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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update...!!!!!😛😛
Is he gonna tell tell about their kiss to her??????😲😲
Can't wait for the next part...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
O-M-F-G... That was simply hilarious!!!!!!! absolutely loved the whole golgappe thing... she is so insanely naive that it's hilarious!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I m still on golgappa land... U made me too jealious by this golgappa bonanja..
You dont know how much i enjoyed on that magical land with my gloomy n tsunami...

I wasnot surprised that ASR came to mehendi ceremony just for his gloomy but
offcourse i was surprised by khushi's reaction...Her reaction after seeing him was
really amazing.. I didnot get proper word to express my excitement...That was worth watching...

She asked to random girl just to make sure if he was really there or not...? N that girl .. Uffo...
😆
Her mehendi n his shirt...n must amazing their argument for simple thing
She was expecting that he would be with her , when he was there n she started her enquiry..
Why.. What...etc etc... Their WH question always made me laught..
😊 i was just smiling all the time .. I even didnot realised somebody was staring me ..
When i turn around all my friend started enquiry just like khushi.. Somehow i was
successed to escape from there.. I dont want my excitement to spoiled by my frirnds..
Then i kept continues

She couldnot say directly that she wanted to have golgappa n
our ASR was smart enough to know that she wasnot telling truth..

Its not hard but when its come to khushi its become hard...
Again their yes no question that was must amazing 😊

He was arguing with her just to know what she wanted for
She wasnot comfort when talking about food.. Yes i understand why..?

Finally she asked for golgappe.. Ha ha ha ASR ka expression
Pasta ya golgappa..? Ofcourse golgappa yar.. Afterall its khushi hammm

Love The way he feed her... N her sound of yammy

Innocent khushi didnot know how her sound affected..
His gutter mind alerted...ahem ahem

I was enjoying with khushi but laughting like hell by ASR's condition
He tried to stop her but its khushi... You know what

Finger .. Thumb...
😲 Common ASR .. Its simpLe but u took it with gutter mind ha ha ha 🤣

Aauch... Sory sory sory .. Sorry ASR its ur fault ..
Why did u made that much of yammy golgappe
Look u got punishment...
Well .. Now i m back to my land n littel bit worry for him..
His pov n concern for her was so lovely
ASR ...! R u sure .. U r gonna tell her about kiss..?
Sochlo.. Kuch v hosakta he...
She wont mind if she know who r u but before that i think it will be risky.. What say..?

Anyway.. Thank you so much for this Yammy update
Ummma ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊 hey nice FF ...PLZZ UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes!! I finally caught up! :)
Congratulations on the new thread, Karma!! You totally deserve it!

Chapter 26: well, I didn't cry, but there was a big, fat blissful smile on my face when I finished all the parts.. Arnav came! I knew he would have to anyway, but it was awesome to read it actually happen!! Go girl!

Chapter 27: LMAO, ROFL, LOL put together!! I was laughing my head off by the time I reached the end of the second part! I did cry in this chapter, but these tears were from laughing too hard! God, Khushi is so dangerous to be around (that's what Arnav must be thinking.. Man, it must have been so hard for him to keep feeding her considering what those sounds and her words must have been doing to him!) Seriously, awesome chapters..

Waiting for some more soon!!

Pls, pls make Arnav tell her soon about that kiss!

My favorite moments:

She spotted someone walking by, she stopped a random little girl and said……

Khushi: Do you see someone standing in front of me?

Little Girl: Who? Him?

Khushi: I guess…..

Little girl: Yes I see him…..


and


ASR: So what do you want to eat?

Khushi: What do you mean?

ASR: I don't think I can explain it any better. What. Do. You. Want. To. Eat?


and


ASR: So what's the process? How do we make this thing eatable?


You know what, I'll probably write the whole chapter down at this rate.. Just wanted to say.. I loved it!! :)




Edited by drool_ovr_barun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update 😊
Arnav feeding her golgappas & Khushi enjoying it,when Arnav's mind going gutter was just amazing.They should really use it on the show. .would be great to watch it 😉 especially Arnav's expressions 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update 😊
So ASR is haunted by the memories of that night and he wants to tell Khushi the truth about what happened that night ??? How will Khushi take it ???
Loved the Golgoppa scenes 😉 mouth watering 😉
Loved it !!!
Cant wait for more !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg lovely update i can't wait to see how khushi would react when she finds about their first kiss
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again im late... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update and Arnav's mind is completely at loss... over Khushi's moans 😊

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