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omg that was a great part 👏 hehe lets see whoz the murderer's daughtr 😆 cantwait
continue soon
tc,
Ruby

Originally posted by: Pooja922

haha well u write way!!!! better than me....continue soon ..😊

you re a wonderful writer and for sure better then pooja😆 ok just joking aww pooja i wuv ya. lol really ur an amazing writer forsure u have wonderful dreams dont u😆

Originally posted by: ruby89

you re a wonderful writer and for sure better then pooja😆 ok just joking aww pooja i wuv ya. lol really ur an amazing writer forsure u have wonderful dreams dont u😆

making fun of me i see....but its k i know im not such a great writer myself lol

brilliant part ruhee....i love it...whats in angad's head? continue soon 😳 😉

omg, you just reminded me abt how angad was looking for the girl...you got me so caught up in the AK and komal love triangle that i just totally forgot....oh well 😆
continue soon😊
-Amrit

Originally posted by: ruby89

you re a wonderful writer and for sure better then pooja😆 ok just joking aww pooja i wuv ya. lol really ur an amazing writer forsure u have wonderful dreams dont u😆

my dreams arent that wonderful i just end up add exrta details that make it look like my dreams are wonderful usual in most of my dreams the girl ends up dieing so i always have to changeing the story a little

Hey,
Ur story rocks... 👏 .....ummmmmmm I almost forgot about the murder thingy.... It is gat story.. I think the murder thingy has to do with kripa's DAD... I think he killed Angad's mom............... 😉 don't know if i am write... Its up to u to decide...... In order for that to happen u have to keep CONTINUING 😉 Good Luck. bye!!
Divjot

i read all the new partz and they are all fabulous.. i wonder what Angad will do if he finds out Kripa is the murder's girl.... 😕

part 16


kripa and rani are doing there homework when there was a knock on the door and rani went to open the door a few mins later rani came back in the room with angad beside her and angad was grining at kripa and looking at her and when we see angad grin you can tell he has something big planed in his head

a-rani can you get me something to eat iam hungry

r-but i thought you said that....

a-just go

rani saw angad and kripa looking at each other and just left but when rani left she didnt just leave the room she left the house with a big smile on her face

in ranis room

angad comes up to kripa who was siting on the bed and he also sits on the bed

a-so what are you doing

kripa picks up a book and pretends to look through it

k-homework

angad takes the book out of kripas hands and throughs it to a corner and leans towards kripa

a-i cancaled all homework for today

k-your not my teacher

as angad started leaning more and more toward kripa, kripa starts leaning backwards

a-i might not be your teacher but iam your teachers boss

k-what about your wife what will she say if she sees you here with me

a-for the record she isnt my wife right now

kripa leans back so much that now her back is flat on the bed and angad is right on top of kripa

k-angad i realy need to finish my homework

a-i have a diffrent homework for you

k-whats that

a-to show you how to make love

kripa laughs now and pushs angad off of her

a-what happend

k-angad seriously i dont have time for you to mess around with me right now i have a lot of work to do if i ever want to be a good doctor one day then i need to work hard

a-god your so boring

k-well its better you know iam boring now then later

a-what ever, do you need any help with your homework

k-ya

angad helps kripa with her home work and supriseingly angad didnt flurt with kripa once when helping kripa he sat there and just helped her do all her work. kripa finished all her work around 9:00pm and angad walked kripa more

while walking to kripas house

k-so are you excited for tommrow it will be your first day at work

a-of cours iam i get to be in the same place you will be

kripa laughs a little and starts blushing

k-well i here thanks for walking me home

a-well what type of boyfriend would i be if i didnt walk you home

angad and kripa both smile and then kripa gose inside her flat and angad starts running the other way towards the dark ally angad reaches the dark ally were we see some guys waiting for angad

a-what is it you all have been calling me all moring did you find any thing out about the girl

guy-ya we found out about the girl and her legal name is khushi but no one calls her by that name every one that knows her calls her by a diffrent name i dont even thing the girl her self knows that her legal name is khushi. angad it is geting realy tuff for us to find this girl i think we know more about that girl then the girl knows about her self we tried are hardest to figuer out the hers nick name but there is no document of the girls nick name it is almost impossible to find her

a-then look hard i want to see the girl khushi who ever she is(deadly dangerouse tone)

angad started leaveing the dark ally but right before angad left he remembered something and turned back

a-before you start looking for the girl khushi try and scare my future wife komal out of india

guy-yes sir

a-oh and weres prithiv i havent seen him is a long time

guy-he said that we was going to be at the club with your sister

a-ok well tell him to stay away from my sister he might be my best friend and the only one who knows that i want to take revenge on my mothers death but i can still smash is face to the ground because my family comes before my revenge got it

guy-dont worrie sir i will tell him


hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

i read all the new partz and they are all fabulous.. i wonder what Angad will do if he finds out Kripa is the murder's girl.... 😕

angad will probly end up riping his head off thinking if he should kill kripa or marry her lol😆