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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Inked
As others have said, I'm happy to see this coming together and her decision to give her marriage a chance. But, I feel a gap between Ch3 and Ch4. Perhaps that is intentional on your part...

I found the below line especially impactful, and portentous too.
Look forward to reading Ch5 when its ready.
Maya

He had nothing to give her; she had everything and what he had to offer she did not want.

Impulsive is what she is ...her she is acting before she thinks...so it comes as a surprise...you also guessed it right...like the serial IPKKND the gaps will be filled in due course.

I liked that line too, giving is not about materialistic things, there is a lot, more than love also.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Oh! That was excellent! Arnav's surprise and Khushi's will to make things better for them, to not to punish herself or Arnav any more because of a fight she can't even give a name to seems like a good decision to me. Good job! :)

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serialmaniac

@serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

wow...khushi fianlly decided to make her marraige work...good start

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Waiting to read more about what are these two actually feeling, particularly Arnav. A sentiment that stood out was "He had nothing to give her; she had everything and what he had to offer she did not want." Waiting to know more.

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

i'm so happy 2 noe dat c finally decided 2 give lov a chance!lovd d update!

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

it was hot n amazin...

happy tat shes givin their relationship a chance...

tanx 4 d pm...update soon

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Hi there! Read all the 4 chapters in one go. Love everything about your story from its pace, characterization and the set up. Really unique and creative. Would love to read more and if its not too much of a hassle, kindly do PM me when you update. :)

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

smart decision on her part

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

I just discovered your writing recently and love your work for the mature content in terms of emotions, relationships and physical. You have a fan in me.

She married him due to pressure by her loved ones and is bent on punishing him, herself and her father for it. Why does she think he wanted to marry her? Does she not realize that he loves her? Has he not told her? The line below makes me think he loves her...plus his sheer focus is on her at all times...or so it seems.

"He had nothing to give her; she had everything and what he had to offer she did not want."

I am sure this will be revealed later. Look forward to more.

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 years ago