DARK ALLY/LAST PART PAGE 54 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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prom

we see kripa leaning on a wall trying to move back we see angad come closer and closer to kripa and kripa just tries to move away from angad then angad grabs kripa around the waist "your the hotest girl I have ever met I suggest you and your sister get out of here before I change my mind in leting you go." we see kripa grab tina's hand and both ran for there lives.

hope u like my prom

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome promos!!!!!Can't wait for the first part....plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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prom

kripa gose in her room and turns on the tv"welcome welcome all of indian you are watching india's billionairs we all want to know who is the richest man in india right? and never once has this man came in frount of the press never once has this man's picture been see then who is this billionair that we work for? many people work for this man but none of those works have seen there boss face all they know is his name well today in many years the billionair agreed to come and show his face on indian's billionair's he is 55 years old has brown and white hair is tall and handsome and his name is..............?"right then the power gose off "MOM!!! powers out" tina comes in the room "kripa, moms at work do you want to go shop i need new shoes my shoes are completly dead"

hope u like this prom

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Posted: 19 years ago
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g8 plzz start soon and is angad 55 yr old in here???
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 1

we see a girl wearing jeans and a green t-shirt siting on the bed reading a book we cant see the girls face because of the book covering her face finily the girl puts the book down smileing and the girl is tina with brown eyes and brown hair looking simple but cute and sweet. tina throughs the book in the air and jumps happly and tina jumps on the bed with joy.while tina jumps all over the place in happyness theres a girl looking at tina. the girl was wearing a very simple purple slawar holding a broom and it is kripa looking very angry.

k-tina WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!

t-didi for the first time in my life i bet my older sister in football and iam enjoying my free day while you do all my house work and my homework

k-you just won once just wait till next week i will bet you

t-come on didi chill out i was just messing with you besides you wont have to do all this work all your life. just watch one day we are going to have rich loveing husbands and nice cars of are own and servents to do are work, wouldnt that be so cool

k-tina quit dreaming what are the chance we will have a life like that in the realy world fairy tales dont happen

t-didi thats what you think but i have a good feeling that one day someone will come and take us out of this traped small life and show us the big world i just know it, there will be some one in this world that will show us the would someone that will show us usa, canada, paris, rome ,london, africa, chain.

k-tina sometimes its not good to dream out of your state

t-and sometimes its not good to not dream at all

k-come on tian change out of the jeans and t-shirt before mom gets home if she sees you in those clothes she will have a heart attack

t-come on didi it is summer time it is burning in here and theres no power or water i will die wearing a slawar

k-well i care about you and i dont want you to get in troble with mom

t-god didi your only 2 years older then me but sometimes you act as if your 60 years old

k-tina, moms going to be here any mins go get changed

t-fine

kripa gose out of the room she and tina share and starts to sweep the floor in the hall/kitchin in kripas house there hall and kitchen were the same and they had a 2 room flat one the 3rd floor one room was there moms and one room tina and kripa shared. kipas father died in a car accident when kripa was 4 and tina was 2 kripa remembered her father veary well and was happy that he was gone becuase she remembered he used to be veary mean and huted her mom and she remember he hurted her also, and pulled her hair. tina dosent remember her father but never asked kripa how he was like becuase she know very well that kripa hates him a lot

tina comes out of the room changed wearing a yellow slawar with white flower patters on it

t-happy didi

k-a lot

right then theres a knock on the door. kripa gose and opens the door. as soon as kripa opens the door a group of guy were at the door but the guy in the frount was very dark skin with lots of gold chains wearing black shorts and red sleaveless shirt and points a gun on kripas head

guy-are you the kapoor family

k-n..n..noo weer...were the sharma family

guy-were dose the kapoor family live

kripa knew the kapoor family very well her it was her best friends family and kripa knew very well that if she said any thing of were they live she will never meet her friend again

k-i...ii...i dont know

guy-dont lie to me i saw with my own eyes one of the kapoor family members came in this house one week ago

k-they live on the first floor

guy-you better be right or the next day you will pay

the guy pushs kripa on the ground and the the group of guys leave tina quickly gose by kripa

t-didi are you ok

k-ya iam fine

tina quickly gets up and shuts the door and locks the door from the bottom and the top. tina helps kripa to there room and then get her water

t-those guys didnt hurt you did they

k-no iam fine

t-you just rest i will finish up the house work

k-tina dont tell mom about this other wise she will freak

t-didi you know very well that your friend is not going to surrive

k-i know but if i didnt say the truth they would have probly hurt are family the next day and i cant let any thing happen to you and mom i care about you guys to much

right then there was another knock on the door

t-i will get

k-no stay in the room and shut the door i will open it

kripa stands up from the bed and before leaveing the room kripa turns back

k-(whispering)tina dont make a sound

kripa close the bed room door and opens the door to see it was her mom sweating with all her clothes wet from sweating because of all the heat

g-kripa can you start cooking iam very tired from work

k-sure mom

kripa leads her mom to her room and opens all the window so she wouldnt be to warm then took out clothes that wouldnt make her mom to warm and gave it to her. then kripa went to her room to get tina to help her in cooking

k-tina you start cooking iam going to go up stairs and see if they have and water

t-ok and kripa dont for get collage starts tommrow so we have to go to the mall and get are books

k-ok we will go to the mall after we cook

hope u like this part

comeing up-the dark ally will be introduced

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: kyph05

g8 plzz start soon and is angad 55 yr old in here???

no angad is not 55 the prom was talking about some one else in the story who will enter later in the story and is very important in the story

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum part..luved ittttt............cont sooooooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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waho that was excellent loved it 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow ruhee another awesome ff! cant wait till the next part! do cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok every one i will post the next part tommrow iam going to a party tonight so sorry to say next part will come tommrow

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