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Posted: 19 years ago
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Phew!!! For a moment I thought u were going to make my Angad an old man! 😕 😕 I am so releived!! But then I realized u would NEVER do that...(i think? 😕 ) well newayz... hope u enjoy the party n cont the part tom.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: lillzakz

Phew!!! For a moment I thought u were going to make my Angad an old man! 😕 😕 I am so releived!! But then I realized u would NEVER do that...(i think? 😕 ) well newayz... hope u enjoy the party n cont the part tom.

i would die before i make angad an old man there is nothing on earth that can get me to make angad an old man never ever ever would i do that 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow i love ur ff its realllly goood 👏 👏 👏


and as for the old man maybe the richest person is angad but he's using the old guy to hide his identity .....jus a thought....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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just read it all! This part was fantastic! The promos made it very suspenseful. Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pls dont create too much of suspense 😕it is killing me
i love the intro pls do cont soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great job plzz post the next part soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur doing really great! 👏 do continue soon! 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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next part comeing in a few mins
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part 2



kripa and tina had finished cooking and got ready to go to the mall

k-tina moms still sleeping so i left a note saying we when to get books for collage

t-ok then lets go before the mall closes

kripa and tina leave home and start walking to the mall

t-kripa if we were rich we at least wouldnt have to walk all the way to the mall

k-tina you and your dreams you dont always have to be rich money isnt every thing in life

t-true but iam just saying

k-well i think you should stay away from these dreams sometime dreams can lead to bad things

t-ya but some time they can lead to good things also

kripa and tian reach the mall

sametime
k-ok the book store is that way
t-ok the book store is that way

both point diffrent ways

k-i am sure the store is that way up stairs

t-and i am sure that the store is that way down stairs

k-ok how about you go that way and i will go this way who ever finds the store buys the books

tian and kripa go diffrent ways

kripa gose upstairs and right away see the book shop kripa finds the books she needs and the books tina need kripa pays for the buts as kripa leaves the shop she bumps in to a old man and the books in the old mans hand and kripas hands both fall down both the man and kripa bend down to pick up the books

k-iam so sorry

guy-its my fault i wasnt look at were i was going

kripa looks at the man and he look pretty old but also strait the man was wearing a black suite with white shirt and black tie he had brown and white hair.kripa picks up the books and stood up and so dose the man

k-iam very sorry uncle

man-its ok, iam dillip khanna

k-kripa sharma

d-hello

dillip looks at kripas books that were in her hands

d-so are you a student in writeing

k-yes, i realy wanted to be a doctor but my family cant aford it so i had to study in writeing instead

d-you must be realy upset i belive that if a person is willing to learn they should have a chance

k-well i belive that dream dont have chances of comeing true

d-well i belive diffrent all dreams should have a chance of comeing true, like right now iam going to make your dream come true

k-hows that

d-iam the head master of the collage future people, and i belive i just added a new student

k-i still cant come me and my sister cant go to 2 differnt collages

d-what dose your sister want to be

k-she wanted to be a engneer but we couldnt aford that also

d-well in my collge we also teach people how to become engneers also, what is your sisters name

k-tina sharma

d-well i expect to see you and tina in my collage tommrow studying your heart out

k-will i see you in the collage

d-no, i dont go to any of my bussiness i own. i dont like it when theres to many people around that know me.

k-oh

d-well here is the address to the collage. you will get your class scadual tommrow from the main building

k-i dont know how i will repay you this is such a good chance in life that your giveing me and my sister. i just dont know what to say

d-well there is one way you can repay me and that is have faith that dreams can come true. your a nice girl and very young dont ruin your life thinking dreams cant come true because some were in the world someone is going to show you that dreams can come true and all you have to do is wait for that perfect someone

kripa laughs a little

k-you sound like my sister she also say i need to dream more

d-well your sister is right theres nothing bad in dreaming as long as you keep the real world and dreams balanced in life you will see the true world

k-thank you very much

d-well i better get going if you have any problems please call me, heres my number

dillip leaves kripa standing in the mall and kripa jumps in joy she and her sisters were going to have there dreams come true. kripa runs to find tian. after a little while kripa finds tian

k-tian tina TIAN!!!!

t-what happend kripa

k-tina you wont belive this

t-what happend

kripa tells tina how they got they got excepted to one of the best collages in india

t-omg i can belive this it is so cool

k-come on lets go home and tell mom

kripa and tina reach home

k+t-mom mom mom!!!!!

g-what happend

k-mom you wont belive this but me and tina got excepted to one of the best collages in india with no cost

g-realy how

kripa tells the story to her mom and all three of the family members jump in joy

g-iam so happy for you girls now you can get a good education and get a real job and make good money. promise me that you two will work hard and be the best students possible

k+t-promise mom

all of them hug once more and celabrate all night

g-ok you two get some sleep tommrow is your first day in such a big collage

kripa and tian go in there room and close the lights tina had no troble sleeping but kirpa for onces had a hard time sleep because it was the first time kripa saw that the world wasnt all bad there was some good in the world and that was what buged kripa the most kripa always thought that in the world there cant be happyness and for the first time in kripas life when kripa closed her eyes she dreamed and in kripas dream she dreamed that she was liveing with the perfect man in a beautiful house with her own car with a great life and she didnt have to work around the house someone else did it for her she dreamed that her dream man loved her and never hurt her always cared for her and for the first time in kripas life kripa when to sleep with a smile on her face.

the next moring

t-kripa wake up

tina pulled on kripas blanket

k-let go tina

t-kripa todays are fist day at collage and were going to be late

k-what!!!

kripa got out of bed quickly got dressed and both kripa and tina ran out the door with out eating breakfast

k-come on tian run faster

t-i cant run any faster

k-tina lets go through there

kripa points to a ally and tina stops running

k-what happed

t-kripa mom said not to go into dark allys pluse i cant even see across from there

k-if we dont go through that ally were going to be late for collage now lets go quickly

tina and kripa run into the dark ally. while kripa and tina are running some goons attack kripa and tina

k-aahhh let me go creep

tian kicks the guy that was grabing her and runs to her sister

t-kripa!!!!

kripa also gets loose as tian and kripa look around each other they see that there are goons all around them. right when the goons were about to attack kripa and tina again a voice comes from a corner of the dark ally and you cant see the guys face because of the darkness

guy-let them go

all the goons, kripa, and tina look towards the place from were the voice came from

guy-they did nothing to you all then why hurt them

the guy comes out from the darkness and starts walking towards kripa and tina as he comes up more toward them kripa can see the guys face. he had on blue jeans brown hair light brown eyes not to dark not to light skin and looked very desent and clean.the guy comes closer and closer towards kripa and kripa keeps moveing back away from the guy soon kripa was leaning on the wall realy hard and the guy keeped comeing closer and closer toward kripa then the guy grabs kripa by the waist. the guy was so close to kripa that she could smell him and he smelled realy nice also the guy then came so close to kripa that she could fell his breath almost on her then the guy brought his lip towrads kripas ear and every time the guy would talk kripa could fell the guys lips touching her ear

guy-iam angad and your the hottest girl i have ever meet i suggest you and your sister get out of here before i change my mind in leting you go

kripa quickly moves away from the guy grabs tinas hand and both sisters run out as fast as they can but while kripa and tina were runing out of the ally kripa did one wrong thing and that was she turned around and looked back that the guy who call him self angad to see him stareing at kripa grining at her and only her not tina or any one else just kripa


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh!!!!!!!!!!!!nice part!!! continue soon!!!!! i want to read more fast!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

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