha i can't belive this, god has given me a great brother. 😛

DK hugs Ved and says:

DK: Thanks brother.

Ved goes from there and says that he is going out.

DK goes towards Disha and says this is the second best day of my life.

Disha: Second? (smiling)😊

DK: the first was marrying you.

Disha smiles and blushes!😳

Disha: You ready DK we have to go to Aai's.

DK: Yes, lets go.

Dk and Disha go to the car and the driver drives them to Aai's.

They get out of the car and hold hands and start to enter together!

Please reply

love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#53

please don't stop here keep on writing

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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

hey

eran brilliant i have not been replying as u wanted to kepe it comment free here but now everyone has done it so i am going to comment and say one word lovely keep them coming

Samy😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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The story is excellent plz continue writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56

Part 26

DK and Disha have just entered together and Aai see's them and smiles and shouts:

Aai: Disha!

Disha runs to Aai and hugs her.

Aai: DK, you have come to.

DK: your, daughter says something i will have to do it.

Disha: Aai, i'll go and make some tea.

Aai: Ok, Beta.

Dk and Aai go to sit on the sofa and disha goes to the kitchen.

Aai: DK, you do keep disha happy don't you?

DK: I love disha, and i will do anything to keep her happy i promise.

Disha comes from the kitchen and says:

Disha: you don't worry Aai, DK keeps me very happy.

Aai: I am happy to hear that beta. You to are happy what more can i ask for.

Short one today, sorry!!!! Got to revise!!!!

love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#57

thanx lot. plz post next part.

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
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nice one plz post the next part of the story

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏good one eran dooo coninuee,,,...........

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 27

Disha comes with the tea and they begin to drink.

Suddenly the phone rings:

Aai goes to pick the phone up and begins to speak:

Aai: Ok, i'm just coming.

Aai puts the phone down and Dk and Disha look at each other in confusion.

Aai: I am really sorry Disha but i will have to go because there is a meeting that i must attend.

Disha: Ok Aai (looking upset)

Aai leaves and Dk puts his arm around disha and she puts her head on his shoulder.

Disha: the only day we had, to spend time with Aai and she gets busy. Lets go home DK.

DK: No, I am going to take my lovely wife out and we can go shopping.

Disha: I'm not in the mood DK, i just want to go home.

DK: As the day goes on your mood should get better, now come on, Please!

Disha: (Smiles) OK Dk, lets go.

Arrive at a shop:

DK: (looking at a yellow and lime coloured sari on a dummy) Suddenly he gets a vision of Disha in this sari smiling at him and goes to touch her face and then hears:

Disha: DK!!! Where are you lost, i've been calling you for ages.

DK wakes up and smiles and says to himself:

DK: I love you so much Disha i see you everywhere.

Disha is looking at him in confusion.

Disha: DK are you listening to me!

DK: Yes, I think you should get this sari .

Disha: Ok, it nice!

Disha and Dk go and buy the sari and leave the shop happy.

Stay tuned, please reply

Love eran!!!!

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