Arshi FF~Vines With Thorns~ Thread 1 - Page 10

Originally posted by: -Yuks-

Well this is most certainly interesting. I can't believe I didn't come across this before.

I loved Madhu and Muskaan's friendship is the beginning. It was really sweet.Thank you. I was wondering readers would back off seeing a new name like muskaan and also don't realise that Madhu/MAdhumati is our buaji from ipkknd.😃

I guess that whole middle generation is gone (except for Buaji) laving the traditional elders to fight with the modern youngsters. yh the elders are only buaji, nani( in my ff she's on the dad's side so its dadi, lol), and my new character kushal.

You left me in a bind wondering what Khushi's 'flaw' is. You mentioned that everyone falls for her beauty, so she isn't physically disfigured in any way. Maybe not in places that are visible? Maybe she got a little burnt in the fire and people are repulsed by it? all shall be revealed in good time😆

Or it is something about her? She is Manglik or something like that? Born with a curse? Some trouble in her Kundali?*zips lips*😆

Dada rubs me the wrong way. He reminds me of an old aristocrat that still wants to cling on to the goo old days, despite time morning forward. Always seeking outward perfection while hiding skeletons in his own closet. you have nearly got him spot on.😃

Dadi is really sweet

Okay now finally Arnav. Nothing much to say about him yet. He seems sensible. Proud and serious, but most certainly no ruthless ASR. Or maybe he is. I don't know yet. true, there is more to see from him still.

Khushi has decided to never marry, so I think Arnav will meet her and be attracted to her, and she will keep pulling away. we'll see

This is excellent so far. I love it! Thank you very much for the comment.

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Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

Whoa this was really really good! I read the first chapter and was wondering what had happened to muskaan by the end of it. I smiled at the para and pic abt Raja. I am a person who loves dogs and believe dat dogs can really sense if you are upset. true indeed
Second chap revealed a lot of info. Kushal and devyaani are the grandparents of arnav, abhimanyu and muskaan the parents. yep!
The best part about this FF is dat u have used names very familiar to me like kushal,rathi,kinjal etc. You are an SP person aren't you ?😆 *whispers* am i really that obvious?!😆

Originally posted by: -PoisonIvy

Hey. First off, thank you for the PM letting me know about this FF! :) The prologue itself seemed very interesting! :) thank you very much😳

Love the whole intrigue surrounding Khushi. The societal aspect coming in. The dynamics between the characters introduced so far is a nice quirk! I did not anticipate Arnav to be as humane as I have perceived him to be after that incident with Aman. I'm guessing his mother's influence? his character hasn't fully been revealed yet but yes he gets his want-to-not-have-an-arguement trait from Muskaan, lol :)

Oh and I checked out the Tumblr! It is indeed a treat for the eyes.. the grandeur of it all! :) thank you!😃

Your writing flows at a languid pace. Looking forward to where you go with this! :) hopefully you'll like it

I hope you would not mind continuing PMs for when you update? Thank you! :) ok i shall buddy you. thanks again

Originally posted by: Jameelah52

Man, this story is gripping!! YAY! thank you!

Let me get this straight. Muskaan is Arnav's mom. Khushi is Garima and Shashi's daughter. And madhumati is raising khushi. Sooo much suspense! Soo many questions. true. true. true!😆

Whats wrong with khushi? Where is Muskaan? Why does Kushal dislike everyone soo much? He indeed is ASR's grandfather! Ruthless! Not caring about people's feeling. ahhh yes very fearsome.

I know my questions will be answered as the story progresses. And I'll wait till that :) thank you.
I love the way you've written it. Your story is realllyyy interesting. And I'm officially hooked! :') thank you very much for saying so.

Would you please PM me with the update? I'll buddy you :) Of course!

P.S- I cant thank you enough for making me aware of this FF! Thanks a ton! :) welcome! but really thank you.

Originally posted by: mistyrains

When I started off, I fell in love with Madhumati's character. Its wonderfully realistic. The way she thinks, it is still thought by many women of the world. thank you very much. she's our buaji from ipkknd, but with more thought.

And then the lines ...Life is the essence of a garden. So beautiful Zara, the words were sheer poetry conveying complex thoughts. thank you i try my best

The way Kushal talked to Madhu and Kinjal's talk of Khushi in the first chapter had me cringing. Yay! really glad.

And Raja and Khushi make me so happy. I love how you have portrayed their relationship. Absolutely hart-warming:) You'll get to read more of their back story in the future. 😊

Devyani's character is wonderful She seems to love everyone as her own, not differentiating based on biased views. yep, very much like nani from IPKKND.

A special mention for your brilliant characterization and the simplicity with which you have written about all the relationships. Beautiful writing Zara, continue soon!:) thank you!!

Originally posted by: GayuArnav

RES!

Hey saw your PM 🤗

well im really sorry because my university exams are going on now! 😭

Ill be free from august 3rd! So ill definitely read the story and will comment on it! 😊 Pakka!

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Firstly i thought i will not have time to read two chapters but then i got to take some snack time from my studies and i thought i should read at least one part but i finished both the parts because it was just so gripping! 👏 thanks for spending your time to read. means alot.

The story's outline is just amazing! There is a lot of past to be revealed in this story and im eagerly waiting to know that! :) thank you.

Khushi and Raja! First i though raja was to be her brother then i thought he was her friend then it turned out to be a DOG :) Im so already in love with Raja! 😳 I love dogs!

I just love Madhumathi's and devyani's character! So realistic and mature!

Kushal is damn arrogant! If arnav is gonna be ASR(Obviously!) then i would say that he has inherited it from his grandfather! 😈 lol. yh you'll see it soon😆

The way kushal behaves with khushi,madhumathi and aman is slightly annoying though! 😡

Im so excited to know how arnava nd khushi's first meet would be! Since khushi is poor and a maid i could expect some more harshness from Arnav initially! Lets see! :) there is definatly more the arnav.

Im just waiting for my exams to get over so that i could follow it regularly! I hope you have updated it before my exams get over so that when i come back i would have updates to read!:)

Well i just loved it! To be frank i really felt that the entire story was going on in front of me! I could totally imagine it! thanks very much. i hope you like whats to come.

Nice one Zara! Do update soon! 😊

Originally posted by: -Zara-

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