*ENTWINED* RTMC ff-chapter 13 pg 43 pg 43 - Page 5

Originally posted by: pranita1202

rashu ko partner mil gaya

hamari rashu toh sooper possesive hai

u know in samantha's dharam veer version ff prem kahaniya

rashu was sooper angry wen annaya hugged her friend played by"ashish kapoor-cgm"

bachi bhi na mujhe toh elder bro or best friend ka feel aaya but hamari rashu ko kaun samjhaye after all RTMC ke pyaar me pagal jo hai

Originally posted by: pranita1202

rashu ko partner mil gaya

hamari rashu toh sooper possesive hai...n aap bhi ho mere liye...pranita di.. :D

u know in samantha's dharam veer version ff prem kahaniya

rashu was sooper angry wen annaya hugged her friend played by"ashish kapoor-cgm"

bachi bhi na mujhe toh elder bro or best friend ka feel aaya but hamari rashu ko kaun samjhaye after all RTMC ke pyaar me pagal jo hai

Originally posted by: disha15

🤣 rashu maarnewaali hai phir toh mereko 😛 par kahaani mein twist toh banda hai na 😛

thank you! 🤗

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii
edit wil take time.. sry again

~~EDITED~~
maine ek bhott bada cmnt lkikha tha lappy main.. but voh post nahi hoa../.. n galti se voh saara ka saare( combined wid cmnt of shikar n lov a mistake..) sab cut kiya tha...
achanak se net ka cneection hatt gya..
phirr lapp restrt kiya. den..
sab udd gya..
but dil se kah rhi hun.. sachi main bada cmnt tha..
usmain dheersaa ri advait k liye galiyaan thi..
S@@LKA, k@min@..
hw dare he be wid hruvi like dat. hoe rude. a animal , sachi main main..
voh scene bhoot beautifully likha h..
sachi main jaan bhari h usmain..
lovely creations of visuals..

god, kitna dari hoi thi dhraa...


yahi tho dhraa.. aakhein h yah button...
tumhe prithvi nahi dekha kya..
koi ho voh advait... prithvi se jyada handsome.. mann hi nhi sakti..

:P

chalo.. ab prithvi ne agar guarantee le li h ki sab thikk karke raha ga tho, i m a bit relaxed.. only a bit...

dese two lover need each others love,...sirf pyaar hi pyaar..


n tum ek jhappi paa lo.. u r wondoful...
lov u

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

wowww disha u write really well kahan vhupi thi ab tak :P
awesome FF just read all 3 parts (y)

do pm me :)

Originally posted by: pranita1202

mere samnewali khidki mein ek greek god rehta

afsos yeh hai woh hume tapne ki bajaye (instead of

fawning me) coldplay sunta rehta hai

lights out

loved their interaction

the way prince held his princess

last part was intriguing

Originally posted by: sparksfly

👏wow...conzos 2 d new RTMC ff !! 🥳

its fabulus!!!

luv it !!!

Prithvi n Dhruvi...wow..gr8 names!! 😃

luv d banner!!! its wow.. ⭐️

Prithvi d greek God nevr had a gf!!!!?? he must luv Dhruvi a LOT!!😉

uve written an amzng charactr sketch!!! superb description!! zodiac sign..to choise of clothes...to typical xprssns...!! perfect!!! 👏

dey r SO cute n perfect 4 each othr!!

luv their fights!!

Dhra...cute name! 😃

dey luv each othr a LOT!!!

parents r also gr8!!!

gr8 bondngs d families hav!!

diiary...wow...ye sab jo lika hai ab usse keh bhi do...😆

luvd ur writng...fabulus!! luvd d pun...n d witt...n d sarcasm!! 👏

part 2-

oooh hooo... Dhra Prithvi ke view ko admire kar rahi hai!! 😆

kaash aisa neighbor mere paas bhi hota!!!! 😉

shes SO lost in him!!! 😳

luvd their nok-jhok...

kya super cute scene tha...Prithvi holdng her...😍

beautifully descrbd...by u...really like d sciency thng u include..⭐️

but ye "he"kon hai?? how is he rel8td 2 dhra??😔

kya huva ???

whos d jerk??? 😡

u also luv torturng us wid d mystry...beechare hum..our hapiness amzng ff writrs ki mercy pe hain..

part 3

wow...just wow...ure gr8!! ⭐️

fabulusly written ...d music...d visuals ur words were cr8tng...were superb!! 👏 ⭐️

i feel lik im in anothr world...

like i can c Dhraa on d buildng...feel her pain...reliv her flashbacks...!!!! ure superb!! 👍🏼 ⭐️

Beechari Dhruvi...she fell 4 sum1...luvd him a LOt...only 2 get her heart broken...by d devil...😭

d flashbacks were painful...So much shes suffered...😭

really lik d way u include d zodiac charactrs..

Poor Prithvi...he luvs her wid all his heart n soul...2 c her in dat pain...cant imagine...😭

damn dat Advait...d 🤬. 4 his lust he destroyd her...😡

how culd he??? 😡

when a girl no longer belivs in fairy tale endings...it shows how much pain ..n betrayal she been thru..

Prithvi...i luv u even more...(dont noe how dats possble..) 4 being u...❤️

dis part was beautifully written...ure amzng!! srsly!!⭐️⭐️👏

uve written a dark story wid quite sum light...

do continue soon...luv u...n dis awesum story...🤗

P.S.- now d banner seems to fit perfectly...its 2 perfect!!!