swaron ff UNPREDICTABLE LIFE part 6 updated - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Good start dear 😊

FF k starting mein hi she is crying...hmm so the mystery or "SUSPENSE" (as u put it šŸ˜‰ has already began..

N to add more mystery to it we have nita's best buddy here...well I suppose he is none other than our "MAJNU BOY" n I suppose those tears were also somewhere related to him, maybe FOR him or maybe BCOZ of him...chalo we'll see that in future updates 😊

Btw it seems like k the story is going to proceed in "FLASHBACK" mode...is it kya??? šŸ˜•

Anyways nice update bt next time plzzz give us long update n plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Wonder y is Sharon crying and whom is shocked to see...hope it Swayam. thnx for pm update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
nice one...
loved it...
update soon...
thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
I AM SO SORRY GUYS...i knw its way late...but having some sort of problems...but now all sorted and back with update...updating in few minutes...srry once again
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Nita was sitting in living room, waiting impatiently for Sharon'.shouting her name after every 5 mins'.

Nit: Sharon'.m tiered of waiting now'come soon

Sh: (placing her fav. bracelet)I m done'give me just 2 mins

As she came down'.nita was stunned at Sharon'she was looking damn beautiful'she wears the same dress which she wore in charity event (the violet one) with silver pendent (gifted by swayum)

Nit: Sharon you look awesome'I must say violet suits you'

Sh: thanks nita'umm shall we' (Asking to leave)

Nit: yupp'Nita was sitting in living room, waiting impatiently for Sharon'.shouting her name after every 5 mins'.
Nit: Sharon'.m tiered of waiting now'come soon
Sh: (placing her fav. bracelet)I m done'give me just 2 mins
As she came down'.nita was stunned at Sharon'she was looking damn beautiful'she wears the same dress which she wore in charity event (the violet one) with silver pendent (gifted by swayum)
Nit: Sharon you look awesome'I must say violet suits you'
Sh: thanks nita'umm shall we' (Asking to leave)
Nit: yupp'

In The Den

Sharon as kind of person who don't let their emotion to overcome...she composed herself takes a deep breath and tries to mix with the atmosphere. This place is known for Indians...the only place where Indian youth wanna spend their eve. The Den was truly awesome place looks like a real den with rocky walls grayish in color...deem lights...fantastic music played by live band...Nita told her about the band...it was the best group named The Rockers.

Nita was busy in searching for someone...

Sh: are you looking for someone???

Nit: shar...I told you about that idiot,...don't know where he is?

Sh: Nita...I don't know what you are talking about...and which idiot?

Nit: arre yaar bataya than na...best buddy!!! patanahi kahan hai???..he has to be here...let me figure out where he is, you wait here I'll be right back okkk... (Without wasting a single second she leaves)

Sharon stands there with an innocent smile on her lips and blank expression on her face'..she looks around here and there and finally finds a corner for herself'.she really enjoying the rocking music, after a long time she's able to switch her focus from swayum to other things around.

After what happens few days back any other girl would break into pieces, but she manage to be alive, she manages to smile for her father, for her friends and most importantly for the sake of kids R3S(Rohit. Rohan, Rishi and Soumya)

She physically was there but deep somewhere she was lost in her own world...suddenly a calm, soft voice brings out her from her deep thought...it was Nita who was apologized by a tall, lean guy''


(yes guys the best buddy...I know you all were thinking ki ye swayum hai...but no guys he is Karan...Karan Malhotra)

Krn: Hey Nita pls...pls...pls am really am sorry yaar...pleeeaaasseee forgive me yaar!!!!

Nit: forgive...in your dreams...What time I called you here??

Krn: @7...

Nit: what it is now??? (Pointing towards her watch)

Krn: ummm...its...u..a.8 now

Nit: And what you suppose me to do??? (With tremendous anger)

Krn: pls...yaar nita...listen na...pls I am sorry yaar...(making innocent baby face)

Nit: By the way,...why the hell you are late...what the hell you were doing???

Krn: wo..me...me...wo...(cuts in between by nita)

Nit: kya... wo...me..wo...me..uhn...

Krn: wo...me so gaya tha()

Nit: whattt??? You were sleeping...GOD!!!! me kya karu is ladke ka...

.Krn: kuch mat karo just forgive me...!!! (Smirking @ her)

Nit: well it's not so easy Mr. Karan... (Having evil smile)...'just wait and watch..

Krn: unh...well k whatever you say...after all tum meri one and only friend ho...itna to karna hi padega!!!

Nit: oh god!!! How could I forget her...argh!!! Sab tumhari wajah se...(searching for sharon) God where she is'

Meanwhile sharon comes there...as she was standing behind karan (she could sense a familiar kind of presnse as he is somewhere there) she could not see karans face as his back facing her...

Sh: found that idiot...or we should go back home...(smiling @nita)

Nit: where were you...umm leave it...and yes wo ullu(owl) mil gaya muje (turns karans face towards her)


it short...i'll update 2 part by today eve or night

i know guys you all would be in hell shock...but trust me guys you will love it...do comment...


Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
u r right!! we r in shock..but it justifies the title... šŸ˜› update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Hey its Very interesting .Plz keep updating me also.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
nice update..!! but lemme me guess ...!! karan looks like Swayam ryt??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awesome update
Pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Swayam is not with sharonšŸ¤” okk and its a new guy. Well kahani mai twist hai bhai. Well written and you have taken into consideration even the minute details. Thanks. yayayaaa you will update today itself, i am so so happy.

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