Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

please update soon!!! trying to wait as patiently as possible... but lets just say my patience is as great as ASR's!!! lolll therefore not very patient!!! lolll

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

First of all - I'm very very very very sorry for being sooo horribly late!

I just read all the four parts - I'm staring at my phone with my mouth hanging open (That's another point that I want to have pani-puris as well... I'll handle this by having some soon! :P), OMG - I can't believe Khushi can be this innocent! Awww... Poor poor poor poor ASR! Her innocent demands for pani-puris were perfect innuendos! I can imagine the situation Arnav would have been! A girl moaning orgasmically over food - tsk - I sympathize with him now! LOL... I mean, I know that guy hasn't yet realized his feelings for the girl - or rather he hasn't concluded what he feels for her, he knows for sure that the relation he shares with her is something special... Something more than just an acquaintance or a friend...

And maybe that's why he had decided to tell her the truth about the kiss they had shared, right? She is special for him, the kiss they shared IS special for him... And its like its eating him inside that he'd lied about that one unforgettable experience they had shared. It's definitely more than just guilt about the lying part. He wants her to know what had happened! I don't think he regrets kissing her - am I right? He is well aware of the consequences - she might even leave him - but he is ready to take the risks for all the right - and wrong reasons! I feel here that he is seeing this relationship with Khushi as very potent than what meets the eye. Please tell me - seriously - am I even on the right track about him???

Honestly - I could have never imagined just 'eating pani-puris and thinking a bit here-and-there' could turn up into such fabulous chapter! It was smooth - it had its own rhythm and pace as it moved through sentences! Loved it! (Yeah - there can never be an update of yours I won't like! But I still have to mention it naaa! Can't help it!)

Amazing chapter! Want to know Khushi's reaction... Update soon!!!

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arshi_twinkling

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

really nice ff...wonderfully wriiten...

i really liked it alot...its awesome...i want to read more and more...update soon

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Ammm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

fabuls update

thnx 4 da pm

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musa khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

this is amazing dude and don,t control yours nostop writing it is just like a novel full of emotions wow😍

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Lovly update...
I loved their gol gappe wala scene..
I wonder if he will tell her about the kiss.
Asr is so sweet man..
I just hope they realized soon that they love each other..
Loved the update so much..
Continue soon..

Sorry for the short comment..
I will continue with my requler comments after next update..
For both this and it all started with three hundred ruppees..
so bear with me this time..sowwii

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angeldream14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

awesome brilliant amazing

he shld nt tell her

some truth r meant to be hidden if it doesnt harm anyone

but can hurt someone deeply

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

👏👏thanks...superb...loved it...👏👏

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sree_dey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Sory sory sory 4 nt cmentng earlier...it was s usual lvly...i jst wnna knw hw the reactn vl b wn khushi ll cme 2 knw bout hr frst kis...nd d day wn she ll knw asr s none othr dn arnav..bt i knw it ll b a late..eagerly waitn