swaron ff UNPREDICTABLE LIFE part 6 updated

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Intriguing start . I was expecting you will start with the mischief of bachha party but you started with Sharon. Intriguing. Waiting for the next part.

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Omg!!

really beautiful... pm me! ssoon!
and btw.. LOVED dis part! friendship! :)
and btw.. best buddy will be swayam only..
i guarantee!
cz sharon wont get shocked other den matters of swayam! :P
and btw.. no demand ? :(

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Nice update..im beginning to like this.. Obviously Swayam is going to be Nita's best buddy.. Wondering how would they react when they meet each other! Please try and update soon!and please pm me when you do..and by the way, thanks for the pm!!

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wonderful start !!

loved it :D

waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the pm.

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Loved the character sketch and specially the change that Swayam belongs to a middle class family, I had always tried to imagine, how would have Sharon adjusted if Swayam was indeed from middle class and could not fulfill all her DIVA demands...

So lu have fulfilled my wish and my god, so many kids and Sharon in the middle, would love to read the outcomes... Do pm me wen u update...

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Short and sweet...nice update...update soon...n do pm me...

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

a superb cs n a very interesting concept ...i LUV SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AM REALLY LOOKING FWD TO IT!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
the 1st part was nice HMMM PLZZ DO PM ME ABOUT THE LATER PART! 😉

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: jumrulzz
dude!

awessome head start.. Best buddy toh swayam hi hoga..!
btw.. koi demand hain? :)<div></div>

Well that's a surprise ...or may be shock you all have to wait for that...No demand just want your support guys...

Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Anindita91
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">awesome start dear...will be waiting for the next update...i understand u r out of town that's why u gave this small update...but next time give a biiig update...😃</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#660033">update soon..</font>

Thanks dear...i promise next update would be big enough!!!

Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: marauder
<font color="#003333">Intriguing start . I was expecting you will start with the mischief of bachha party but you started with Sharon. Intriguing. Waiting for the next part.</font>

I myself wanted to begin with musti and all but it Was important for the development of the story!!!!

Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago