DARK ALLY/LAST PART PAGE 54 - Page 7

I just read ur fan fic and it is great like ur last fan fic the unkowns plz cont.
Cute Angle 😛

hey i just read the whole thing today and it's really great pls write some more soon angad is really funny loved the way you wrote the fafncition 😆

Originally posted by: night girl

sence rani is played by me i made rani like me. i also dont know about my brother if some one came up to me and said dose your brother like blue i would laugh and say no he like red even when my brother like blue i just wouldnt know for sure i would think color red is his fav colorbecause red is my brother bed room color😆so rani is like me

I have a brother to (who is older) and now that I think about it, I really dont know stuff. I know he's had to girl friends...or I only met two. N favourite colour?....am I even supposed to know? I know that he hates waking up! (does that even count?)-(I know that cause I have to wake him up almost every day, n he is th emeanest at that time. He is such a grump I swear!) Ne wayz, plz do cont soon!

part 5



angad came out of his room wearing blue jeans and black tansparnt shirt

a-ready to go ladies

r-lets go

rani kripa and angad start walking to the restrunt and angad trys to start a conversation with kripa

a-so kripa who is in your family

k-me my mom and my sister

a-no dad

k-no he died in a car accident

a-iam sorry about that

angad grabs kripas hand so to rani it would look like he was confortin her.kripa pulled her hand out of angad grip

k-no need to be sorry i never liked my dad any way

a-oh

all of them reach the restrunt and got seated. all of them sat in one of those square tables so rani was siting beside angad and kripa was siting across from angad as far as possible. the waiter brought water and angad ordered for both rani and kripa

waiter-your food will be hear in a few mins

rani starts telling angad about all her class and every thing but angad wasnt listening he was just giveing kripa the stare and the famouse grin but kripa couldnt figure out why angad was grining because kripa was across the table from angad if he tried to touch her he would have to do it over the table and rani would notice. kripa started to get nervouse so she starts drinking some water to calm her self down but as soon as water went in kripa mouth it came out of her mouth 3 times faster because kripa felt something go up her leg and it wasnt a bug it was angads feet clawing up kripas leg

r-kripa are you ok you just spit out water 3 times faster then you drank it

k-i just chocked on my water

kripa looked at angad and he was just playing with his fork like he was doing nothing. kripa moved her leg back a litte but angads leg kept moveing with hers no matter were kripa kept her legs angads legs could always reach kripas legs

r-bhi i will be right back from the ladies room

as soon as rani was out of sight kripa blew up

k-stop it!!!!

a-stop what(not looking at kripa)

kripa through a spoon on angads head but angad grabed the spoon before it could reach his head and looks into kripas eyes and kripa stared into angad eyes

a-kripa i like you cause your diffrent and iam not going to leave you alone untill you come to me

k-how iam i diffrent than any one else

a-because in your eyes any one can read your whole life story

k-what do you mean

a-if any one looks in to your eyes long enough they can tell that all you want to do is be loved

k-no i dont need love to live iam happy were iam

angad grins and look down and starts playing with his fork

a-lier, you can lie to other but you cant lie to me

k-your wrong i do get love my mom loves me my sister loves me

a-i dont mean that kind of love i mean another kind of love

k-what other love

angad takes his feet off of kripa leg and leans foward towards kripa

a-what i mean by is phical love

kripa starts shaking

a-come on admit it you liked it when i came close to you and touched you

k-(angry)no your wrong(almost crying)

angad give a big grin

a-i knew it you do like it when iam close to you. you want to come close to me but you try and make your self stay away from me

k-no your wrong

a-admit it

k-no no NO!!!!!



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Originally posted by: lillzakz

I have a brother to (who is older) and now that I think about it, I really dont know stuff. I know he's had to girl friends...or I only met two. N favourite colour?....am I even supposed to know? I know that he hates waking up! (does that even count?)-(I know that cause I have to wake him up almost every day, n he is th emeanest at that time. He is such a grump I swear!) Ne wayz, plz do cont soon!

same with my bro i have to wake him up i dont even know if he has a gf but i dont think he dose mybe he might but i dought it i tell you older bros are mean sometimes 😆

😆 😆 😆 i thought this part was funny!!!

Plz cont soon

Originally posted by: night girl

same with my bro i have to wake him up i dont even know if he has a gf but i dont think he dose mybe he might but i dought it i tell you older bros are mean sometimes 😆

I agree, i also have an older brother and he is a big meany!!! He also is a grouch when he has to get up! Wow what co-incidences 😆😆😉

thanks for the great comments i will try and continue some time today

next part comeing in a few mins

part6


a-i knew it you do like it when iam close to you. you want to come close to me but you try and make your self stay away from me

k-no your wrong

a-admit it

k-no no NO!!!!!

a-kripa iam a doctor and doctors know these type of human behaver, people like you hide all there pain inside them untill one day they cant take it any more and end up killing them self

k-no iam not like that(almost crying)

a-come on once in your life havent you thought to kill your self(giveing kripa the stare)

k-no(crying now)

a-just to let you know, iam just like you i also dont want to live any more i also want to kill my self

kripa looks at angad

k-how did you get you self stop killing your self

angad was about to say something to kripa but rani came and sat down. kripa quickly wiped her tears before rani could see

a-hey how about we all go to the club after this

r-ya that will be fun bhi

k-no i cant my mom would kill me if i went iam not allowed

a-how will your mom ever know if you never tell her, dont you ever want to be some one your not and just be wild

r-ya kripa and you can borrow my cloths so you will fit in

k-no i cant

r-well to bad iam forceing you to come besides its the first time i met such a good frient like you

after the food came and all of them ate all of them went back home kripa changes in to cloths rani gives kripa. we see angad siting on the sofa waiting for the girls to come out

a-COME ON YOU GIRLS TAKE SO LONG!!!!!

angad hears ranis room door open and he turns around to see rani and kripa come out rani comes out of the door first wearing pink sandals and a pink skirt and white shirt with pink letters that said 2 hot 4 U then kripa come out wearing black boots that came up to her knees and black skirt and shineing top with her hair pulled back. for the first time when kripa looked at angad she didnt see him grining but just looked normal it was like angad was looking at kripa for the first time in his life

a-should we go

r-sure

this time instead of walking angad kripa and rani went in angads car and it was a black sports car. angad was driveing and kripa and rani were in the back seat talking

r-trust me kripa your going to have so much fun

k-iam not worried about haveing fun i just fell wierd in a skirt

r-dont worrie you will get used to it when you see all the other girls in a skirk

a-true and kripa i think you look realy nice in a skirt

kripa couldnt see in the frount but if she could see angad right at that moment then she would have know that angad was smileing for the first time not grining but smileing. finily kripa angad and rani reached the club.inside the club angad kripa and rani find a table and this time kripa didnt bother siting beside angad because him holding her hand was way better then haveing him claw up her leg.

a-kripa do you want to dance

k-no thank you

r-come on kripa go dace, bhi ask so nicely

k-no i dont want to

a-come on please

angad kind of foces kripa to dance by grabing her hand and pulling her up with him

in the back ground the song main hun don(remix) was playing(sorry but i couldnt find the lyrics)

angad grabs kripas hand and pulls her toward him and kripa was starting to fell sick because kripa never expected a guy to be this close to her even when kripa dreamed of her being married she never thought that the guy would be that close to her. angad then with both his hand grabed kripas back and kind of huged her and dance with her realy close to her

k-angad why are you doing this to me

angad countinues to dance with kripa

a-i just dont want you to suffer like i had

k-how have you suffered you have all the money in the world you have every thing, a father who loves you a sister who cares for you what else would you want

a-you still dont get it do you

k-no i dont get it

a-kripa your like me we both dream about things but we keep it to are selfs because were afraid to say it and thats what kills us form the inside because every one in the world have to let out there dreams from words writeing some thing but when we keep are dreams inside us we are killing are self. havent you dreamed that your standing on the top part of a building and you just jump and then die

kripas eyes get wide

k-yes

a-well it happed to me too every night i when to sleep i would dream that i would kill my self

k-how did you stop dreaming of killing your self

a-i thought you would never ask

angad came realy close to kripa that his body was presed with hers

a-i hid my dreams in the dark ally



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