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paircube

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Interesting story.
Can't predict a single thing.
Hope arhi meet soon.
Update soon.

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tj_barun

@tj_barun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

awesom update.
why khushi iz nt lyk by khushal.nd why dat women said dat khushi iz nt perfect??
arnav iz arrived at home hope sum question unfold in next updates.
plz pm me whn u update.

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jenshad

@jenshad

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Is Khushi An Orphan Or Something ?! 🤔 WHYY Does Everyone Hate Her Hon ?! ; O

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catalyst

@catalyst

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

wonderful update!

i kinda of feel bad for khusi!

ao muskaan is arnavz mom...cant wait for you to unfold the story!

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catalyst

@catalyst

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

awesome update!

arnav has arrived...loved the update!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Well this is most certainly interesting. I can't believe I didn't come across this before.

I loved Madhu and Muskaan's friendship is the beginning. It was really sweet.

I guess that whole middle generation is gone (except for Buaji) laving the traditional elders to fight with the modern youngsters.

You left me in a bind wondering what Khushi's 'flaw' is. You mentioned that everyone falls for her beauty, so she isn't physically disfigured in any way. Maybe not in places that are visible? Maybe she got a little burnt in the fire and people are repulsed by it?

Or it is something about her? She is Manglik or something like that? Born with a curse? Some trouble in her Kundali?

Dada rubs me the wrong way. He reminds me of an old aristocrat that still wants to cling on to the goo old days, despite time morning forward. Always seeking outward perfection while hiding skeletons in his own closet.

Dadi is really sweet

Okay now finally Arnav. Nothing much to say about him yet. He seems sensible. Proud and serious, but most certainly no ruthless ASR. Or maybe he is. I don't know yet.

Khushi has decided to never marry, so I think Arnav will meet her and be attracted to her, and she will keep pulling away

This is excellent so far. I love it!

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Whoa this was really really good! I read the first chapter and was wondering what had happened to muskaan by the end of it. I smiled at the para and pic abt Raja. I am a person who loves dogs and believe dat dogs can really sense if you are upset.
Second chap revealed a lot of info. Kushal and devyaani are the grandparents of arnav, abhimanyu and muskaan the parents.
The best part about this FF is dat u have used names very familiar to me like kushal,rathi,kinjal etc. You are an SP person aren't you ?😆

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Interesting story with new characters! It gives Arnav Khushi dynamics that much more exciting!

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

RES!

Hey saw your PM 🤗

well im really sorry because my university exams are going on now! 😭

Ill be free from august 3rd! So ill definitely read the story and will comment on it! 😊 Pakka!

*EDITED*

Firstly i thought i will not have time to read two chapters but then i got to take some snack time from my studies and i thought i should read at least one part but i finished both the parts because it was just so gripping! 👏

The story's outline is just amazing! There is a lot of past to be revealed in this story and im eagerly waiting to know that! :)

Khushi and Raja! First i though raja was to be her brother then i thought he was her friend then it turned out to be a DOG :) Im so already in love with Raja! 😳 I love dogs!

I just love Madhumathi's and devyani's character! So realistic and mature!

Kushal is damn arrogant! If arnav is gonna be ASR(Obviously!) then i would say that he has inherited it from his grandfather! 😈

The way kushal behaves with khushi,madhumathi and aman is slightly annoying though! 😡

Im so excited to know how arnava nd khushi's first meet would be! Since khushi is poor and a maid i could expect some more harshness from Arnav initially! Lets see! :)

Im just waiting for my exams to get over so that i could follow it regularly! I hope you have updated it before my exams get over so that when i come back i would have updates to read!:)

Well i just loved it! To be frank i really felt that the entire story was going on in front of me! I could totally imagine it!

Nice one Zara! Do update soon! 😊

Edited by GayuArnav - 13 years ago

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-PoisonIvy

@-PoisonIvy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Hey. First off, thank you for the PM letting me know about this FF! :) The prologue itself seemed very interesting! :)

Love the whole intrigue surrounding Khushi. The societal aspect coming in. The dynamics between the characters introduced so far is a nice quirk! I did not anticipate Arnav to be as humane as I have perceived him to be after that incident with Aman. I'm guessing his mother's influence? :)

Oh and I checked out the Tumblr! It is indeed a treat for the eyes.. the grandeur of it all! :)

Your writing flows at a languid pace. Looking forward to where you go with this! :)

I hope you would not mind continuing PMs for when you update? Thank you! :)

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