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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 34

Disha and Dk go into there room and see that it is a lovely decorated room with rose petals on the bed!!!!😉

Disha is not in a happy mood and is thinking over what Raj said to her.

DK: Disha, what's the matter. Ever since we left Raj you have been quite.

Disha: (Fake Smile) No, DK i have a pain in my head thats all.

DK: Are you sure, Raj didn't say anything did he?

Disha: (not looking at Dk's eyes) No!

DK: Ok! Do you like the room?

Disha: Yes, its really nice. Why don't you go and freshen up and we'll order food.

DK: Ok, i'll just be back (Dk kisses Disha on the cheek!)

DK goes in the bathroom. Disha thinks to herself:

Disha: I don't want to spoil my holiday with you Dk or cause you any harm so i will not tell you anything what Raj said. Bappa give me strenght so i can forget everything and enjoy myself here.

Dk comes out. He hugs disha from behind. The wind is blowing in there faces and disha closes her eyes. They go towards the window and look up at the full moon. DK turns disha round and kisses her forehead gently.

DK: I really love you disha.

Disha hugs him and closes her eyes once again.

Disha: I love you too!!!

Stay tuned, please reply!!!

love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#82
i dont like raj!!!😭 but keep going!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#83

wowwwwwwwww eran just read it allll reall gooddd plz plz plz doo continueeeeee...........wonder what happens in the honey moon suite.......................😉.............😆

dooo coninue ya doing a great job 👏

Keep it up 😊

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
#84

wow. exellecent story. plz continue.

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
#85
NOW DONT STOP THERE KEEP GOING!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Yeah plz carry on writing ur story is excellent

eran thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#87

Part 35:

They stop huging and Disha has tears in her eyes.

DK: What's the matter?

Disha: I love you DK and i am scared of losing you but i need to know one thing.

DK: What?

Disha: What would you hate me for?

DK: I could never hate you disha, i love you.

Disha: DK please answer the question.

DK:ok, I would hate it if you lied to me or kept something from me.

Disha thinking to herself:

Disha: DK i should tell you that your friend is a horrible person and what he said when we arrived, bappa give me strenght so i can tell DK the truth. DK your........

There is a knock at the door. It is Raj.

Raj: Dk open the door.

DK goes towards the door. Disha grabs DK;s arm and says quietly:

Disha: Please don't answer the door DK, (she puts her arms around his neck) this night is for the two of us.

DK: Disha it must be important if he's coming now.

DK goes to open the door.

Raj: Come on DK open the door.

Disha goes to sit on the bed.

DK: Hi Raj what can i do for you.

Raj: Just coming to see if everything is Ok.

DK: Everything is fine, right disha.

Disha smiles at DK.

Raj: How about a quick drink then, just the two of us in the bar. Disha should be tired she can get some sleep.

DK: i don't drink anymore but i'll have a cold drink. Disha you don't mind do you?

Disha: No DK you go, i'm getting tired. I'll see you later.

They go to the bar and half an hour later there is a knock at Disha's room.

Disha: It's about time Dk, i thought you'd never come back.

Disha opens the door shocked to see who it is.

Stay tuned and please reply

love eran!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wwwwwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
eran

keep it upAddSmileyIcon('👏')AddSmileyIcon('👏')AddSmileyIcon('👏')

plz,plz write the next part sooonnnnnnnnnn

waiting..................................
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks everyone, i write next part soon i promise!!!
eran thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 36

Disha is shocked to see Raj😡

Disha: Tum?

Raj: Yes me! Why are you shocked?

Disha: Where is DK?

Raj: Down stairs in the bar waiting for me but i came to see you.

Disha: Get out!!! I don't want to talk to you.

Raj: I like you disha, alot, i have had many woman but you are different, i can't stop thinking about you. (steps closer to disha)

Disha: I am married to DK Segail and i can't think about anyone else. Get out before i call DK!!!!!

Disha picks up the phone!! Raj moves closer and takes the phone from her. He touches her bare shoulder! Disha screams!!!!

Suddenly:

DK: RAJ!!!!!!!!! (echos) 😡

Disha runs towards DK and hugs him and then moves behind him.

Raj: what?, we always use to do this remember, swaping girls, whats changed?

DK:I'm not that DK Segails anymore and how dare you even look at my wife.

Disha: I wanted to tell you before he told me about your past when we came and he said he..........

DK: I know disha, i heard everything!

Disha: DK lets go from here, we can stay in another hotel.

DK: DK Segail, does not let people off that easy disha!

DK moves closer to Raj!!! Disha is shocked!!!😲

stay tuned

love eran!!!!

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