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Posted: 20 years ago
#21

hey eran

great story better than the original.

waiting 4 the next part

be quick plzz

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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
eran i don't know what to say 👏
the story is going greatly.😉
sometimes i get confused abt the update and the story
i really wish that this would happen really in the serial it would be so fantastic
i love the story
keep writing
i used to read
i am reading
i will be reading
a fan of ur story.😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23

its grat story. wait for next part

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
#24

GREAT GREAT STORY

KEEP IT UP

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Posted: 20 years ago
#25

😃Part 18

They reach home and both go to there seprate rooms. Disha is smiling and thinking of the evening she has had with DK and DK is thinking the same!

Next Morning:

Disha is in the kitchen making breakfast. She puts the breakfast on the table and while she is doing this she heres:

"Hello beautiful" She turns round to see DK smiling at her with a rose in his hand. Out of the blue Sumitra turns up and disha hides the rose.

Disha: good morning mummy ji.

Sum: good morning beta.

Pori turns up and sits next to DK.😡

Pori: good morning everyone.

Sum smiles at pori. Suddenly Ved comes back from dehli and finds them at the table. Disha is shocked incase Ved says anything that will tell the truth about DK and Dish being husaband and wife.

Dish: Ved will you please come and sign some papers for me in the other room.

Dish gets up and quickly takes ved to her room and tells him the truth about everything. Ved is shocked,

Ved: this is not right disha you are the daughter in law of the family not pori. I will tell badi maa everything, nothing will happen to her.

Dish: No ved this is not right, you can't tell mummy ji anything until she's all right. Please ved.

Ved: Ok! but i don't agree with this.

Dish: have you had breakfast?

Ved: No,

Dish: will you not eat breakfast with your bhabi?

Both laugh!!😆

Ved: Ok, lets go!

DK see's this from a distance and starts to think to himself that there is nothing for me to worry about between ved and disha's relationship because they are just friends. 😃 (One misunderstanding finished)!!

After Breakfast disha goes outside for a walk and starts to think how long will it have to be before mummy ji can be told the truth. A hand is shown behind her that is touching her face.

Dish: DK!

DK: How did you know it was me?

Dish: i can tell you are there even if i don't see you. 😉

DK: really!! i'm impressed!!

both laugh!!😆

while they are talking! Aai has just come and see sumitra in the sitting room and goes to talk to her. 😕 Disha does not know that Aai has come. Ved see's this and starts to move forward to stop Aai but then stops himself and thinks:

Ved: should i stop Aai, will it really be a bad thing!Disha will then get the respect she deserves from this family,she has suffered alot, enough is enough!!!!

tell me what you think!

love eran!!!😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#26

😊 thats realll godd eran doo continuuueeeeeeee 😃

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
#27

hey

this is excellent

keep it up

love kp

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Posted: 20 years ago
#28

loved it please continue!

yours but phir bhi ,

kisse_ki_nahin3

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Posted: 20 years ago
#29

I really loved it!! I can't wait till the next part!!!👏👏

Edited by divyagirl - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30

Part 19:

Recap: Ved stops himself from letting Aai talk to Sum.

Aai: how are you Sumitra ji?

Sum: I am fine now, i am sorry i do not recognise you?

Aai: i am disha's mother.

Sum: have you come to collect her?

Aai: No, this is her house she can come home when ever she wants.

Sum: I do not understand how is this Disha's house?😕

Aai: Dk and disha are married.

Sum: what? My daughter in law is Pori not disha!😡

Ved out of the blue:

Ved: No Badi maa disha is the daughter in law of this family not pori.

Sum: what are you saying ved?

Ved: it's true badi maa, we couldn't tell you because the doctors said that we couldn't let you have any more shocks, which is why we couldn't tell you the truth.

DK: (out of the blue) This is true maa!

Disha comes up behind DK and looks at Sum and then looks down to the floor. (sad expression on her face!😭)

Sum: Disha come here! (In angry tone)

DK: But..?

Sum: Sunny, don't say anything!

Disha starts walking towards Sum and when she is close enough she puts her head down waiting for what will happen next.

Sum: Why, didn't you tell me bahu?

Disha looks up in confusion, Sum hugs disha close and crys soft tears.

Disha: I'm sorry Mummy ji! Please forgive me!😭

Sum: I'm the one that should be sorry, why didn't you tell me earlier?

Disha: Sorry!😭

Sum: Sunny, come here!!

DK comes forward,

Sum: Wait here!

Sum leaves, then comes back with something in her hand!

Sum: Put this sindoor on my bahu!!! Sunny, It will make me happy!😛

DK takes the sindoor and puts it on disha, when putting it on disha closes her eyes and then opens them again. DK then takes Disha in his arms in front of everyone. Everyone is shocked but laugh!!!😆

Pori is watching this from a distance and is not happy!!!😡

stay tuned for next bit and please reply!!!!

love eran!!!!

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