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Posted: 20 years ago
#31

Part 20

Disha is seen to be packing her stuff to move into Dk's room! 😉 Pori comes in Disha's room and says:

Pori: You must be happy disha, after getting your husband back.

Disha: Yes, and Pori thank you!

Pori is shocked and says:

Pori: What?

Disha: I thank you pori because if it wasn't for you anything could have happen to mummy ji. i want to give you something.

Pori: What, do you want to give me? (sarcasticly)

Disha hands her a contract for a movie.

Pori: What is this?

Disha: A contract for a movie, which i hope you will take.

Pori is happy and hugs Disha.

Pori: Thank you Disha, you a wonderful person.

Dk out of the blue:

DK: She is, even after everything you have done to her she still helps you.

Pori: I should go, and thank you.

Dk moves towards Disha and hugs and kisses her on her forehead!!!😉

Disha: Will you not help me move my stuff in your room?

DK: There is a quicker way to solve this problem?

Disha: What is that?

DK: You just come for now and we'll move your stuff tomorrow!! Then i will have you to myself!

Disha: DK, can you ever be serious!

DK:Not when i'm with you!!!

Dk grabs disha and takes her to his room and closes the door!!

We hear:

Disha: DK!!!!😉

please, please reply and tell me what you think!!!!

love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#32
it very nice keep it up 👏 👏 👏

waiting 4 next bit

and be quick because i can't wait
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Posted: 20 years ago
#33

yes it is very good eran.

keep up the good work and please write more stories. I love them.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#34

Part 21

Next Morning:

Disha is in her dressing gown and has just washed her hair.

Dish: DK, time to get up!

DK: No Disha! 5 minutes more!

Disha goes up to Dk and splashes her hair all over Dk! And laughs!😆 Dkgrabs disha and goes on top of her.

DK: (Disha still laughing) Oh! So you find that funny!

Dish: Yes! 😆

Dk: I'll show you whats funny!

Dk starts tickling disha!😉

Dish: No Dk, im sorry!

DK stops, and starts to look at disha! He starts to come closer and closer towards her face but suddenly...........Disha pulls him off her and runs to the other side of the room and starts to laugh again!😆

Dk: Disha come here!!

Dish: No Dk!! Mummy ji will come!

DK: Let them come DK Sehgail is not afraid of romancing with his wife infront of anyone!!

Dish: No, but you are afraid of me!!

DK: Really, Prove it!!

Disha comes forward and starts to play fight with Dk!!😉

Dk: are so you want a boxing match!!

Dish: Yes!!!!

Dk grabs disha by her hand and pulls her closer!!

DK: I win!!!😉

Both come close until there faces are not shown!!!

Suddenly there is a knock at the door and sum comes in, both come apart and stand away from each other.

Sum: beti, aren't you ready yet?

Dish: I was just coming mummy ji. (Quickly looks at Dk who is looking at her)😉

Please reply!!!

love eran!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#35

hey eran

'great job

once again

keep it up

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
#36
this is a good one plz post the next part soon 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#37

Part 22:

Disha is in a lime colored sari is walking towards mummy ji where DK is sitting next to his mother. He looks up at Disha who is smiling at the two of them.

Disha: Mummy ji, is there anything for me to do?

Sum: No beti, nothing to do.

Ved comes and sits next to Dk.

Ved: Good morning everyone! (everyone smiles)

Sum: Disha,

Disha: Jee Mummy ji?

Sum: I am going away for a few days to a temple to prey for the happiness of this family, it could take me a few days or even a week.

Disha: I will come with you, mummy ji.

Sum: No beti, if you come with me what will happen to these two.

DK and Ved look at each other as to say what? Disha starts to laugh.😆

Disha: When will you be going, mummy ji, i will pack your things for you.

Sum: In a few hours.

Disha: i'll go and pack your things for you.

Sum: Ok!

Disha leaves to go and pack and Sum goes to the kitchen.

DK: Ved i'll just be back.

Ved: No need brother, i know where your going!!😉

DK looks back with a cheesy smile on!!😃

please reply!!

love eran!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#38

Disha is in Sum's room and is taking some clothes from the cupboard and is placing them on the bed. DK comes up behind her and puts his arms around her waist.

Disha: DK, when will you never learn there is a time and place for everything.

DK: Ok! (He lets go)😕

Then smiles a cheeky grin😃 and holds her again,😆

DK: Your right Disha, i'll never learn!!!😆

Disha: DK!! (She laughs also)

Disha starts to put the clothes in the suitcase with Dk's strong arms around her waist. 😉

Sum suddenly:

Sum: Sunny!!!!

DK lets go of Disha quickly!

Sum: Your are here, i've been looking for you everywhere!

DK: What's the matter maa?

Sum: These papers have just been sent, who are they for? (Sum hands the papers to DK)

DK: They are for Ved, i'll give them to him.

Sum: OK! Disha is the packing done?

Disha: Yes mummy ji.

Sum: I think it is time for me to go.

Sum goes to the front door and disha & Dk follow.

DK puts the papers on the sitting room table then goes to stand next to Disha, outside.

DK: Please take care maa.

Disha: Yes mummy ji and if you need anything then please call me.

Sum: Don't worry, i'll be fine.

Sum goes to sit in the car and the driver drives off with Sum waving. Disha waves back and smiles. The car disappears in the distance.

DK: Looks like we have time for romancing now!😉 There is no Ved in the house and just the two of us!

Disha slowly moves away from Dk and goes to the direction of the garden. Dk starts moving towards her!

Disha: No Dk!! Not now please!

DK: You can't run from me now, Disha!!😉

Disha starts to run and Dk quickens his pace! Disha runs to the garden and stops because shes out of breath. She hides behind the bush and starts to laugh!!😆

Disha: You'l not be able to find me here! (She says to herself)

DK: Disha where are you? Disha!!

Disha still laughing!!!

Dk Looks around and sees that there is something lime coloured in the bush and starts to walk towards it, it is Disha! Disha notices he's coming towards her and starts to run but gets her pelo caught in the bush.

DK: See even god doesn't want us to part.😛

Dk releses her pelo and grabs disha closer and pulls her out of the bush!!!

Disha: DK you know something, your very naughty!😛

DK: I know i am!!😉

Both sit on the grass!

DK starts to kiss her neck and bare shoulder. Disha closes her eyes!!❤️

Disha: Dk, can we go to Aai's today, together?

Dk is not really paying attention but still mucking around with Disha.

Disha opens her eyes and says:

Disha: DK! Are you listening to me!!

DK starts to listen.

DK: What did you say?

Disha: can we go to Aai's!?😡 ( In angry tone)

Dk: Ok, we will go later!😊 (Disha is happy)

DK lies disha on the floor of the grass and contiues with what he was doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉😛😳

Please reply!!!

Love eran!!!!

rang thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#39

oh i can keep reading ur story for hurs, please keep writing. this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better than the actual td.

rang👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
#40
great story eran. please don't stop here keep writing.

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