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Posted: 13 years ago
Suraj a very well written character.. He is almost obsessed to khushi but not to the point to hurt her..

Loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
what should i say to you i am wondering your ff blew me off it is 5 am here am i am reading your f.awe some blossom yra..decent with minimla adult content it is awe some plz add me in your pm kist continue soonish plzzz

your story is so unique ..man great cncnept and most improtantly the wya you write yur story excellent..
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the PM

awesome update

Oh Lord Suraj is lusting after Khushi.

Arnav and Khushi have now started their relationship, please don't let
anything or anyone come between them
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ooh! I was waiting for the politics angle to play itself out. And it has played itself outin what spectacular fashion I might add. Have to say Suraj intrigues me. Waiting to read where you steer this story next. Nicely done! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Inked

A worthy adversary! I supplied my own dramatic background score. It embarrasses me to read about inept villains--so I thank you for creating one who will be a joy to watch. Something tells me he has more developed schemes than introducing a scorpion into the house! And, I look forward to seeing how your Arnav rises to this--his game will have to improve. We've seen his strut--now I want his swagger.


With each episode I see more clearly the architecture---the various elements which will contribute to the conflict/drama. You have everyone and everything placed exactly so. So many characters with all their personal longings and desires. The stage is set. You know me: I make no demands on my Sisters---but I NEED to see Arjun soon and judge him for myself. I beg for a glimpse of him before the week ends.

I hope you are aware that you're creating a television show, here. I prophesy in your future more burnt dinners and more neglect of loved ones! You belong to us now!

Maya

What a dramatic background it is!!! Please take over the actual serial; I am sure I will enjoy it tremendously.

The only thought I had in mind when I was writing about Suraj, was how he will be everything Shyam is not. The appearance for me matters little but the mannerisms do. My antagonist is no silly boy who would resort to scorpion stings or bolts removed to cause accidents; he has way too much class for that (so I hope ;) as always).

The need to flesh out characters was essential I thought as other than Arnav, Khushi and Anjali; most of the characters are different from the show. I am aware my task gets more laborious with each update, but I like it so the writer's block is a bit far away.

Arjun, is coming soon…..the television show being created is taking time, I want it to be a daily but my ability to write restricts it to a biweekly.

Have I ever said I like you, a lot….I like you a lot…….

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Posted: 13 years ago
New character - Suraj Tripathi, waiting to see the role he plays...seems like a powerful enough man...will Khushi's father be able to thwart his advances & evil plans i wonder!
A lil confused has this character accepted the fact she has married and is only after her father now or he is still persistent in getting Khushi back?
Waiting to see how all this unfolds.

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Posted: 13 years ago
I love it more and more. I am a sucker for romance, politics and drama and you have managed to weave all three into a beautiful tapestry.

Also like the style of showing things thru Suraj and Virens perspective, thus introducing new characters and their stands. Arjun now has been seen thru Khushi, Indira, Viren and Suraj's eyes. Also saw Arnav and Khushi thru Suraj's eyes. What I found the most interesting was, that Suraj confirmed my thoughts that Arnav loved Khushi...I am just not sure if she knows and knows how much. He also thinks she loves Arnav. Does she know that either?

Suraj is keeping close eye on Khushi...where they know what jewelry she wanted to buy and what land she wants for orphanage etc...this has the potential for good or evil depending on what Suraj intends to do and how many people will be harmed along the way. I so far found it very creepy that he is trying to fulfill her desires. No stranger has that right over a woman...specially someone else's woman.

Now I am curious about Arnav. When will we learn more about him?

You are setting the stage brilliantly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing story, completely different...
Can't wait to see what trouble Surat stirs up..
My heart really broke for indira. Arjun is such a jerk!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Suraj...a villain...but seems to have interesting shades that makes him more than simply a bad man...and he is efficient with what he is doing...what he feels for Khushi is genuine and raises him above the run of the mill baddies. A valuable addition into the cauldron of love and politics.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika100

I love it more and more. I am a sucker for romance, politics and drama and you have managed to weave all three into a beautiful tapestry.


Also like the style of showing things thru Suraj and Virens perspective, thus introducing new characters and their stands. Arjun now has been seen thru Khushi, Indira, Viren and Suraj's eyes. Also saw Arnav and Khushi thru Suraj's eyes. What I found the most interesting was, that Suraj confirmed my thoughts that Arnav loved Khushi...I am just not sure if she knows and knows how much. He also thinks she loves Arnav. Does she know that either?

Suraj is keeping close eye on Khushi...where they know what jewelry she wanted to buy and what land she wants for orphanage etc...this has the potential for good or evil depending on what Suraj intends to do and how many people will be harmed along the way. I so far found it very creepy that he is trying to fulfill her desires. No stranger has that right over a woman...specially someone else's woman.

Now I am curious about Arnav. When will we learn more about him?

You are setting the stage brilliantly.

I think you mean Arjun and not Arnav, right?

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