Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
part 13
shes hopeless...
and Sujal gave a royal ignore...
Ria ki tho nikal padi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 14

k-Tu to meri best friend hai. Tu meri wish puri kar. I don't want any Sujal-vujal

r- Han to tereko mil bhi thodi raha hai...yahan aa gai naa tu.. bas ab sab set hai.. naa tereko uski shakal dekhni padegi naa uska samaan aur naa usse baat karni padegi.. I'll handle all your calls if he calls.. ok? Agar milne bhi aaya to main baat kar lungi usse kahin bahar lejakar.. tujhe pareshaan nahi karega...

Kashish looks at her

k-Let's drink together. Ye meri wish thi. Usse kya lagta hai..wo nahi hoga to meri wish puri nahi hogi

r-To theek hai naa jo hogaya wo ho gaya kyon uske baare meni soch kar aur upset ho rahi hai..tujhe peeni hai na? Theek hai. Hum dono chalte hain. Chal tayaar ho jaa.. main tujhe talli karwati hoon proper

k-Kaise?

r-Main apne doston ko bhi bla leti hoon...sab milkar party karte hain

k-Mujhe laga hum ghar par hi...hum kahin jaa rahe hain?

r-Nahi nahi.. bahar jayenge..ghar par kya mazza. Chal taaayr ho main sab ko bula leti hoon

k-Par..par

r-No buts

k-Sujal tha to thik tha...i mean wo sambhal leta...tu kaise sambhalegi

r-Kyun wo kya kar lega? Kya sambhalna hai?

k-Mujhe...agar man talli hui to. I trust him

r-Mujhpe bharosa nhai hai mtlab..? Apne dushmanon par hi hai. Matlab mei kuch din keliye main kya ho gai.. mera chapter hi close kar diya tune

k-Aisa nahi hai...par...he is man naa so

r- Ufff ladka hai so it's even worse. You never trust guys in bars... never. Chal ab kuch nahi hoga

She puches Kashish to get ready

Kashish thoda hesitate sa kar rahi h, uncomfortable sa feel kar rahi hai

Ria 2-3 friends ko aur bula ltei hai.. ladies are dressed to kill as they go to a nightclub

Kashish ki kamar par hath dalke the friends drags her to the car and then into the nightclub while ignoring her protests

Andar jaa kar they settle in a booth

Wahan ek jakar bottle aur glass le ati hai

Sab peena chalu karte hain.. Kashish ko bhi pilaatein hain haath pakad kar agar wo zyada protest kare to

Kashish ko to lag raha hai bhaag jaye...wo comfort level missing sa hai...mann sa nahi lag raha...par sab pila rahe hain.. 4-5 type ke le aye hain.. kabhi ye drink.. kabhi wo cocktail kabhi ye cocktail

Kashish keh rahi hai, mujhe nahi peeni.Ii don't like the taste par usse zabardasti pila diya

Kaafi kuch pila diya 1 ghante mein

Kashish dheere dheere dizzy sa feel kar rahi h

k-Please..please...nah.I am not..feeling well..please

Sabhi kafe talli ho gaye the.. 1 ko chod kar.. she apparantly had high capacity for alcohol

To sab kehte hain ki han bohto gaya ab yahan nahi peene chaihiye warna we'll pass out. They all troop outside...get catcalls and woof whistles throughout the time

Kashish ka to sar ghum raha tha

k-I wanna go home..I..am not feeling well

They get to the car 1 ladki ka driver tha to sabne Kashish ko kaha don't worry baby chal rahe hain.. we'll carry you.. chalo chalo..

Sab ek gadi mein bhar jate hain.. joo thodi sober si thi... wo beech mein liquor shop par ruk kar 2 aur bottle kharid lati hai

Sab pohonchti hain Ria ke gar

Kashish to ankhen band karke padi hui thi poori journey mein

Sab ke sab utar jate hain ghar aate hi ki jo kasar bach gai thi wo wahan poori kar lenge..in drunken singing haze they all troop inside

Bottlein khulti hain...sab aur peete hain...aim is to drink until you pass out

Kashish ki tabiyaat kharab lag rahi thi, usse paas mein takiya laga kar leta dete hain..-'poor baby not well... rest karo.. shh chalo rest karne do...'

Beech beech mein gana gaa rahe hain...

Kashish sone se lage to hallaa karke utha dein...beech beech mein usse aur pilane ki koshish kare...ek ke baad aise hi they all pass out wahin palang pe

Kashish is feeling irritated..frustrated...she staggers to a corner with her phone and calls Sujal in her stupor

Sujal sees Kashish's no. and ignores her.. .he doesn't want to hear any more annoying complaining in middle of the night

Waise bhi usse pata hai ki ab Ria Kashish ke saath hai so he isn't worried ki usko kuch problem ho rai hogi...

Kashish calls again

Sujal ko lagta hai ki iss baar utha lena chaiye, agar gusse mein kar rahi hoti to dobaara na karti

s- Hello?

k-Take me home

She blabbers in her stuppor

s-What? Kahan ho tum? Are you drunk?

k-I don't wanna stay here. Take me home

s-Kashish kahan ho? Ria kahan hai?

Kashish sniffle sa ka rahi h ai

s- Caro {Dear(Italian)}... talk to me.. where are you?

k-eh...eh...Ria's place...eh

s- Are you ok?

k-I don't like it ..here...I wanna go homeee

s- ok .. ok.. I am coming... I am coming.. how much did you drink?

He says getting out of bed and getting ready to leave

She is still sniffling, bachchon jaise naak sikudke

s- Kisne pilaya tumko itna? Huh?

Sujal is working while keeping her on the phone, grabbing his keys he rushes to his car.. phir vroom vroom

Ek tokashish ko tabiyat kharab lag rahi hai..uske upar saare talli ek hi bed pe pade hain..kabhi koi uthta hai to koi kuch karta hai

Sujal reaches and rings the bell

Kashish jaise taise uthke jaati hai, it's so difficult for her, everything is moving around her

Sujal andar khusta hai and holds Kashish by her shoulders-

s-Are you ok, miele{honey(Italian)}?

Kashish lipat jaati hai Sujal se and closes her eyes as if finding solace in him

s-Kashish...it's ok.. I'll take you home... don't worry

She looks at him

s-Main Ria ko andar bol kar ata hoon ki main tumhe le ja raha hoon

He says making her lean against the nearby wall

Kashish pouts bada wala

k-You don't care about me, itni si bhi parwah nahi hai

s- I don't?

She starts stomping her feet with bada wala pout and shakes her head

s- Kashish stop this and stay. Main Ria ko bol kar aata hoon

She holds him, phir lipat gai, shaking her head vigorously

Sujal Kashish ko phir dheere se door karta hai

s-Stay.. just give me 5 seconds. Chalo close your eyes

Kashishk neSujals ko jakda hua hai, kahin jaane de tab na

Sujal Kashish ko door karta hai

s-Tumhe jana hai na ghar ?

She giggling happily looking at him

s- Caro{dear}.. Kashish... please chalo ghar chalte hain

Sujal Kashish ko kisi tarah se pakad kar car tak le jaata hai aur bethata hai

Sujal is driving and she is sitting next to him

Kashish uthke achanak sits on his lap...her feet on her seat and she is sitting on his lap with her hands around his neck

Sujal turns the car wildly managing not to crash into anyone as traffic nahi tha zyada and parks road ke side mein

s- Kashish this isn't going to happen. Now I need you to sit on your own seat . I can't drive and my legs hurt this way

k-Kiss me !


Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
part 14
nice part...
ab aayi line pe...
cont soon dear...
update ur title dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 14
nice part...
ab aayi line pe...
cont soon dear...
update ur title dear...


o thx for notifying me dear...i am so stupid...and was wodering y aent anybody commenting...waise iss stry ke comment bohot kamm a arahe hain...kya stry itni buri hai...please refer it to r frnds if u lik it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Great parts... Loving the fic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome cont soon loved sujal concern
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Originally posted by: storywriter


o thx for notifying me dear...i am so stupid...and was wodering y aent anybody commenting...waise iss stry ke comment bohot kamm a arahe hain...kya stry itni buri hai...please refer it to r frnds if u lik it



no probs dear...in fact me too thought u didnt update but just scrolled down and there twas the 14th part...story will pick up once it goes forward...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Sorry for late update...my net is giving me a bad time


PART 15

Kashish uthke achanak sits on his lap...her feet on her seat and she is sitting on his lap with her hands around his neck

Sujal turns the car wildly managing not to crash into anyone as traffic nahi tha zyada and parks road ke side mein

s- Kashish this isn't going to happen. Now I need you to sit on your own seat . I can't drive and my legs hurt this way

k-Kiss me !

s- But I have bad breath right now

Sujal says turning away

k-Kizz me!

She is pulling his collar

s- I will in the morning...loads of them, we'll make out properly

He is trying to loosen her hold, turning his face away

Usse laga ki since she is drunk he should be gentle and nice and treat her like a kid and that would be the best way to handle...yahan to maan hi nahi rahi hai

k-NOOO

She shakes her head and gives a drunk smile touching her nose to his

k-KIZZ ME

Sujal finally chilla deta hai bohot zor se.. ki khidki ke kanch bhi hil gaye

s-KASHISH!!!

She shuts her eyes

s-Stop it!! Fermarlo {Stop (Italian)}!!!

Sujal uthake rakh deta hai Kashish side wali seat par aur seat belt laga deta hai

s- One more thing and peeche baitha dunga.. do you want me to do that? Tumhe akele peeche baithna hai?

Kashish bada wala pouts

s-Peeche saanp bhi hain

k-Huh????????????????

s-Agar mujhe drive karte hue pareshaan kiya to wahin bhej dunga

Sujal says and starts driving

k-MUMMYYY

s- Chup!!!! Chillaogi to bhi bhej dunga

k-Whyyy

s-Bilkul chup hokar apni seat par baitho warna punishment meni peeche bhej dunga

Kashish Sujal ka chin pakadke apni aur khinchti hai

k-Whyyy. You don't like me???? You like that RIAAA

Sujal phir car rokta hai

k-BI**HHH

s-Nnai manogi tum? Theek hai tumhe peeche diggi mei daal dete hain with scorpions and snakes

He says and gets out ; jata hai Kashish ki side wala gate kholta hai

k-Nooo no no no please no please

Sujal uski seat belt hatata hai

s- No, you are a bad girl. You should be punished

k-Finger on my lipzzz

Finger chipkaa leti hai lips se

s- You promise to sit quietly and not move?

She nods

s- Agli baar I won't even ask

He says threateningly and wapas aakar baith jata hai and starts driving

Kashish pure raasste finger on her lips hai with a big pout

Pohonchte hain wo log unki bulding mein

Sujal gets out aur aakar Kashish ka gate kholta hai and smiles at her

Usko help karta hai utarne mein

Sujal Kashish ka hath pakad kar makes her stand on the ground

s- Good girl

She extends both her arms

k-Carry me

She giggles like a loony

s-You can't walk? Shame on you...even a 1 year old can walk

Sujal says showing disapproval

s- Haww tumhe itna bhi nahi aata.. tch tch tch...

k-CHUP RAHO !!!!!!!!!!!

She grabs his collar and pulls him

k-Carry me

s- Main bigdi hui ladkiyon ki baat kyun maanu jinko chalna bhi nahi aata?

He curls his hand around her waist firmly

s-Chalo

She pouts but her eyes are droopy and heavy and finally her eyes are closed as she leans on Sujal

He mutters some Italian curses and picks her up over his shoulder and takes her inside

She is blabbering something on her way

He takes her to his apartment and lays her on his bed, takes off her sandals, usko chadar udata hai

She giggles as she feels tickle as he removes the footwear

Thode second dekhta hai her sleeping and then goes out...aaj raat couch zinda baad

Ab s sone chala gaya to Sujal ko thodi der baad awaaz aati hai

'Yooouuu svinelezzz baz**** !!!!!!!!!!!!'

Sujal uthta hai ..kaun kahan kya?...jata hai hai jahan se awaz aa rahi hoti hai

Kashish phone pe chilla rahi thi

k-YOOU JERKKK

Sujal dekhta hai her shouting at some one...1 bar sochta hia ki phone chinnle as he notices ki phone to uska use kar rahi hai.. phir socha hai ki kya Kashish aur bikhar jaegi aadhi raat ko...roegi, uspe chillaegi, 10 pange karegi... isse achha to jisse bhi baat kar rai hai usse subah ek bar apologize karlenge

k-YOOOUUU YOOOUUU F**********...I'LL NOT LEAVE UUU K************** YOUUU D*******

Sujal also thinks Kashish had been pretty closed up about her personal life.. nahi pasand tha usse kuch bhi share karna... to Sujal gate band karke wapas aa kar let jata hai

Subah hoti hai-

Sujal tab uth jaata hai, jis stime per oz office jaane ke lie uthta hai

Wo jata hai dekhta hai ki Kashish to ab tak so rahi hai soochta hai ki utha ki hi jau office.. peche se apne aap uthi to akeli hogi

s- Kashish

He goes and open all the curtains in the room

Kashish groans and mooh dhak let jaatai hai

Sjal hatata hai takiya and cover

s- Kashish!!!

She groans

k-ehhh

s- Utho

He goes and makes her something for her hangover and headache aur laakar rakhta hai bed ke paas

s- Utho.

She sits up with her disheveled hair and badlyyy aching head

He puts the glass in her hand, sits next to her and makes her drink

s- Piyo

k-Hmm

She looks at him then again lowers her eyelashes

k-Thanks

Sujal just nods- hmm

sab kuch pila kar he gets up

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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poor guy...

wonder what will K say now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 15
nice part...
bechara Sujal...
shes tough to handle...
cont soon dear...

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