Two Hearts-One Heartbeat ~A ManVeer SS~ Note on Pg50

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snowdream

@snowdream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

gr8 da👏...iam really disappointed hearing the news of abrupt end of DEK......let Sony and PH go to hell...😡

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rimpa

@allseasonrain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

you made me cry...manyata's pov is jst awesome.sooo much pain nd such intense love...yes they are destined...and destined people wait for each other till the last breath...i just wish sometime that in dek manyata recognised her true love some months earlier.then we could have a proper ending atleast...it seems like everything is rushing...

my blabering will never stop.come to yopur ss.it's fabulous.pls continue and pm me...

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Awesome. I really luved it. Can u add me to your pm list?

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

To all my dearest friends for liking my effort...I can't describe how happy i feel whenever i read you're comments. It always makes my day😳😳😳. Hope from now on, all of us will enjoy the journey of Two Hearts-one Heartbeat...and though Dekha Ek Khwaab is ending tomorrow, it will forever remain in our hearts
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Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

PART - 1

"Catch me if you can!!"

She ran out of the main door and straight into garden, giggling as he chased her.

Uday: What? You think I can't get you?

Manyata: Mere bol bachchann, pehle pakarke dikhao!

She rounded the corner and ran around the cabana, Uday closing on her, their laughter ringing in the evening air. She looked back to see him grinning crookedly at her, and her heart skipped a beat. Not that she'd let him know, of course.

Uday: Hum Rajwaadein hain Princess, jo hum kehte hainwoh karke dikhaate hain.

Manyata: Shayad tum bhool rahein ho Uday, Rajwaadi toh main bhi hoon.

Quickly, she slipped behind the rod-chair; he was on the other side of the table. They went round the sitting arrangement in circles, she threw cushions at him, trying to slow him down while he ducked, then threw them back at her, laughing, shouting and giggling now and then, behaving as kids and not like the royals they were. Maybe that's what made their bond so special and unique; with each other, they could just be the way they wanted to...no family or acquaintances; no expectations and no reserves, no charades, no royal-ship. Just two normal people in love.

Normally, if she was upto it, no one could beat her in running. She remembered that in Ludhiyana, they used to call her "Raajdhaani express" for her speed. But whoever wanted to outrun him. She claimed that he wouldn't be able to catch her..but of course, what is said isn't always meant. As she bounced back into the lawn, all she wished for was him to catch her...

The dream had felt so real, so vivid. As if a scenes was playing in front of her eye. Part of her knew why. After all, it wasn't just a dream. It was a memory. It was a moment...a moment spent with him.
She opened her eyes slowly. The dreams were back, she thought with a smile. It had bothered her a little when she had stopped getting dreams of him. She was afraid he was slipping away...but now, she felt better. Happy. Slowly getting up, she stretched, remembering her dream. Automatically, the smile widened.

Still wishing Khasmanu-khaane...still waiting..

continued...

Yaaron I'm really...really,really sorry for the short length of this update. Trust me, Part1 is not at all only this much, its longer. But don't know why, my laptop is being a pain right now, and I can't seem to complete. So, I'll update part1 some time later today, as soon as I can😳😳. Hope you like this much.

Pleas hit the "like" botton if you've liked, and do comment😊😊.
Lots and lots of Love
Oyshee
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Edited by ...Oyshee... - 11 years ago

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Loved the update. Its sooo short pls try n update soon.

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757315

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

wonderful and awesome really interesting but super short please update soon and thanks for the pm

Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Hey Oyshee
well this comment is after reading ur prologue i tried to post it before bt my net didnt allow to😭 the page wasnt opening properly so hve posted now
ya ur right it hurts even to write it*sigh* *sigh* ... i agree with whteva u said its right that v loved em togetha n v r sad n disappointed bt that doesnt allow us to go on n say anything abt em... its not right its their personal lifes n they should b the ones to decide whats best for it v can only wish for em... I really wish for em to b togetha again cuz they looked so good n cute togetha ek dum made for each otha😳 bt hats of to em for always giving us awesome scenes as manveer & still giving us so good n intense scenes as manveer that it didnt look likely i m glad that they r still good friends really happy abt that they hvnt got any bitter feelings against each other... ya ur right thinkin of it makes me🤢 as well... got same feelings its as u said same what i hve been feelin... ya lets enjoy em😊... ya really wish for DEK2 ur not only alone a hopeless optimistic😆 i m with ya in that😉👍🏼... dont b sorry u didnt bore at all u said right...
abt the SS U call this lame O come one yar that was jst awesome... loved it... loved how u portrayed the nature in start really loved the start u took u wrote it pretty good... awww the starting scene bring back the memories of their 1st meeting sigh its been so long u made me remember... good times... so she goes to that point daily n that too at that time sits at same spot so sweet n touching... manyata's thoughts feelings she wants to convey to him u wrote em so beautifully so heart touching😳 really fab👏 i jst so so loved it its like coming straight from heart... so udays alive n in some hospital seems he had quite a bad accident n also has been in comma so no one knows his identity there n also all in raj mahal thinks he's dead... awesome start u took eager to read more... u say thnx for reaching upto the end i say thnx for writing it up well i m glad that it didnt let u in peace while in head😆 n hve come out cuz its really good... u askin abt continuing so its a big YES do continue well after all i said do i even need to say that😉... oh i hvnt read that FF will love to read that & will do soon... really wish DEK trps increase n increase... really wish i could help in trp increase but only people in india can... ya they r makin a big one hope they realise... now mine has become quite a lengthy speech sorry if i bored u😆... take care 😊
add me to the pm list as well plz
jst saw pt1 update gonna read that..😃