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Just_Love

@Just_Love

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

That was an awesome update! Written brilliantly.

I really can't wait for ArHi's meeting. I'm literately jumping in excitement after reading about Arnav. He seems so 😍 Okay, maybe I'm going a bit crazy.. 😆

I loved the way you wrote, I can easily visualize everything in my head!

Thanks for the PM and please continue soon! :)

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@Tabsfully

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

lovely update...there is definitively some BIG twist hidden there...and for some reason, kushal seems he suspect

😳

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Beautifully written!so,Shashi & garima died due some tragedy.then whose daughter is khushi..?or is she shashi daughter:S,,&& I dnt knw I am feeling bad for khushi...dnt knw wat past of khushi.has got madhumatiji bothered ,,,looks like an interesting twist ahead.

Arnav is muskan son,,i likd the memory..of hs ma..': Everything you choose is perfect Chote, because
your heart is.'...

Khusal is so arrogant..devyani is sweet..oh!we have aman too in the story.

interesting to see hw arnav meets khushi...and we have party cuming up..:D

awsum updt!wil wait for next part.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN LOVED THE PLAYFULNESS OF RAJA N KHUSHI SO ADORABLE MUSKAAN IS ARNAV MOM N LOVED THE FLASBACK "EVERYTHING YOU CHOOSE IS PERFECT CHOTE BECAUSE UR HEART IS" LOVED IT ARNAV MADE HIS ENTRY N THAT TOO WITH STYLE Y DOESNT KUSHAL LIKE KHUSHI? YAAY WE GOT AMAN IN THIS STORY ALSO BUT FELT BAD FOR HIM INTERESTING CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW KHUSHI N ARNAV MEET N WE GOT A PARTY COMING UP CONTINUE SOO THANKS FOR THE PM

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

So khushi's secret still not out...!!!

And she has a secret admirer too!!! Wow...is it who i think it is??😉 Ofcourse it is!!😃

Loved raja's and khushi's relation...full of comfortness and cheekiness and concern...oh how he got worried when she fell!! Adorable

And the prodigal grandson returns!!! Welcome👏

Dadaji is totally smitten with him😉

Let the party begin

C ya soon

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samia19

@samia19

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

lovely concept, thx for the pm

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: anita_21492
Awesome update!!!!!!
I feel bad for khushi...but why does kushal not like her
Raja is just adorable
And yay arnav has arrived...so is muskaan his mom
Thanks for the pm
This is a first that I am the first one to comment...I am soon excited

thank you for the ecouraging comment. hope you love the next one. 😳 yes muskaan is arnavs mum. 😊

xxx

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: arhi101
Another brilliant update. Loving the story so far. The mischief and playfulness of khushi and raja are adorable. I wonder who was watching them??? i thought everyone would of figured it out but i'm so glad no one has 😆 pheeew!

Yes the mighty ASR has finally arrived, and that too with style. OMG Muskaan was his mum. Wow this is very interesting. Really looking forward to finding out what will happen next.

Can't wait for Khushi and Arnav's first meeting. That will be a treat to read😃 coming up!

I wonder why Kushal doesn't like Khushi or Madhumati? time will tell

Poor Aman, must have felt horrible in that situation.

Continue soon thanx for the pm welcome I'm actully quite scared cuz this is the first time i have thought out a story plan before hand and writing it up. my past works were always improvised,lol. i hope everyone likes and comments with thier thoughts cuz i really dont want this hard planning to go to waste😭.

gift

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

brilliantupdate dear...loved it very much...y the heck doesn't kushal like khushi...and oh my asr is back n with a bang but feel sorry for aman...poor fellow was humiliated for nothing...loved it very much dear n continue soon...thnx 4da pm...