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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey please...guys comment...the fic is suffering frm low comments...plz recommend it to ur frnds if u like it and if u dnt then please let me know the reason y...please dears need u all

PART 16

She sits up with her disheveled hair and badlyyy aching head

He puts the glass in her hand, sits next to her and makes her drink

s- Piyo

k-Hmm

She looks at him then again lowers her eyelashes

k-Thanks

Sujal just nods- hmm

Sab kuch pila kar he gets up

She gets up..Sujal ke side se

k-I should go

s- No stay rest..main tumahri friend ko keh deta hoon ki tum yahi ho ab..

k-Nahi..emm..I.Ii am fine [She is red with embarrassment]

s- Rest

He say patting her shoulder and backing her to bed gently

k-I'll go...thanks for everything and sorry

s- It was nothing.Thodi der aur lete jao..par agar tumhe jaana hai to theek hai... main tayar ho kar aata hoon..then I'll drop you

k-No..I..I'll manage...I'll take a cab

s- Kashish sit back relax.. tumhari tabiyat warna kharab ho jaegi. I'll drop you

k-Nahi..I can take care of myself...I am fine

Sujal feels she is hesitant and embarrassed for the first time ever

She gives him a polite smile

s- I did not say you can't take care of yourself; I just asking you to take it easy. I guess tumhe kuch zarui kaam hoga

Sujal jaata hai and brings Kashish's sandals aur de deta hai usse

k-Thanks

Sujal calls for a taxi to dekhta hai wo number jispar Kashish ne call kiya tha.. it was a unknown number to socha ki puch liya jaye

s- By the way whose no is this?

He says showing her the number

Kashish looks over her shoulder and is horror struck

k-How..how did you..get..this nmber?

s- You used my phone last night to abuse the person this number belongs to

Kashish numb and white as sheet...jaise abhi ro degi...last limit of embarrassment

She claps her hand to her mouth in horror

s-Aisa kiska no. hai?

k-oh God! oh God I am so sorry

s-Sorry?

Her eyes are hazing with tears

k-I am..so..sorry

s-kashish kya hua hai/kiska no hai? Why are you apologizing all of a sudden?

Sujal makes her sit down

s-Talk to me. Batao kya hua hai

k-I am sorry...I...I'll call and apologize..I..Its nothing..I..guess I..should go...don't worry..I'll sort this out

Sujal khada hua hai Kashish ke samne rasta block karke as she is sitting on his bed he is towering high over her

s-You'll sort it out after you answer my question and while we are at it.. why did you get so drunk last night? Did someone force you to drink that much that you felt sick?

k-It's getting late for your office...you are not unemployed like me. You should go to office

s-Don't patronize please its irritating... if you don't want me to be late wont you rather answer quickly than dodge the question?

k-No..I..it's nothing like that...I am sorry to have bothered you. You shouldn't pay heed next time...if it ever happens againn

Sujal crosses his arms around his chest not moving and giving an inch

Kashish looks at him and sighs

k-Stop worrying about me..I am not a baby and you are not my care taker

s-No I am not, I wouldn't have even insisted on interfering this deeply after so much of refusal and resentment from your side but I guess I was just being polite.. I could have called the no. myself. But since you are going such great length to avoid all human concern and help then fine

Sujal phone se no. delete kar deta hai dialled no.s list se

s- Tumhe jo theek lage karo. Agar kisi friend ki zarurat ho to I am there for you.

Sjal chala jata hai kamre ke bahar

k-Wait

s-What?

k-Where are you going?

s-To make my breakfast

k-I'll make it for you

s- No thank you

k-I always do

s- I have been used to it for my whole life and since you are not going to be here anyways...I better stop spoiling myself.. besides..I don't accept charity

Sjal jakar starts making poached eggs for himself

k-If someone asks me to stay I can

s- You have been asked and you have refused. I respect people's decision and don't badger them plus you are not a kid to be ordered

k-When was I asked? And people order those who they feel are close to them

s- Then call it a cultural difference coz we order only kids; adults have calm discussion..and you don't remember me asking you to stay coz you probably don't want to stay

k-Close people have right on each other. But you won't agree; so be it. I guess Italians know better

s-Italians are Italians.. I grew up that way.. if you expect me to change and break my habits overnight...

He shrugs and leaves the sentence hanging

k-Who am I to expect

s- I offered friendship..its yours to accept and refuse..

Kashish ka phone rings. It's her friend. She is getting frantic

k-Hmm...thik hoon...Sujal ke ghar...aa rahi hu...thik hai

Kashish phone rakh deti hai

k-Thank you again..and sorry againn...good bye..have a nice day

Kashish mud jaati hai

s- You don't have to apologize.. bye

Sujal neechte tak Kashish ko chod kar aata hai

Kashish phonchti hai friend ke wahan grim sa chehra banake

Sujal comes in the eving frm office and finds the door of Kashish's place unlocked

But he pretends to not care and ignores.. coz of the way she had been acting lately

Kashish nikallti hai wearing a casual dress

k-Hi

Sujal just nod sat his like a friendly neighbor..opens his door and goes in

k-I am going out...will you come?

But he went in before he could hear

She knocks at his door

He opens

k-I am going out, will you come...with me?

s-Do you need a ride?

k-I want you to come with me

s- Where are you planning to go?

k-just..come no

s-Look if you don't particularly need an escort then I'd rather not go, I had a long day at work

k-I have to get some groceries and..have to meet someone..please..I insist

s- Can't you tell me who you have to meet? I am in mood for wild goose chase

k-Just someone. Come

She drags him

k-Sujal, I am really sorry about my mindless behavior. We are still fiend, aren't we?

She looks at him with a puppy face

s-We are friends when it conveniences you

He has narrowed eye shrewd look

She looks down and retrieves her steps

But he doesn't feel guilty

k-I really wished...you would have come

s- I would come if you really need an escort... I'd rather not just come if it's an ordinary outing as I am tired. Why do you think I was asking you? Apart from that I am no one to force anyone

s-I asked u clearly... and you wouldn't tell...dio le donne! [God women!] Fine I'll come

k-Dio what?

She smiles

k-Thanks

He goes in picks up his coat and keys..mobile and comes back out

s-Where to?

The mall

They get in his car and go to the mall

She checks the watch as they finally reach

She enters a designer showroom. She again checks her watch. She is a bit in sweats

The sales woman was showing her the petite size dress...that was her size

k-No..get me the large size

She again checks the watch

k-Yup...this is nice..what do you think Sujal?

She again wipes her sweat of her forehead

Sujal isn't paying attention enough to notice.. idhar udhar mobile mein...

k-Sujal!

s-Hmm yah sure..whatever you like

k-yeah..ok..gift wrap it

She tells the sales women

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
for whom is she waiting...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
part 16
Kashish is really a fool...
is she trying to patch Sujal and Ria?
then Sujal should really give her some sense in the harsh way...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Part 13
guess Ria ki kismat mein sujal se milna likha tha 😆 hope she is happy now 😆😆 kabse taras rahi thi 😆😆😆

dinner date 😛😛 all the best girl 😆😆😆...Njoy 😊

Part 14

aww poor kashish got drunk 😛😛 ... anyways it benefitted 😛😉😆😆 jhagda solve 😛😆😆 hopefully 😆😆😆

Part 15

Lolz i thot one more wish gona complete from the list 😉 😆 but sujal seems not ready to fulfill 😆😆😆

thank god they reached safe & sound 😊😛 & without fighting 😛😆 poor sujal apne hi room mein nahi so sakta 😆😆...good to see him taking care of her 😊😛.i wonder raat ko phone par kiski watt lagi 😆😆😆

Part 16

hope they be friends again 😛😆 sujal is being so sweet & accomdating to her😛😃 ...now i wonder for whom the gift goes for 😛😛 ...& is Ria's date still on schedule 😆😆😆




😆😃


😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Part 12 & 13
So Kashs' friend Ria's here...she seems to be a good friend who's worried about Kash and surely got a crush on Sujal😆
But my o my Kash is still angry and i don't think she's acting childish in fact i think she's going perfect...not at all crying or sulking somewhere in the corner.
She knows what she's doing and hopes to carry it on.
I think it was a good decision to return all the items she had of Sujal...here Sujal showing his charms and she's totally unaffected by it, which is great but... someone's not immune to his attractiveness😆😆 Ria's totally flirting and even got a date...very smooth.
One thing i liked the most here is that Kash is NOT jealous!!!!
She's totally cool with it n just minds her own business.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Part 14 & 15
Kash planned to get drunk so Ria helped her by calling some of her own friends who are obviously the experts of drinking...forcing Kash to drink n all.
Everyone got drunk n went to Ria's house...poor Kash feeling dizzy n light headed...
I'm glad she didn't face any problem like somebody abducting her or taking advantage of her drunken state...i mean that would've been cliche n filmy.
Here she called Sujal and told him to take her home...a good decision made while being drunk,wow!😆
Sujal didn't took any advantage but acted like a proper gentleman and took her home safely but with a lot difficulty😆😆
O Kash must be cursing her boss...huh,guess the guy deserves it..may be getting drunk is not that bad after all Kash is taking out all her pent up frustration n anger...she needed it.
Let me tell you that those three Italian words just killed me...just reading it felt sooo amazing...yeah i get happiness in these small little things.
Aaannnd "aaj raat couch zindabaad"🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Part 16
Kash is all awake n embarrassed for her previous behaviour and Sujal is not showing any sign of anger or discomfort but being polite all the way.
Well I'm guessing it was her boss whom she called n may be the new dress is for him😆😆😆 WHAT??? I can imagine, right?
Aah how much i love your story...they are behaving just in the way i want them to be...not lovey-dovey but realistic...they know what they're doing especially Sujal who's character is totally understandable,the way he answers n handles any situation is impressive n so far I'm liking it.
Don't know about others but this chapter is perfect in my opinion.
Ooohh and don't let them fall in love before chapter 100 or something...I mean don't even let them have crush on each other n I'm serious...but don't listen to me it's your story.😊
LOVED IT...continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 17

She enters a designer showroom. She again checks her watch. She is a bit in sweats

The sales woman was showing her the petite size dress...that was her size

k-No..get me the large size

She again checks the watch

k-Yup...this is nice..what do you think Sujal?

She again wipes her sweat of her forehead

Sujal isn't paying attention enough to notice.. idhar udhar mobil mei...

k-Sujal!

s-Hmm yah sure..whatever you like

k-yeah..ok..gift wrap it

She tells the sales women

s-That's all you gonna buy?

She nods

Sujal nods too and shrugs...

s- Where to now then?

k-Chalo..we have to go to...[checks her mobile]...to..sea weed restaurant

s-Sea weed?

He says and starts to walk with her

s-Is there where we are meeting this person?

She nods

k-Do you think she will like the gift?

s- How I can tell what a woman may like or not

k-No..I mean its good naa

s-Sure u have a nice taste

Kashish smiles...

k-Thanks and thanks you came...I couldn't have done this alone

s- I don't see why you can't select a piece of clothing on your own

k-No...not about that...about the meeting thing. I didn't have the courage to do it alone

They reach the lavish restaurant and take a seat

k-I know she is nice ..but...she was really nice on phone. I hope she likes what I got

Sujal just nods...jo bhi pata chal jaega..usse pehle poocha tha.. tab nahi bataya. Usse umeed nahi hai ki ab bhi batayegi... waise bhi he is done begging and cajoling...and in a while he would find out for himself.. so little patience is all he needs

Kashish is checking the watch again and again and playing with the tissue to curb her nervousness

s-Shall we order?

k-Huh?

k-See, we can wait for Mrs. Gupta

s- Do I know her?

k-May be, she is Mr. Gupta's wife

She looks at him...and bites her lips in nervousness

s-Do I know Mr. Gupta?

She nods

k-He was my boss

s-I don't recall knowing the man, enlighten me

Sujal ko strike nahi kiya ho ki Kashish apne boss jiske sath uska affair reh chuka hai usi Mr. Gupta ki wife se mil rahi hai...usse bechare ki strike hi nahi kiya ki Kashish ye kaam bhi kar sakti hai

k-I told you...she is Sumair Gupta's wife

s- You mean you are meeting with the wife of the man you had an affair with?

He says gazing at her with his black eyes which had turned stony; his lips are pursed in a thin line

She nods looking down

s- To do what?

k-I called her...and had apologized to her and she wanted to meet me

s- And i am here to assure her that there isn't anything more between him and you

k-No no, you are just here as my friend and she is a very nice lady. She was very nice to me on phone

Sujal nods mutely...he is not happy to be present.. he doesn't wanna tangle between two women.. who sleep with the same man

Kashsih looks up happily as a woman walks in with her brigade of shrewd looking women consisting of 5-6 more women

Kashish gets up with a smile

k-Hi

TISHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish is slapped hard

Mrs. Gupta-U B*********** !!!!!!!!!!

Kashish is perplexed

Mrs Gupta-YOU W************* SLEEPING WITH MY HUSBAND HUH! YOU CHARACTERLESS @$%$$%

TISHHH !!!!!!!!!! TISHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She pulls Kashish's hair mercilessly

k-Aaah!

She cries with pain

Sujal gets up...looking here and there; shocked himself

Mrs. Gupta-WE WILL ALL TEACH YOU A LESSON

The waiter comes with his tray

They get handful of raw eggs

Kashish ke upar saari ladies milke ande maarne lagti hain

Mrs. Gupta announce to the people around that Kashish is a home breaker, isle she is teaching her a lesson and all women should join her

Kashish ke sarr pe ande maar maar ke sana dia aur 2-4 maarke nikal gai

Kashish bechari dubki padi thi helplessly...wo to bechari bhala karne gai thi

Kashish mooh chupake ro rahi hai

Sujal Kashish ka haath pakad kar usse wahan se bahar le jaata hai

Kashish has hidden her face in her hands in the trama while Sujal is giving her direction holding her hand

He takes her to some other section of the mall

He takes into the washroom and bolts the door

He can bend her head in the basin and wash off the egg from her face and bits of hair as much as he can...hath sleeves sab dhulwata hai hai...usse pochne ko kehta hai tissue laakar

He makes her wait there and goes to get some clean clothes to wear aise bahar nikelgi to sab stare karenge...

She was sobbing like a helpless baby all the while

Sujal aata hai 10 minte mein.. jo usse sabse theek 1 peice dikha wo utha kar...jakar he givs it to Kashish and tells her to change it

She was sobbing shutting the door of one of the stalls

k-You..you go..I..will..manage...you..you..don't have...to..help me...please

She doesn't want him to stick to her in this ultra embarrassing and messy situation as that's humiliating for him too

s-Change , then I'll take u back

k-Please...you..don't have to say...

She sounds as if she can have a nervous breakdown any moment

s- Look, you can change and we can leave or you can no change and we can leave...your choice dear

She changes and come out while looking pitiable; her face is swollen red and smeared with tears

She walks out with her head down

Sujal uska haath casually pakadta hai and then bade araam se use bahar lekar ataa hai

He opens the car door for her and then starts driving

She feels she would die of shame. As she is recalling the incidence; she is shivering slightly

s- You want to go to your place or your friends place?

k-Huh? M..my...p..place

s- ok

Sujal ghar le jata hai

Wahan he walks her to her place

She squeaks a thanks and shuts herself inside

Sujal uske gate band karne se pehla kehta hai ki

s-Don't worry too much about it..they were...crazy women...they shouldn't have done that...you didn't deserve any of it

She nods slightly and shuts the door

s-Let me know if you need me

He says gate ke bahar se and he goes back to his place

He is worried ki Kashish depression mein aakar phr koi harkat na kar le and he is convinced that Indian women are crazy

He also thinks Kashish is foolish to think that something like patching up with your ex's wife can happen

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was really bad...

poor K...but y did she try to make amends...i mean it was foolish on her part...
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sad to see wat kash went through cont soon

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