DARK ALLY/LAST PART PAGE 54 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
that was such a nice part, loved it do cont soon! like really soon, this fanfic is gonna be good, i can tell!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
too good yaar!!!!! I am left wondering if Angad is just joking with Kripa or telling the truth... and will kripa come back and meet him again after college.... please yaar... continue as soon as you can!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OOh tats so interesting..now da real story begins. Continue soon plz and thank u


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

too good yaar!!!!! I am left wondering if Angad is just joking with Kripa or telling the truth... and will kripa come back and meet him again after college.... please yaar... continue as soon as you can!! 😳

your just going to have to wait and find out

like i said to every one this fanfic is going to be better then any of my other ones

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow amazing part!!!!! why was angad smirking is he playin some kinda joke? 😕 plzzzzzzz cont sooooooon..cant wait
himani 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
lol wow! i like this one. it's sooo different. awesome. lol

♥ shaheera
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
oohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!that was great!!!!!!!!!

Plz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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next part comeing in a few mins
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
just read both parts! wonderfuul! 👏, me loves this fan-fic already...yayy!!! lol, continue soonnn!!! 😆 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 3



kripa and tina reach the collage late but not to late they were 10mins late and ran to the main buliding. in the main building a lady was siting at a desk doing something on the computer and when see looked up see saw tina and kripa sweating and there hair messed up

lady-are you kripa and tina sharma

k+t-yes

lady-i was expecting you but not like this

k-were sorry but we got cought in some trouble while walking here

lady-dont worrie about it, its your first day here

the lady gives tina and kripa two differt papers

lady-these are the class you will attend for the year

k-thank you

lady-come i will show you your class

kripa and tina follow the lady untill the come at a door on the first floor

lady-tina this will be your class

the lady opens the door for tina and introdues the class to tina and then come back out to take kripa to her class

lady-this will be your class miss.sharma

k-thank you for the great help

lady-my pleasure

the lady opens the door and introduce kripa to the class in the class a teacher was giveing lectures but when kripa steped in the class every thing went quite

lady-class this is kripa sharma she is new here

then the lady leaves

teacher-welcome kripa iam mr.zigran but every one calls me mr.z so i also expect you to call me mr.z

mr.z smiles and kripa also smiles

z-why dont you go sit by rani

mr.z points to a girl on the last row in red shirt and blue jeans the girl had dark brown hair curled wore a red freanch hat with sliver hooped earings the girl was now waveing towards kripa

k-hi iam kripa

r-iam rani(rani will be played by ME!!! 😆 )

kripa through out the day studied realy hard just like her mom had asked. rani had 3 class with kripa the 1,3,and last class kirpa had with rain and in that one day rani and kripa became good friends.sometimes during the day kripa remember that guy that had saved her and kripa just couldnt for get that guy it was like kripa was put into a spell of the guy angad. sometimes during the day kripa would start writing his name one a peice of paper and would never relise it till some one calls out her name or says something to kripa. at the end of the day kripa and rani were walking out the door to see tina waiting at the main door for kripa

k-tina meet rani and rani meet tina my sister

t-hi rani

r-hi

t-hey kripa my teacher gave me a project to do and i have to stay here for a bit longer can you tell mom

k-ok i will

t-thanks

tina runs back inside

rani and kripa start walking home. while walking home kripa ask a question to rani

k-hey can i ask you a question

r-shoot iam an open book

k-how can you aford clothes like the ones your wearing like if your rich wouldnt you go home in a car or something

rani laughs a little

r-my not poor or any thing i can aford a lot of things but i just dont like showing it the only reason i wear clothes like this is because my brother dosnt want me to stand out and have every one makes fun of me my brother and i live in a small 2 bed room flat but were happy. my dad dosnt live with us but he is realy nice that house that my dad lives in is 136 bed room house but my dad dosnt like my brother and me around that place because my dad just dosnt want me and my brother to be known in frount of the media and press people because my mom died because of all the camras and stuff

k-how

r-well i was very little when it happed but what happed was there were so many camars and stuff that some crazy person shoot my mom from the crowed of newpress that she died and no one was able to catch the peson that did it my brother saw the guy who shoot my mom but even with the guys pictuer drawn out no one was able to catch the guy

k-iam sorry

r-its ok its not like i knew my mom all that well but my brother always said how nice my mom used to be and every thing. i never felt like my moms not here i always fell my mom is always with me.

r-well this is my flat

k-well see you tommrow in collage

r-no way your comeing inside we bouth can do are homework togather please things you dont know i can help you on and things i dont know you can help me on and the thing neither of us know my brother can help us on plus i want you to meet my brother his 25 but some times he acts like he's 60

k-my sister says the same thing, but still i cant come in

r-if its about meeting my brother dont worrie he's only 3 years older and he is realy nice

k-no its not that its just i have to tell my mom that my sister is still in the collage

r-call from my house but please come in please, please, please

k-ok

kripa and rani go to rani's flat it was on the 5th floor the highest floor. rani takes out the house keys and opens the door. kripa looked in the flate and saw it was biger then hers and was very beautifuly from the inside the flat had a liveing room and on the right side was the kicthen and on the left side there was 2 doors to 2 bed rooms

r-bhi iam home and i brought a friend with me were going to be studying in my room(yelling)

a voice came from the bedroom on the right side of the door

person-ok(yelling)

kripa heard a deep voice and kripa felt her heart flip over it was like she heard that voice some were but she couldnt point out were

r-come on lets go to my room

rina leads kripa to the room on the left side. the room was painted light purple and looked realy beautiful the dresser was make out of white marble and the mirror had white marble around it and the bed was a queen size bed and the bedsheets were purple and had white color border on it

k-wow your room looks very nice

r-thanks

k-can i use you phone so i can call my mom

r-hay its right there(points to her dresser)

k-you have phone in your room

r-ya, like i said iam not poor or middle class i just dont like showing it

kripa calls her mom and say that tina is in collage and she is at a friends house studying and say she will be home some time around 8 or 9 at night

r-come on let get are homework done and then mybe we can watch a movie or some thing

k-ok

kripa and rani dump all there home work on the bed and started working. kripa and rani got the first 10 questions finished but couldnt figure out the other 90 questions.

k-god this is realy tuff homework

r-i know i will go call bhi he will probly know he also studied to be a doctor

k-so your bothers doctor

r-well yes and no, my brother toped the class but never became a doctor becuase dad didnt let him he said that he was still young and need to have some fun and said that untill bhi dosnt get married can work or own any kind of buissness even though bhi owns 51% of my dads buisness my dad takes cares of most of the work

k-oh

r-i will be right back and call bhi

while rani leaves the room kripa looks through the book to see if she can find the answer to question 11. soon rani comes back in the room with a guy beside her. and kripa mouth drops open because of 3 reasons one was the guy was angad the same guy that saved her 2 he was giveing her the same grin that he was giveing her that moring and 3 he was shirtless and looked very hot.

r-kripa meet my brother angad. angad meet kripa my friend. we were wondering if you could help us with are homework.

angads grin gets biger

a-sure but first can you get me something to eat iam realy hungry

r-ok, till then help kripa i will catch up on the work

a-ok

rani leaves the room and angad sits on the bed with kripa and when he sits down he sits realy realy close to kripa veary close to her

a-how may i help you

the way angads voice sounded kripa knew he had no intenshion in helping her with her homework and kripa was starting to get nervouse by him being so close to her


hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon

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