Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29 - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late comment.. as usual amazing:) looking forward for update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
HI KC

Sorry for the late comment but I had no choice as you will see after reading this.

This chapter was just terrible,terrible,terrible!
Before I elaborate further I need to give you a very quick language lesson so please bear with me for a bit.

In my country we have a language called Afrikaans(a little bit similar to dutch) and there is this word "Lis" (pronounced Las as in the first part of Lassi-you know that Punjabi drink) which means crave.
Now this word is used over here in English as a slang and then it implies crave to the point where your mouth salivates.

Now reading this chapter when I am fasting was so not a good idea cause it made me "lis" for golgappes(GG).
Every time I want to comment all I can think about is how Kushi ate the GG and how I am lissing for it.

Ok I'm trying so hard to focus...back to my comment. What is up with this new awkwardness from Kushi? Is it a prelude to her realizing her feelings for Arnav and then a confession about her fate-mate?

Oh man now that GG lis is back! All I can think about is juicy,spicy,crunchy,sweet-sour GGs.
My tummy is going Grrr.
Really bad chapter to read when fasting.

Focus...focus...focus...nope not working ...
Seriously really excellent descriptions...awesome chapter.
Can't stop thinking about GGs. Going to have to try them when I'm done fasting.

On a different note, not sure if you celebrate womens day on the 9th.We do over here so Happy Women's Day to you and all your readers.
Thanks for the awesome chapter and pm.
Enjoy the rest of your week..
ps please excuse the typos but can't be helped when all I have is GGs on the brain.

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Posted: 13 years ago
fantabulous...😃
awesum...<3
khushi making moans while eating golgappas and her directions...just cracked me up...🤣
so ASR has decided to tell her about their first kiss that night...!!...
eager to know her reaction..if ASR would b able to tell her about the kiss...😉
thankyou for the pm...😊...next chap ASAP...<3<3<3...=)
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read the who,e thing nd i dnt how to xplain how much i loved ur fic.
i got scolded by my mom for spending so much time on internet but it was worth it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey

Finally i m done with reading all the 27 parts.
I loved them, god it was like living a fairy tale and i dont think i ever want to come out of the tale.
Your writing is fabulous, I dont think i ll ever have enough words to praise your writing.

I think u should write a book and trust me i ll be the first want to buy it.

Thank you thank u so much for giving me this beautiful piece of writing to read.

PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON, ALL I WANT TO DO IS READ THE STORY.

PLZ ITS A REQUEST

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡where is the update?😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
only till D ?
what?😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
waiting...for e,f,g,h,i,j,k,l,...z😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by sheun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for pateintly waiting guys...
It's not Fate-Mate's turn yet...
Will HAVE to update It all started with 300 Rupees first...
As soon as I do that, I will update this one...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: karmachameleon

Thanks for pateintly waiting guys...

It's not Fate-Mate's turn yet...
Will HAVE to update It all started with 300 Rupees first...
As soon as I do that, I will update this one...

jaaalim jamana
usse bhi jaalim
karma c...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sheun

jaaalim jamana
usse bhi jaalim
karma c...

I no zaalim...LOL
I try to be fair to both readers...
But i am glad that you finally read fate-mate... 😛
And I am pleased to know that you are eagerly waiting for the update...😆
Hmmm I like...😉
LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago
Could it get any more cuter??
Loved it!!

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