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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

Did you mention about Viren earlier coz i don't recall actually. He seems a typical jealous n stupid cousin who just wants to go ahead of his brothers at any cost.
About Suraj i really don't know what to say. He seems a gray shed character who is neither positive nor like extreme negative. I liked that he accepts Arnav's love for Khusi and after seeing them at party knows that they are happy with each other.
Don't know what plans he has for future but yeah love to see him more..

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Anika

@kalo_megh

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

a very interesting update!! new character with new twists...im loving it!!😊

<3 Barun <3

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@PersieV

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Just read all the chapters
Loving thiS

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Hey ya I just read ur ff it was quite interesting
Like you even I hv interest in politics and this was written beautifully plzz do pm me whenever u update would love to read more

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

You portray The changing relationship between Arnav and Khushi so well! Him understanding her unwillingness to share the jewellery, their talk...so sweet!

I have a feeling Anjali may spell some troubles soon and that Khushi is already pregnant with the bra tightening and all. Hope it's a one off because they do seem to need more time as an in love husband and wife before a new membe is added to their lives...

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
You portray The changing relationship between Arnav and Khushi so well! Him understanding her unwillingness to share the jewellery, their talk...so sweet!

I have a feeling Anjali may spell some troubles soon and that Khushi is already pregnant with the bra tightening and all. Hope it's a one off because they do seem to need more time as an in love husband and wife before a new membe is added to their lives...

I love reading your comments...it's like you are actually watching this play before your eyes and reacting...find it really cute...thanks

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

it is so cute to see how arnav can't keep his hands off her..

their discussion about kid was interesting.. but when she said she couldn't fit in the bra.. i thought she is already pregnant..

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710617

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

This is very well written I like it..though my guess is khushi is pregnant...

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

I enjoyed your writing, as always---your narrative is so linear and flows seamlessly, no big shifts and glaring lacunas--and the dialogue is real and natural.

And, perhaps as you intended us to, I felt as disconnected from Khushi today, as she was disconnected from everyone she engaged with in the episode. She seemed cold towards Anjali (dare I say, mean?) and unresponsive towards Arnav. I look forward to reading more about what is oppressing her mind. But, I still missed her warmth. Especially when Arnav is all charm and warmth and attentiveness.

Loved this line:

Now if you ladies have done admiring and planning ways of extracting jewelry from us that you clearly have too much off, care to feed us?" he asked all the while watching her wife.