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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Ok, I read both the chapters and honestly, I loved the whole set up. It's so fresh and interesting. Thank you very much. It really means alot.😳

So let me get this straight. Khushi is Shashi and Garima's daughter who lives with Madhumati her Buaji. Yep!Looks like Shashi and Garima both died. Yep(In a fire? not sure, felt like it). Madhumati works as a gardener in Raizada house.Yep Her friend Muskaan married Abhimanyu Raizada and again both of them are dead. Yep Deyvani and Kushal are the grandparents of Arnav and it seems Kushal doesn't like Madumati and Khushi as well as Aman. Yep Why? Not sure. Aman works for Raizadas just like Khushi. Yep So can we hope for some story between Khushi and Aman here?😆 Was he the one who was observing Khushi?😛 time will tell😉

Oooh! How could I forget Raja? He seems very cute and a perfect partner for Khushi. So I'm guessing here there is no Payal and Akash? YEp , no payal or akash. Anjali is with her hubby abroad. Good! let her be there.😆Lol, yh.
But Arnav seems like a nice guy here. Don't know about his arrogance yet. Coz he seemed nice to Aman. we'll see.

And I really wonder what's up with Khushi. Why those ladies were shocked and refused the marriage proposal. Is it just because she is an orphan? or is there more to it. *zips lips*😉

One thing that struck me was Muskaan married the rich Raizada but Madumati remained poor. And why does she work for the Raizadas? thereare still some pasts still untold. you'll find out. You are asking the right questions though.😊

Btw, thanks for the scrap. welcome.
And I really loved this story. I could imagine the whole thing unfolding in my mind. Keep going and I'm sure this will be even better than price of freedom. I really hope so cuz i have planned this story out properly rather than my other works which are improvized. i hope this planning pays off.😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Awesum strt
Loving it
Plz PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
its very unique..plz give me a pm wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
nd yeah one more thing.. i like how u have changed the story from the story in drama but some of the characters are same so it creates excitement like if we r watching ipkknd season 2😉 so plz do continue and add me in your buddy list plz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
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*edit*

oh zara u have grown as a writer and i can see that ther is so much maturity in what u have started with this ff...and i am in love with it.

story sounds beautiful with the flashbacks and setting.

chandigarh why?????????????

Is it gonna b drama and romance what is the genre of the story????????

all the best this 1 is gonna b awesome tooo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Awesome like always! I really wish he meets Khushi in the next chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
awesome
loved it
y everyone wants perfection
isnt being imperfect to beautiful
beauty lies in the eyes of beholder
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
awesome update!! loved khushi and raja's playfulness. so cute.. atleast raja is there for her... what a grand entry by our super hero.. truly heroic style entry .. cant wait for our arhi first meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
nice update. I love khushi and raja. They hav such a cute bond. Whats with kushal? He is so argh! Never mind. So arnav is back. Wating for arhi to meet!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Zee cnt wait to undertsand im crazy now so Many questions
But the most important is why They dislike khushi ???? Cnt wait fr the first
Meeting

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