HELLO.. Yes I am finally unressing this properly with the baraa saa comment I promised 😉
hmm so yes I am warning u beforehand.. I will be writing alot of nonsense stuff.. just skip if u love urself 🤣
First of all do u even knw how many times I have read this update ❓.. ok I myself have lost the count 😛 well well I have this update ratofied now like a parrot..yes I have learnt it by heart like it is some thing I have to give an exam on 😆 ok I dint learn on purpose but caus I read it so many times tht I ended up having it ratofied
Okay so individual comments for all the parts:
PART A:
This part is written beautifully.. wow.. completely loved the way u have written out Arnav's battle with himself..his turmoil.. his helplessness..just brilliant 👏 how much he is confused.. aww poor him.. no no ASR u cant separate "us".. no way.. its impossible.. no matter how hard u try.. u cant separate it.. (ok I am crying again writing the comment for this part) I absolutely loved this part and yes the following ones also ❤️ ⭐️
Yes yes the girl's khushi right??😉 😛 who else can it be?? 😆
I seriously love u more and more and more KC di!! ❤️ (I am straight..and I knw u are too 🤣 ) (I told u I will talk nonsense.. sorry 😆 )
PART B:
Dear dear khushi.. everyone's waiting for you.. and here u are all confused 😆 yes yes we knw tht u dont knw why is everything so "weird" 😆 aww poor rich people.. u think so bad of them.. and ofcourse all are not bad.. just like ur soul-mate 😉 he is one hot guy who is all nice infront of you.. really a sweatheart to u but a meany to everyone else yes yes he is also confused like you..well chalo his habit of roaming around the world to find peace atleast brought him close to you.. u will soon be thankful to him for travelling all around.. made ur task alot more easier to find someone who does "exist".. yes yes ur soul-mate exists.. dont worry dear 😉 😆
hahaha Samar you wont leave any chance on hitting on her after all the warnings from ur sister also haan.. but listen guy dont mess up with something tht belongs to ASR.. otherwise it will be horrible to see ASR's wrath 🤣
Even this chapter is amazingly written ❤️
PART C:
Aww... the conversation of Samar and khushi was soo refreshing.. (I like Samar now.. though he may be is trying to give competition to ASR.. i dont knw but when I read this chap.. I assumed Samar to be NK 😉 )
hahahaha khushi u really said tht❓.. aww poor Samar.. his sister doesnt keep his respect in front of her friends 😆 well well he knws how priya is so he really doesnt mind 😛
chalo khushi u have found someone similar to you 😉.. aww priya's sis is also into films.. and Samar is soo sweet.. he loves his sisters alot 😃
and Yes khushi ur laad governor is one antique piece.. so dont be surprised if rich guys watch hindi movies 😆 but but our ARNAV babua is the best ❤️
hmm lovely sister-brother bond.. dont worry khushi.. Arnav will bring loads of happiness in ur life and u wont feel left out or deprived of anything.. and girl stop checking ur phone 😉 we knw u are missing ur so-called friend 😆
PART D:
ASR: Hello?
Khushi: I am so sorry, my phone died, I haven't had a chance to charge it all day. I was at work then I went to college, then the practice, then when I came home I was too busy getting ready, then I came here and totally forgot to charge it.
ASR: Why are you explaining me all that?
She was quiet. She didn't know why she was explaining him anything. It's not like he cared. Why would he care if her phone died? Why would he care if their conversation was disrupted because her phone died? Why would he care why she didn't charge her phone all day?
For some reason, she didn't like that question of his. It didn't sound good.
ASR: Hello?
Khushi: Ya!
ASR: What happened?
Khushi: Nothing, sorry I have to go now.
ASR: What's wrong?
Khushi: Nothing!
ASR: Gloomy, what's going on?
Khushi: Nothing, why do you need an explanation?
ASR: What's wrong?
Khushi: Why do I need to explain anything to you?
ASR: So you are mad at me? For what? For saying that?
Khushi: My phone is dying, let me hang up before the phone gets disconnected again and I will call you back and I will start explaining you again and then you will ask me why I am explaining you and then'..
She stopped talking''.
ASR: And then you will get mad at me?
Khushi: Why do I..
Hahahah khushi welldone 👍🏼 Dont try to be rude to her.. she can really get back on you 😆
(di loved this part and love u more❤️)
lol Arnav come soon.. everyone's waiting for u 😉
PART F:
Hmm yes khushi u are at a wedding function.. pay attention on tht and not Arnav 🤣 (lol even i dont stop thinking about Arnav without caring in the world for where I am.. be it my cousin's wedding or anywhere else 🤣) I dont blame you girl 😆
Aww tht was soo beautiful.. they both dint hang up.. ❤️ when I was reading this part for the first time(as i mentioned i read the update countless times) I called my sister and said " read this Apa.. its just how u and bilal bhai (my sister's fiance) dont hang up the phone.. isnt it beautifully written here"
and she was like : " look mama there she goes again being crazy.. well well when did she stop being crazy.. but yes I agree this is nicely written" 😃 (and then the conversation continued)
ASR: You are in a room?
Khushi: I was just charging the phone in the room so I'...
ASR: To call me?
Khushi: Why do I have to explain you anything?
ASR: To call me?
Khushi: I don't need to explain you anything.
ASR: To call me?
Khushi: Why do I have to''
ASR: To call me?
Khushi: Yes!
ASR: You went to a room to charge your phone to call me?
She was silent, she didn't say anything.
ASR: Did you?
Khushi: Yes!
ASR: Why?
Khushi: Now you want me to explain?
ASR: Why?
Khushi: I have to go back outside, everyone is waiting.
ASR: Okay, go back to the party and enjoy!
yes now if u are soo adamant on getting ur answer she is also ziddi to not give out reasons.. spare her.. she is as confused as u are 😔
So u should knw ASR tht it can be none other than gloomy who comes so freely to ur house 😃
lol khushi 😆 u knw girls cant help it.. Arnav is just too hot to handle
great great mehandi done... "A" is there 😃 hungry haan?? not only the letter but Arnav is also there.. OMG he came 
Moving himself closer to her...
He smiled and said''..
ASR: What do you want to eat?
I am dead.. now he will feed you?? the face of all the girls desperately waiting for him 🤣
and the mehndi is now on his shirt.. yayy hope he finds the "A".. and khushi ur explanation to it will be❓
and U left us hanging but its alright.. I loved the update.. no words to appreciate ur writing!!
this is me 😉:
Aww.. and thx soo much for appreciating my spamming... and dont say soo much thankyou.. friends are there to help in every way possible.. I loved spamming for you.. and would love to do anything as exciting in the future aswell 😃
just keep rocking and writing brilliantly!!
And this is for ur lovely baby:
Ur maama rocks!! and u rock more than her!! 😉
*Phew* I am done 😃
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