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Posted: 20 years ago
#61

Part 28

They go to a few more shop and then stop to get an ice cream for Disha and then sit in a park to eat it.

Disha: (licking her ice cream) DK do you want a bit?

Dk: Ok, (he licks a bit off) nice ice cream.

DK gets the ice cream and starts eating it.

Disha: DK! 😡

Dk starts to laugh😆

Dk starts to feed Disha the ice cream. Then they get up and go home.

Segail house:

Disha: Dk i'll put dinner on but i'll just put these bags in our room.

DK: No Disha, please put the sari's on and show me.

Disha: Why?

DK: Please (softly)

Disha: Ok, (in a shy voice)

Dk goes to sit on the Sofa.

Disha goes and comes back in the yellow and lime sari which DK had picked. Dk gets up from the sofa and moves closer to disha and walks around her.😉

Disha puts her face down in shyness! 😳

DK: You look loverly, Disha. (Softly)😛

He touches her hair and moves it away from her bare back and slowly touches it, moving his finger down her spin. Disha moves slowly as she is ticklish. He then faces her and touches her face and pulls her towards him and puts his hand in her hair and pushes her head back and gently kisses her neck, disha closes her eyes.

DK then moves her sari so he can touch her stomach and lady D is completly lost in his arms!!😉

Suddenly................

Ved: Brother, bhabi!!!😡

Dk and Disha suddenly part and look out for Ved who has just turned the corner. 😕

Ved: Bhabi, i'm starving please but the food on the table.

Disha: (smiles at DK) Ok, Ved.

Ved: I wasn't interupting anything was I!

Dk: No! Disha was just showing me her new sari.

Ved: (looks at disha) Nice sari, don't you agree brother!

DK: Your right Ved! (With a cheeky smile on his face)😃

Tell me what you think!!

love eran!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#62

hi

very good keep it up.

samy😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#63

Part 29

Disha puts the dinner on the table.

Disha: Ved, DK! Dinner is ready!!

In distance: Ved and DK shout: OK!

Both come to the table.

Ved: Wow! Bhabi this looks good.

They all start to eat.

After dinner, Disha then goes to the kitchen to do the dishes. Dk comes in and holds disha and blows in her ear while she is cleaning the dishes.

Disha: DK, stop it, please, let me get on with my work.

DK: No, I love you and i want to spend time with you.

DK gets upset!

Disha turns round and has wet hands and bubbles on her hands and touches DK's nose and then rubs her nose on his.

Both laugh!!!😆

Disha: Sorry!!! (Dk Smiles)

DK: Disha, i'm back at work tomorrow and i want to spend some time with you.

Disha leaves the dishes and they go to their room and sit on the bed hand in hand.

DK turns disha round so she has her back to him and starts to play with her hair.

Disha: Mummy ji, hasn't called us i hope she is OK.

DK: Disha, it's only been a few days she's fine, Don't worry!

DIsha: OK! Sorry, you know me, i start to worry.

DK laughs, Disha turns round.

Disha: What?

DK: Anyways i have an important meeting tomorrow, i want to get Kanaka back to it's winning ways.

Disha: You will DK, because you are a succesful businessman.

Disha and DK look at each other and smile. .

Next Morning:

Disha: DK, breakfast!

DK: Ok disha!!

Ved and Disha are sitting at the table eating.

DK comes in with a lovely black suit and looking stunning!!😉

Disha: Where are you going DK? Have your breakfast!

DK: Disha i'm getting late.

Disha: At least have your juice!

Disha runs towards DK and feeds him the juice. DK kisses her cheek and says:

DK: Bye, Disha! I love you!

Disha: (shyly) Bye DK!

Disha: DK!

DK turns round and says:

DK: Yes (smiles at disha)

Disha: Shall i bring you your lunch at dinner time.

DK: Yes! That will be great! See you later!!

DK goes and disha stops and smiles and turns round to see Ved looking at her from the table.

Disha: What?

Ved: There's alot of love between you and brother!!!

Disha smiles!😊 (shyly)

stay tuned for what happens in DK's office!!

Love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#64

Disha: Shall i bring you your lunch at dinner time.

😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja1_76

Disha: Shall i bring you your lunch at dinner time.

😆



😆haha...cute😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#66

too good story...keep it up

and waiting 4 your next part😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
#67

hey eran

you r doing an excellent job

keep up the good work

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
#68

Part 30

Kanaka:

Disha arrives at Kanaka with DK's dinner, she arrives at Dk's office to find Sanya!!!😡 DK is sitting in his chair and Sanya is standing in front of him and DK does not look happy. Disha look's at DK.

DK: Disha.......

Disha: What are you doing in my husbands office?

Disha then looks at Dk and Dk gives her a look to say he doesn't know why she is here. 😕

Sanya: I came to congradulate DK about getting his business back and to wish him luck for the future.

Disha then smiles at DK and then looks back towards sanya:

Disha: you do not have to congradulate my husband because i, his wife am there to do that. isn't it DK?

DK smiles at Disha to say yes.

Disha: Now get lost! And in future don't come back here and keep away from my husband!

Sanya leaves angry!!!😡 (Ha, Ha, Ha!!!!!)😆

Disha goes towards Dk and puts the food on his desk.

DK: Disha I........

Disha: I know DK! you don't know why she was here. I trust you DK!!

DK smiles at Disha. She smiles back and moves closer to him and sits on his unhurt leg and puts her arms around him and puts her forehead against his and smiles.

Disha then starts to feed DK.

Disha: how is the food, i made it.

DK: It's.....Ok!

Disha: (shocked) OK!!!

Disha starts to hit him gentley on the chest!!

DK: I'm kidding! my wife's cooking is the best.

Disha: Thank you! (Smiles)

DK: You should come everyday if you will feed me like this!

Disha starts to laugh and feeds him again.

After lunch:

Disha: I'll go now DK, you do your work and ill see you tonight.

Disha turns to leave, Dk grabs her sari.

Disha: DK let go!! I have to go!!

Dk pulls her closer and says:

DK: Don't go! Not until i get a hug.

Disha hugs DK.

DK: And a kiss!

Disha puts her head down and blushes. 😳

DK: on the cheek! Not in the office disha!

Disha kisses him on the cheek and runs out quickly and laughs at the sametime.

DK: Disha! Disha!

DK laughs and smiles!!😆 😊

Segail House evening:

Disha is hanging clothes in the cupboard. DK comes out of know where and says:

DK: Boo!

Disha: (shocked) DK!!!

DK: Sorry! (Disha smiles)

Disha: How was work, and why are you so late?

DK: I'm late because of a meeting and we are going away!

Disha: Where are we going?

DK: Goa! I have a meeting there and then we are going to enjoy ourselves for a few day. Disha i couldn't give you a honeymoon, but i can now!!!

Disha is happy and hugs DK!!!😉

stay tuned

please reply!!!!!!!!!!

love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#69
eran, it is wonderful. Keep on writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
#70

Part 31:

Disha stops huging DK and looks at him.

Disha: Goa! I have heard goa is a nice place.

DK: And romantic!😉

Disha: DK! Be serious! When are we going?

DK: In a few days time so we better start packing.

Disha: But DK....Mummy ji.

DK: Don't worry we'll have to tell maa before we go but she won't mind.

Disha: i will have to tell Aai before i go.

DK: Ok! You tell Aai tomorrow and i'll see if i can get through to maa.

Disha: I can't wait. Anyways DK, what do you want to eat. Ved should be coming back soon.

DK: Let me think, (pulls disha closer) how about YOU!!

Disha: DK!

DK starts to kiss her shoulder and her neck and pulls her towards the bed.

Disha: DK! Let me go Ved should be coming soon.

Ved: Bhabi!!!

Disha gets up and runs towards Ved.

Disha: I'm coming.

Ved: I'm hungary Bhabi.

Disha: I'll just bring it.

stay tuned

love eran!!!

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