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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

A beautiful update...I think Khushi is pregnant...Will it disturb the dynamics between Arnav and khushi?.Thanks for the PM

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

the way u present arnavs n kushis relationship s just amazin...

kushi not willin to give d bangles to anjali n arnav understandin tat...

n arnav cnt keep his hands off he...hes very naughty...

i actually thought she was pregnant...

u ryt very well kalyani...

amazin update...

tanx 4 d pm...

continue soon

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: Inked
I enjoyed your writing, as always---your narrative is so linear and flows seamlessly, no big shifts and glaring lacunas--and the dialogue is real and natural.
And, perhaps as you intended us to, I felt as disconnected from Khushi today, as she was disconnected from everyone she engaged with in the episode. She seemed cold towards Anjali (dare I say, mean?) and unresponsive towards Arnav. I look forward to reading more about what is oppressing her mind. But, I still missed her warmth. Especially when Arnav is all charm and warmth and attentiveness.

Loved this line:
Now if you ladies have done admiring and planning ways of extracting jewelry from us that you clearly have too much off, care to feed us?" he asked all the while watching her wife.

She is still living in guilt and is not mean on the contrary she is thinking of Arnav and no one else. She does say she wants to give him a child which would mean a lot for her. Her not wanting to share even a piece of jewelry that he has given shows no disregard to Anjali just highlights her feelings towards a gift given by her husband.

She is weighed down by the changing dynamics of her relationship with Arnav; however she is warming up to him.

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Great update!!

Hope bra situation isn't misunderstood

Loving the change in their relationship!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Their relationship is definitely maturing if they can talk about this topic and that too in an adult manner and even discuss disappointments with each other.

Is Anjali clingy in your story as well? Why can't she ask her hubby for jewellery?

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Loved the update!

Like the way Khushi is opening up to Arnav...and I'm glad Arnav heard her out and voiced his opinion..

Is she already pregnant since you mentioned the bra tightening..

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Loved Khushi's possessiveness towards the bangle given to her by Arnav ... totally agree with what she is feeling ... I too would feel the same ... it is a gift of love and can't be shared by everyone be it even Anjali ...

Khushi seems preoccupied in this chapter ... is so keen to carry their relationship a step ahead by having his baby ...

Loved the update ...

Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#378

He really reads her very well and the patience he demonstrates as a husband is good. They are increasingly able to talk frankly about their relationship and life...you have shown the evolution in their relationship beautifully. If she is pregnant and when she realizes it I hope she is talks to him about it.