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arhi_rules

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

READ BOTH CHAPTERS AT ONCE.

TOO CATCHY

PLEASE UPDATE SOON

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Ok, I read both the chapters and honestly, I loved the whole set up. It's so fresh and interesting.

So let me get this straight. Khushi is Shashi and Garima's daughter who lives with Madhumati her Buaji. Looks like Shashi and Garima both died. (In a fire? not sure, felt like it). Madhumati works as a gardener in Raizada house. Her friend Muskaan married Abhimanyu Raizada and again both of them are dead. Deyvani and Kushal are the grandparents of Arnav and it seems Kushal doesn't like Madumati and Khushi as well as Aman. Why? Not sure. Aman works for Raizadas just like Khushi. So can we hope for some story between Khushi and Aman here?😆 Was he the one who was observing Khushi?😛

Oooh! How could I forget Raja? He seems very cute and a perfect partner for Khushi. So I'm guessing here there is no Payal and Akash? Anjali is with her hubby abroad. Good! let her be there.😆

But Arnav seems like a nice guy here. Don't know about his arrogance yet. Coz he seemed nice to Aman.

And I really wonder what's up with Khushi. Why those ladies were shocked and refused the marriage proposal. Is it just because she is an orphan? or is there more to it.

One thing that struck me was Muskaan married the rich Raizada but Madumati remained poor. And why does she work for the Raizadas?

Btw, thanks for the scrap.

And I really loved this story. I could imagine the whole thing unfolding in my mind. Keep going and I'm sure this will be even better than price of freedom.

Edited by molten_lava - 13 years ago

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Homeslice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Sorry for not commenting for your last update!

Anyways I liked the chapter 1, but felt really bad for Khushi, I'm sure we'll get to know her background soon enough.

The best part was Arnav coming back and you did a fabulous job of describing it.

Kushal seems pretty high and mighty type while Devyani seems like our nani on the show, I fact I like Buaji here too.

Loved the idea of the dog as a companion.

Loved Muskaan maa as well xD

Aman is cute :)

Both the chapters were extremely well written!

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shivu124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

plz add me to ur buddy list

and i dnt get it man how can u write soo nicee and in detail srslly

i m soo addicted to ur FF

loved it

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Asmara.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

wow..nice...
Add me to u r pm list...
And continue soon...

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__blossom__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Wowww!!!
That was amazing!!!
I'm still si curious about khushi...
So the great ASR's back!!:D
Can't wait to read more...
Great update!!!!:)

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Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Love Khushi and Raja's companionship ... their playfulness is adorable ...

so Arnav has finally arrived ... waiting to see how they meet and their reaction to each other ...

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sruthirishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

so muskaan is arnav's mom..

y does kushal hate madhu,& kushi ...dis is getting interesting!!!

kushi & raja...love their f'ship😃

arnav sounds to b normal here..not d arrogant one

i loved d way he spoke to aman!!

more curious to know y d ladies rejected kushi?????

guess,sumthing may b wrong with her appearance..(as u mentioned sumthing abt fire-sashi-garima)

jus can't wait to read more..

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: -Gautami

Beautifully written!so,Shashi & garima died due some tragedy.then whose daughter is khushi..? or is she shashi daughter:S,,&& I dnt knw I am feeling bad for khushi...dnt knw wat past of khushi.has got madhumatiji bothered ,,,looks like an interesting twist ahead.

Arnav is muskan son,,i likd the memory..of hs ma..': Everything you choose is perfect Chote, because
your heart is.'...

Khusal is so arrogant..devyani is sweet..oh!we have aman too in the story.

interesting to see hw arnav meets khushi...and we have party cuming up..:D

awsum updt!wil wait for next part.

Khushi is shashi and garima's daughter. thank you for liking the memory. yep the meetings coming up.

thank you for your comment.😃

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Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN LOVED THE PLAYFULNESS OF RAJA N KHUSHI SO ADORABLE MUSKAAN IS ARNAV MOM N LOVED THE FLASBACK "EVERYTHING YOU CHOOSE IS PERFECT CHOTE BECAUSE UR HEART IS" LOVED IT ARNAV MADE HIS ENTRY N THAT TOO WITH STYLE Y DOESNT KUSHAL LIKE KHUSHI? YAAY WE GOT AMAN IN THIS STORY ALSO BUT FELT BAD FOR HIM INTERESTING CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW KHUSHI N ARNAV MEET N WE GOT A PARTY COMING UP CONTINUE SOO THANKS FOR THE PM

Thanks for your comment. Yep their meeting is coming very very soon. Arnav's entry is always in style😆

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Originally posted by: Shweta1691
So khushi's secret still not out...!!!
And she has a secret admirer too!!! Wow...is it who i think it is??😉 Ofcourse it is!!😃

Loved raja's and khushi's relation...full of comfortness and cheekiness and concern...oh how he got worried when she fell!! Adorable

And the prodigal grandson returns!!! Welcome👏
Dadaji is totally smitten with him😉

Let the party begin

C ya soon

You know!?!? clever clogs😉 thanks for liking raja. 😃 Dadaji is very important to Arnav and visa versa. 😊

Thanks very much for your comment.

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Originally posted by: -NishaSobti-
Sorry for not commenting for your last update!

Anyways I liked the chapter 1, but felt really bad for Khushi, I'm sure we'll get to know her background soon enough.

The best part was Arnav coming back and you did a fabulous job of describing it.

Kushal seems pretty high and mighty type while Devyani seems like our nani on the show, I fact I like Buaji here too.

Loved the idea of the dog as a companion.
Loved Muskaan maa as well xD

Aman is cute :)

Both the chapters were extremely well written!

thanks for liking my description of arnav. really appreciate it. You have got kushal, devayani and buaji characters completely right.

Thank you again!

xxx

Originally posted by: sruthirishi
so muskaan is arnav's mom..
y does kushal hate madhu,& kushi ...dis is getting interesting!!!

kushi & raja...love their f'ship😃
arnav sounds to b normal here..not d arrogant one
i loved d way he spoke to aman!!

more curious to know y d ladies rejected kushi?????
guess,sumthing may b wrong with her appearance..(as u mentioned sumthing abt fire-sashi-garima)

jus can't wait to read more..