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Posted: 13 years ago
too little ! i am waiting for the confession and KISS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy!! I just read your FF!! It's really good!! I want to know what actually happened that night... So what Mrs. Zubin said was a lie then?? :S Why would she tell Khushi a lie?? It doesn't make sense!! Please clear my confision!! :D x
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Posted: 13 years ago
woah...man u r in total gutter world the update was totally guttery...loved it...and how he didnt tell her why he was asking her to stop making those noisees...loved it...he is so happy that it is her first kiss...hope when they consume each other it will be their first time for each other...for asr also...
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was full of spiceness nd naughtiness...
I njoyd it...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hy buddy nice update...but some time self talking kuch ziyada hu jati hai ...can u plzzz make it short...i know self talking has need there but plzzz a little bit short...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so you updated.! must say your mission really accomplised as your update managed to bring smile on ma face..i was grinning while the whole update.! it was such a sweet update..! so it seems like his heart won over his brains as in your previous update he was fighting an internal battle with himself only and deciding whether to do as his heart says or mind. quite liked this thing.! and he's such a sweetheart na...he feeding her golgappe.! ohh my mouth was also all watery that time reading all her moans...LOL poor he ..she wasnt even understanding what she was doing to him.. and there's one more thing that i really really loved is how you mentioned his fingers getting inside her mouth while feeding her and how he wiped her face..it was sooo cute.! my stomach was full of butterflies that time..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it
Arnav so sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
firstly thanks for updating i was actually dying to read next parts..
now coming to update it was fabulous.
khushi is so cute i love when she asked another girl about ASR and the girl teasing him
Then finally confusion got over and khushi's brain back..
loved whole update and the gol - gappa was awesome wow i can never think of ASR feeding Khushi gol-gappa and his gutter mind 😈
thanks for the p.m waiting for his answer why is he always so nice to her ??
amazing... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update di...today am slightly depressed but ur update lighten my mood thank u soo much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG full arshi update, love u for this...
THIS was MINDBLOWING, keep it up... Thx for the PM

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