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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
A very well written OS. šŸ‘

No spelling mistakes, no slang, good english, made it very easy to read for me. šŸ‘šŸ¼

Great job šŸ˜›

Please add me to your PM list for when you write more. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Anamika100

I just discovered your writing recently and love your work for the mature content in terms of emotions, relationships and physical. You have a fan in me.


She married him due to pressure by her loved ones and is bent on punishing him, herself and her father for it. Why does she think he wanted to marry her? Does she not realize that he loves her? Has he not told her? The line below makes me think he loves her...plus his sheer focus is on her at all times...or so it seems.

"He had nothing to give her; she had everything and what he had to offer she did not want."

I am sure this will be revealed later. Look forward to more.


I am glad you like it... please post your comments, it is encouraging
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Caught up!! OK this is really different - good different :)

Marriage is not always peaches and cream. There are things to be worked on and not talking never helps. There is clearly a load of unresolved issues between these two but at least they connect physically - not the best starting point but a starting point nonetheless!

Glad to see she wants to give them a chance.

Will wait to see how this goes on!

Cheers
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
really great update...loved how Khushi is finally giving him a chance!!😊

<3 Barun <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Wow this is truly amazing!! Just read all the parts! Plz pretty plz pm me when u update!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
WOW! Nice. Khushi finally taking the initiative to give their relation ship another chance.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: meera30

Caught up!! OK this is really different - good different :)


Marriage is not always peaches and cream. There are things to be worked on and not talking never helps. There is clearly a load of unresolved issues between these two but at least they connect physically - not the best starting point but a starting point nonetheless!

Glad to see she wants to give them a chance.

Will wait to see how this goes on!

Cheers

Another attempt to write something different...all Arnav & Khushi...but hopefully different from the other one I am writing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Was so looking fwd to ur update... Its really nice:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Oh thats a wonderful thing am glad Khushi decided to address the issue and not be blinded by the sexiness that is ASR 😃
Why wont he talk , why is he hung up on being physical only but i guess that's a girl thing all this talking😳 ... or is it something else?
I am glad Khushi stands up for herself - something as simple as the last sentence!šŸ‘šŸ¼

"Arnav Singh Raizada, move it, feed me and then we will think about your……hunger."


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Posted: 13 years ago
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They may be physically attuned to each other perfectly ... but Khushi realises that to get this marriage to last they have to be emotionally and mentally attuned too ... at the end of the day everything does not boil down to just sex ...

Loved ...

"I am hungry for you, so we address my need first then we deal with yours."

"No, I have not eaten and we are going to get something to eat and NOW."

"Sweetheart, shall we kiss at least and then leave, please."

"Arnav Singh Raizada, move it, feed me and then we will think about your……hunger."

Perfect ... hahahaha


Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago

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