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Posted: 19 years ago
Oh no you will not cont. till monday 😭 Nice part 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
šŸ˜† great part!!! Angad cracks me up! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was good!!!! now I cant wait till monday!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
yay yay!!! loved this part!!! gr8 joobbb šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ , continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg great part! rocking fanfic u just have to cont soon, u r turning me into an imatient reader! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey!

Good job!Its really interesting pls.... continue soon.Pls..... can't wait to read the next part.Keep it up šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 19 years ago
night girl when r u continueing its like Tuesday!!!!
i hope u continue soon!!!!


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Posted: 19 years ago
part 11

r-uuumm guys uumm guys

angad and kripa didnt stop chaseing each other

r-KRIPA!!!!BHI!!!!!!WHAT IS GOING ON!!!!!!

angad and kripa stop chaseing each other

a-(in a hiding tone)nothing

k-(angry tone)iam so out of here

r-wait kripa what happed...

but before rain could finish the sentence kripa already left

r-bhi what is going on

a-nothing you should worry about

r-bhi iam seriouse its the fist time in a realy long time i have made a nice friend like kripa and it hurts when i you lose a good friend what is going on

angad takes a deep breath

a-ok do you realy want to know

r-yes i whan to know

a-ok your friend kripa well she is sick

rani was about to open her mouth to ask questions but angad stoped her

a-rani let me finish, when i mean kripa is sick i mean mentaly she whish to die and i dont want her to kill her self so i follow her around to stop her from killing her self so right now your friend is not so happy with me being around. now you know that me being a doctor and all its my job to save peoples lifes not to show them death and i just cant see a person killed in frount of my eyes again.

rani smiles

r-bhiiiii....

a-what bhi and y r u smiling

r-iam smileing because i just relised something about you

a-and whats that

r-you like kripa and when i mean like i mean more then like i mean love like

a-no no no and NO. i barly know kripa and besides shes 3 years younger

r-bhi hasnt any one told you that age dosnt matter in love

a-no way i so do not like kripa and besides how can you say i like kripa when you your self know that iam about to get married in one month

r-come on bhi you dont even know who your geting married to. just because dad set you up with some rich girl dosnt mean that you still cant love

a-but i have dated other girls that are a lot more good looking then kripa then how come iam more attracted towards kripa more

r-ha at leat you admited your attracted towards kripa. wait you dated other girls? how come i never knew

a-you never asked

r-your so rude you dont even tell you own sister about your girlfriends now iam not going to tell you anything if i start likeing any one

a-save it i already know about you dateing some guy named prithiv who is 2 years older then you

r-how did you know

a-oh i dont know maybe its your science book which has prithivs name writen on it all over with little heart around it

r-well how did you know he is 2 years older then me

a-i used to help he in math in high school

r-oh well never mind, let get back to you likeing kripa

a-ya lets do that(kind of pissed off haveing his sister dateing)

r-ok it is so clear that your attracted towards kripa now all you need to figuer out, is do you like her or are you just attracted towards her

a-and how do i do that

r-well some times it help when you kiss a girl

a-well thats no help because i have already done that

r-WHAT!!!!you kissed my friend and your telling me NOW!!!

a-well i was drunk so that dosnt count

r-wait you drink

a-no only once a month promise

r-god what else are you hideing, a dog in the closet.

a-i already did that in high school

r-you know what forget it let get back to the kripa story

a-ok

r-ok one way you can figuer out if you love her is if you are in a big crowed and in the whole crowed you can find kripa with in 5 seconds

a-ok well how iam i supposed to get kripa in a big crowed

r-well, you know how tommrow your future wife and my future bhai is comeing to india right

a-well duh

r-then how about you ask dad to hold a big program in collage in which dad will anounce that your geting married and are going to run the collage from now on and as students requirment all students must attend that program. so kripa will have to be in a big crowed

a-but you know dad hates being in big crowds he will never agree

r-well dad dosnt have to be there the head master can announce in dads place

a-thats a great idea but one problem

r-now what

a-wouldnt kripa get courious in how i have just become the owner of the collage i mean come on she will so not buy the storie that the guy that owns the collage likes my work and gave away the collage to me

r-well just tell kripa that dad owns the collage

a-hello dad will kill us for telling kripa you know how dad dosnt want anyone to know were his kids he is so over protive about us not ending up like mom

r-well dads going to kill us when he finds out come on what are the chances that dad will ever find out we told someone about us being the top 5 ricest people in the world

a-you better be right


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-intro on angads future wife and big twist comeing up šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow that was fab!!!!!!!!!i lub the bro-sis relationship..its sooo funny !!!!!awesum part like always!!cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part 😊 😊
continue soon and good luck with the next part 😊

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