DARK ALLY/LAST PART PAGE 54 - Page 5

Tat was fabulous..i hav a feelin tat dis fanfic is goin to b twice as interesting then the unknowns..o well keep up da great work, can't wait to c wut happens next 😃

Nida 😊

me loves it!!! plllllz continue soooon!!! grrr8 part! 😃

wow!!!
omg..i LOVED that part!!!
AWESOME! 👏

Originally posted by: kneeduh2000

Tat was fabulous..i hav a feelin tat dis fanfic is goin to b twice as interesting then the unknowns..o well keep up da great work, can't wait to c wut happens next 😃

Nida 😊

thanks

iam trying to make this my best fan fic ever and try to get a lot of people to like my fan fic and read it more

i just love it when people tell me that my story was good the more people comment it helps me post part more faster lol

thanks for the great comment😃

👏 👏 👏 wow!!! 😃 -im smiling bigger then this. 😆 😆 OMG!!!!!And I thought nuthin cud be as gud as the unknowns!!!!!!!! Like WOW!!!!!This is way different then the unknowns but its just as gud or mayb better(prob not, cause the unknowns waz amazin and this is JUST as gud!!!!!!!! Like WOW!! Angad shirtless 😉 😳 😳 God, why couldnt i b Kripa? 😭 😛 😆 newayz, cont soon plz.

Originally posted by: lillzakz

👏 👏 👏 wow!!! 😃 -im smiling bigger then this. 😆 😆 OMG!!!!!And I thought nuthin cud be as gud as the unknowns!!!!!!!! Like WOW!!!!!This is way different then the unknowns but its just as gud or mayb better(prob not, cause the unknowns waz amazin and this is JUST as gud!!!!!!!! Like WOW!! Angad shirtless 😉 😳 😳 God, why couldnt i b Kripa? 😭 😛 😆 newayz, cont soon plz.

lol i had a feeling someone was going to say that😆

any way i will continue the next part sometime today😃

omg omg omg your story is soo cool
plz try to wwrite more coz its so good
keep up the great work
enjoy

i jst read the last 2 parts. ur doing really great. OMG i could acctually imagine the scene going on jst reading 😆 . do continue soon really want to read wht happens next. 👏

part 4


a-how may i help you

the way angads voice sounded kripa knew he had no intenshion in helping her with her homework and kripa was starting to get nervouse by him being so close to her

a-so what question are you on

grins realy big

k-11

a-can i see the paper

kripa lets out a hand to give the paper to angad but before kripa could give the paper to angad. angad grabs kripas hand. kripa looks at angad and see that same stare he was giveing her in the moring. kripas heart melts right then. kripa starts truning red and looks down

k-can you let go of my hand

a-oh sorry i didnt notice

by hearing angads voice kripa could tell he did it on porpous and wasnt to sorry about it either

angad helped kripa with question 11 every time he tried to show something in a book or something he would grab kripas hand instead or he would pretend to streach and touch kripa on the neck or cheek or something like that

a-lets move to question 12

k-no thanks i dont need your help

a-come on i was just messing with you

k-well i dont like these types of jokes

a-well what type of jokes do you like

comes realy close to kripa and brings his lips towrads kripas ears like he did in the moring

a-because iam made of all types of jokes say the word and iam all yours

kripa starts to fell realy sick at the moment and pushs angad a little bit away from her kripa didnt push to hard because she didnt want to touch him at all at the moment. right then rani comes in the room with food

r-ok bhi looks like you forgot to go shop and pick up some food so your just going to have to eat egg sandwhich

a-uuugggghhh i hate egg sandwhich

r-well its all we have for eating

a-well after your home work is done how about we go out to eat. kripa will you join us

k-no i can

r-come on kripa dont say no please

k-no i realy cant

kripa was now geting very nervouse becuase she knew that rani was going to beat her in the convershation. finily kripa gave up

k-fine will come

a-thats great

rani and kripa continued doing there homework and angad helped them but once in a while when rani wasnt looking angad would touch kripas hand or her cheek or drag his hand through kripas hair and kripa would try and back away from angad or call ranis name so she would look up to see what angad was doing but it never worked because angad would move back to fast

finily rani and kripa's homework was finished and to kripa it felt like 5 hours of homework but realy it was only 1 hour

a-should we go out and eat

r-sure, kripa leave your things here we will come back and pick them up

k-ok

rani went out the door first and kripa followed as kripa when out the door angad sliped his hand around kripas waist

k-rani

as rani turned angad let go of kripas waist

a-you 2 wait in the hall i will go and find my self a nice shirt to wear

in the hall

k-rani dose your brother have lots of girl firends

rani laughs realy hard

r-bhi and a girl friend never in a million years

rani laughs so much that she almost starts cry

r-girlfriend you must be jokeing, bhi couldnt flurt with a girl even if he tried

k-(thinking)if i tell rani what angad has been going she will never belive me. form all the brothers in the world rani had to have angad as a brother.


hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon

that was really good. continue soon 👏