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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

woah!!!! that waz extreme!!!!!!!! i waz soo not expecting that!!!!!! like OMG!!!!!!!! u soo caught me by surprise!!!!!! newayz that waz great!!!!! plz cont soon!1

that was g8 continue soon 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: night girl

ok every one has been realy suprised about what just happend in part 9 and all😕 but the thing is every time i write a part everyone kind of knows what will happen ahead of time so i guess i made some thing no one could think of 😳dont worrie nothing this ramdom will happen again😆

heehe that was acctually good, now it jst got me sitting here waiting for next part to know wht happens it was funny 😆. continue soon👏

-Ruby

That was a brilliant part!!!i luved all the written work in the end! 😳 😳 😳

😆 😆 😆 LUVED that part!!!

😉 😆
fab!!! cont soon pls! 😆

part 10




kripa wakes up in the moreing with a major head ache kripa grabs her head and sits up in bed to see her self in her room

k-(thinking)how did i get home

kripa looks around and sees tina ready for collage and was looking at kripa realy angry

k-tina what happed last night

t-that guy angad he brought you home drunk and he to was drunk its a good thing that mom was sleeping and didnt answer the door(super pissed off angry voice)what the hell is going on kripa. you come home late at night drunk with some guy that you just met yesterday

k-look tina please dont tell mom about this

t-i wont tell,now get ready for collage before were late again

k-you go ahead i will catch you in collage

t-ok your choice but if i see you near that angad dude again dont expect me to not tell mom

k-ok ok god cant you give a sister a break

tina left the room quite pissed of and kripa got out of bed got dressed and took off for collage. while kripa was walking past the ally were angad and her frist met some one grabed kripa by the are and pulled her in to the same ally and grabed kripa around the waist and pushed her towards him. it was angad

a-sup kripa

k-an ann anngaa angad...

a-we need to talk

k-not again

a-yes again

k-no you got me drunk within one hour

a-well sometimes when a person is drunk they are able to say what they feel

k-do you even remember what i had said last night

a-yes, you said the more you hate your father the more your attracted to me.so you like kissing me and makeing out with me thats not what i want to know, i want to know what is so great about your father that your willing to kill your self because of him

k-my father had nothing to do with me

a-yes it dose

k-let me go other wise iam going to be late for collage

angad lets go of kripas waist but grabs kripas hand and pulls her back toward him

a-just to let you know makeing out with you is a lot of fun

angad lets go of kripa and kirpa just runs from there to the collage. once kripa reachs collage she see class hasnt started yet and people are just talking and messing around kripa see rani siting in a desk and gose up to her

k-hey rani

r-hey kripa have a seat(points to the desk next to her)

kripa sits down

k-so what r u doing

r-nothing just sitting around drawing

k-oh

r-hey want to come to my house today

k-(thinking)angad is probly at home i cant go to ranis house at all angad will 100% try and come near me

k-no i cant

r-come on no one is going to be at home. bhi is going out of town in a few hours so we will have to whole house to are self

k-uummm ok

after collage rani and kripa go to ranis house rani opens the door to see angad siting at home

r-bhi i thought you said that you were going out of town

a-i was going to go but my friend that was supposed to come with me got sick so looks like iam stuck at home

angad knew kripa was going to refues to come to his house so he just told rani that he was going out of town so kripa would come over

a-hi kripa

k-you did this on purpouse you told rani that you were going out of town when you planed the whole thing

a-i know i know iam so good

k-you are so dead

kripa starts chaseing angad across the hall room while rani just watched angad and kripa run around the room thinking what is kripa talking about and kripa is acting like she knows angad longer then me ok iam confused

r-uuumm guys uumm guys

angad and kripa didnt stop chaseing each other

r-KRIPA!!!!BHI!!!!!!WHAT IS GOING ON!!!!!!



hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon

that was goodd yarr continue soon 😃 😃 😃