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WOw hot! waiting for the next part

very nice cont soon!!!!
so hot!

Hey,
whoa whoa that was fast and RANDOM. 😉 ... On the top it was awesome..... Great part.....Continue soon.
Divjot

tat was interesting...hmmm can't wait to c wut happens next. tat was a nice twist, didn't expect them to get drunk.... buh o well, w/e it takes to keep us readers interested, and glued to da story 😊

Continue soon plz and thank u

Nida

i just read ur ff and its fantastic but the when i read the last part, i was woah that's so random 😆 ....please continue soon 😉

hey awesome part lol....continue soon

wow 😎 ...kripa drunk????? 😲

where r u going...thtz way tooo radom..didnt c tht coming!!!!!!! 😆 😛

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey,
whoa whoa that was fast and RANDOM. 😉 ... On the top it was awesome..... Great part.....Continue soon.
Divjot

I totally agree with Divjot! Plz cont. soon!!!!

Hi,

Wow I just catched upw ith this FF and it's so amazing. No I have not read the UnKnowns I remember reading the character anaylsis and because there were lots characters I felt like I was going to get confused. So I left it. I will try to catch the FF in my spare time.

Dark Ally is amazing, I enjoyed all the parts. I love the situation where Kripa has to call Rani to show what Angad was doing to her and I know how she felt because I have been in the same situation as well. 😉 He he.I can remeber those moment rights, they were so cute and perfect! I also love the restaurant part.

When you said the preview where Anhad would get changed infront Kripa ~{!-~} when I read the next part, it was totally unexpected. I was not expecting this but it was good. I was expecting some more intense 😳

Can you try to post longer part?

Love

sanya

woah that was extreme! 😳 but it was interesting

cont soon