Raizada and Sons - Thread 1

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: meera30
I loved, absolutely loved this part

The passion and sex is simmering between them and yet there is the hope of something lasting, deep and meaningful. So refreshing to read about real issues. I can see this happening in marriages that have been arranged, sometimes without the couple having any real base to work off of.

Perfect pace and just the right touch of emotion and light hearted playfulness!

Brilliant!

Thanks Meera...yes, I too like believable characters at least closer to life...the over the top ones are bugging. Also it is not always about Arnav and Khushi and them either staring at each other or falling on each other.

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

gosh this is different...u r great writer..the sheer companionship they found in themselves with a neverending promise to support each other keeping aside their differences and cuming to talk about it with one another...gr88!

seriosuly the hunger line did crack me up...amazing work!

beautiful ff...i read all the parts!

this journey to love is gonna be intriguing and has got me hooked!

realistic chain of events is what you maintained that i appreciate the most!

thnx for the pm!