swaron ff UNPREDICTABLE LIFE part 6 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is on the lines of the movie, Kaho na pyaar hai where Hrithik had a younger brother and fell in love wid Ameesha, then her father killed him. She went to her cousin at New Zealands place, where she met the carbon copy of her love. She was shocked and he fell in love with her instantly, but then he came to know about Ameesha's love and his similarities, he did pursue her till India and on reaching India, as ppl tried to kill him thinking him to be her earlier love, the suspense was revealed that it was Ameesha's dad who killed her love earlier.

Are we going on the same lines, plz plz don't kill swayam, I can't accep even a carbon copy of Swayam in his place.😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

This is on the lines of the movie, Kaho na pyaar hai where Hrithik had a younger brother and fell in love wid Ameesha, then her father killed him. She went to her cousin at New Zealands place, where she met the carbon copy of her love. She was shocked and he fell in love with her instantly, but then he came to know about Ameesha's love and his similarities, he did pursue her till India and on reaching India, as ppl tried to kill him thinking him to be her earlier love, the suspense was revealed that it was Ameesha's dad who killed her love earlier.


Are we going on the same lines, plz plz don't kill swayam, I can't accep even a carbon copy of Swayam in his place.😭



no dear...i m not going to kill swayum...i love swaron...n theres is happy endig for them... so trust me and stay tune...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I think swayam ka accident me wo.mar jayega ye news sab ko mili hogi but je is still alive n lost his memory
Hmm something like that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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excellent piece of writing and fab concept!!this is gonna b really vry interesting!!thanks 4 ur pm&plz dnt forget 2 pm me on ur nxt update..;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

I think swayam ka accident me wo.mar jayega ye news sab ko mili hogi but je is still alive n lost his memory
Hmm something like that



keep on guessing dear...stay tune...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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šŸ˜› update soon
n nyc part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Hey guys I know I am not good with words'.but still continuing it'.please ignore mistakes'..well this one is short too'so sorry for that'enjoy'.

Part 3

Sh: found that idiot...or we should go back home...(smiling @nita)

Nit: where were you...umm leave it...and yes wo ullu(owl) mil gaya muje (turns karans face towards her)

as she was standing right behind him karan bumps on to her and she drops her mobile...immediately they bend down karan uttering sorry to the girl...

Krn: (while picking her mobile) umm...i...m...really sorry...umm...Ms...

Nit: Sharon...Sharon Raiprakash... (Karan was stunned and was literally in shock...till now Sharon haven't saw him)

Sh: hey...it's...okay... (looks into his eyes and was hell shocked...as if dreaming...but deep somewhere in heart...she was happy to see him again...swayum...her swayum...wait her swayum...no he can't be him...lost in her thoughts)

Both of them stood there without uttering single word...there was an awkward silence between them...Nita couldn't resist more and broke the ice...

Nit: guys'you know each other???

Krn: (Karan back to the senses')'umm'no'.no..I mean me tumhari cousin ko kaise jaanunga..!!!(avoiding eye contact with sharon'.become very restless standing in front of him)

Nit: ok fine'.why the hell you're tense??? '.i think we should leave now it's quite late'.aaj ki poori eve tumhari wajah se spoil ho gai'and to compensate that you're taking us for dinner tomorrow'ok.

Krn: yes mam '.whatever you say'.i'll be there by 7 be ready'.ok than come I'll drop you guys'.

Nit: no need karan we'll manage it's absolutely fine'thanks

Krn: Are you sure'.???

Nit: yeeuup!!!

Krn: ok than bye'see yaa tom!!!

Nit: hmm'bye

Sharon still lost'.jaise statue ban gayi ho aur kyun nahi'what happened last few minutes was enough to make her paralyzed'.nita saw her lost so she snapped finger front of her eyes'.calling her name'.

Nit: Sharon'.sharon'.(no response'finally came up with shaking her shoulder)'shaaarrron!!!!

Sh: uhn'oh'haa kya hua???(Coming back to earth)

Nit: kya hua'.muje nahi u tell me whats wrong with you'.are you ok???

Sh: umm'nothing '.where's your friend???

Nit: who karan'his dad called him'he is gone'..i think hame bhi chalna chahiye'wat say???

Sh: ya'even I am not feeling well'lets go.

Both nita and Sharon came back home and straight forward to their rooms

Sharon's room:

She was standing near window'.it was full moon night'so view was pretty clear'.soft cool breeze playing with her hair strands, which is irritating her'.she was thinking about the person to whom she met today'who brought sunami in her life again'the biggest question which is disturbing her the most was''

Sh: (to herself)'.WHO WAS HE???...Karan'or'.Swayum'.nahi wo swayum nahi ho sakta'.swayum to'.no he can't be swayum'..maine khud uski car ko crash hote hue dekha tha'..to kya wo karan hi hai'agar wo karan hai'.then why his gaze on me, his touch feel so right same as swayums'.why his eyes speaks to me same like swayums'. why I felt that comfort which I use to feel with swayum'. Why'why''why the hell this is happening to me'.why'.

God only knows'.no I can't let go like this'.i have to find out answers'.and for that I have to meet him'..(after making decision'goes to sleep)

Karan's room

Karan laying on the bed thinking intensively about Sharon'

Kr: why '..Why it always happens to me'. Why'..ab she will definitely try to meet me '..and again the questionnaire session will start'.kab'kyun'.kaise'.aur uske in questions ka mere pass koi answer nahi hoga'..kyunki jo hua wo meri majboori bhi thi 'aur meri marzi bhi'..(he had a sleepless night.. thinking what he's gonna do to avoid her'.)

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Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
So karan is swayam.
Hmm I really loved this suspense
What happened between them?swayam's accident n he said that he also want it??
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So Karan is Swayam??i mean Swayam is Karan??..interesting..very interesting!!!oh-em-gee!!Can't wait for the next update..what was Swayam's 'majboori' and 'marzi'??i'll die if i don't get to know soon enough!!why does Swayam not want to answer Sharon's questions??PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arre.. so laron is Swayam huh?? or Swayam is laran... was laran pretenling lo be Swayam?? orlhe olher way rounl?? jaldi uplate kalna please...walna mein yeh suspense le laran mein maljaungi

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