swaron ff UNPREDICTABLE LIFE part 6 updated

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: yasu2810
hey nice intro dr...
interesting characters...
pls pls pls update the lovely parts as like ur intro...
n do pm me always...

thanks for liking...updating first part

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jumrulzz
Btw.. who are those Wonderful.. Outstanding.. Kids! on the First page..
dis FF' is gonna sound Intriguing.. :)
Pls.. Pm me the Next tym.. ! :D
Will be soon awaiting..

those talented kids are from dance india dance...updating first part.

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: tumdeep
i like suspense and ur cs is the best i have read👍🏼

thanks a lot dear...

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Guys updating first part ...have a look and do comment...
acha...bura ya jo bhi ho...

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

guys heres the first part...do tell hwzz it and pls comment (sache wale)

Present Day
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London:

It was raining heavily as if giving company to the girl sitting on the edge of the window...staring up at the falling droplets with tears in her own eyes... she was deep in the thought of the past six months...how unpredictable her life was with lots of roller-ghoster rides...
her chain of thought breaks when a cute looking girl waved her hands in front of her eyesand screaming her name loudly...

It was Nita her cousin...
nit: hey sharon here you are...i have searched whole house for you...(noticing tears in sharons eyes)...hey sharon are you ok...why you are crying..(before she cold continue. cuts between by sharon)

Sh:(wiping her tears) nita...am not crying it...j.usst...umm..leave it...tell mewhy you were looking for me..um..koi kam hai?

nit: sharon(with concern) you are ol na... i mean it doesn't looks ki tum...hey if here is any problem or anything which is disturbing you..you can share it with me...i am always there for you

sh:i am fine nita...(with equally concern face)seriouslly..its just that i m feeling home sick..and my friends(hiding her vulnerability) thats all..its new place for me...i'll be fine...don't worry.
nit:(after taking a deep breadth) ok i trust you...dekha tumne muje bhula diya for what i m here...get ready we're going out

Sh: nita ...please(puoting towards nita)i...dont want to please let me stay here

nit: am not listening anything... we're going out thats it...its about a week dear,you are here and haven't gone out
sh: Nita pleeaase...if...i get bored there...(cuts in bw)

nit: no ifs and no buts ...we are going to den...thats our club you'll feel better...the music,the atmosphere is just out of the world...most important thing i want you to meet my best buddy...he is so coool

sh: okkzzz...fine i know how ziddi you're from childhood...let me give mins i'll be back

nit: thats better...i m waiting downstairs ok...come soon

PROMO:
sharon and nita in the den...sharon in shock(840 volts) after seeing nita's best buddy

i know it is very short par kya karu...i m out of town not having lappie with me...srry guys for letting you all wait...but having some sort of problems...badi mushkil se 1 part post kiya hai

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

guys i m sry if missing any of you i'll surely pm you later if missed
thanks

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Poonam

@Swayamonly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Yeeeps 1st one to cmmnt...:P:D n yaha koi zoothe cmmnts nai deta yaar...:):) Ur concept is awesome... Looking forword for it..:) n update ittusa tha bt cute tha..:P plz do pm m whenever u update next... M waiting...

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

dude!

awessome head start.. Best buddy toh swayam hi hoga..!
btw.. koi demand hain? :)

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

awesome start dear...will be waiting for the next update...i understand u r out of town that's why u gave this small update...but next time give a biiig update...😃

update soon..