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Posted: 13 years ago
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this os is really good so far! continue soon please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dude now arnav has to go though the pain
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part 2: The bend around the corner
"you are not going anywhere" Arnav pulled out a dress from Kushi's hands while she tried to pack it
"No I am going to my house, to Buaji's place...I have to go" she pulled the dress back, folding it pathetically before she dumped it into the jute bag
"You dont have to go..." Arnav told her "You WILL not go"
" I will go!" she glared at him taking the bag with her
"didnt you hear what I said? You will not go!" he said snatching the bag from her and throwing it against the opposite wall.

She watched as the bag hit the wall and the contents peeked out.
"you stay put here" he said with finality but she was not one to give up so easily
"I cant stay here anymore! not when" she was cut abruptly by Arnav
"can't? We are married and you are my wife! this is your house!"
"We are not married.. I mean this is just a contract.. after a few days.. neither will I be your wife nor you my husband" Kushi roped in the last straw which will let her move out of RM
A shock reflected his features before it disappeared.
"Oh really? then the contract is not over yet..you can't afford to break it "
"what will you do if I break the contract? break Jiji's marriage too? sorry that wont work anymore.. I know too much about you to believe that anyway" she moved towards the wall and crouched beside her bag and squeezed in the contents back into it.
"you need to pay if you want to break it" came back a calm reply.
"how much?"
"not how much.. with what would be appropriate I suppose"
"what do you mean? " she paused then a sudden thought came to her mind "No you are not asking me to.. erm.. I mean..."
she looked searchingly into his eyes for indications but it was'nt even remotely playful or romantic.. It was damn serious.
"Ok.. with what do I have to pay with ?" she asked slowly
"My life!"

***
Payal watched as Anjali was taken by Akaash to her room while Nani and Mami followed them.
then she broke down on the floor, her silent sobs shaking her whole body, she cried for her sister's life which was turning into a mess because she has also consented to keep quiet.


"Bhabhi! "
She looked around to find NK still standing there.
"NKji.. Kushi is innocent.. she.."
"I know bhabhi.. "
"Why is this happening to her... why her after all her struggles she is finally branded a.. a.. Manchaser"
"Dont worry Bhabhi I will try to fix this.. I will be back in a few minutes... "
She saw him leave through the front door. Then a calm resolution took form in her... If Kushi is not let to stay here.. She wont either. She walked towards Anjali's room and saw Akaash leave the room and walk towards their room.
"I want to talk to you"
But he ignored her yet again. She took his hands and made him stop.
"I am leaving too." she declared
"where?" he asked her baffled
"To my house.. If My sister is leaving I will leave too"
"what ? are you out of your senses?"
"Yes.. I have been.. Now I want to make it right"
"what do you mean?"
"I dont want to stay in a house where my sister was insulted, Her character was strained by a very member of the house and she was forced to take the decision to leave while the other inmates watched it without even trying to save her dignity.. "
"why do you always think only about your sister? dont you see who needs more priority now? dont you realise why we stayed quiet?"
"yes I see clearly..I dont have any grudges against Di.. She needs all our attention.. But that doesnt mean that my sister does'nt need any.. You people cannot treat her like this...I know about her more than anyone else here.. She is very good at hiding her feelings... She has been abused by Shyam and yet no one seems to care"
"How can we believe it Payal? There is no proof.. and when you people decided to hide such a big thing.."
"yes we decided to hide because we could not hurt Di... Now I realized that was the biggest mistake..."
"You decided not to hurt Di.. you could have come to me.. you never thought about that.. I wonder.." Akaash gritted his teeth.
"What do you wonder? Ok.. tell me when I told you about my first alliance getting broken during my wedding day.. why didnt you tell your family?"
"why bring that now?"
"Tell me why didnt you tell your family? your mother?"
"I know that she would not react well to the news.. She might have broken down.. you know how vulnerable she was to our wedding..."
"Yeah you could not hurt her with this information about my past... which was not even significant in our new life. isnt it? Didnt I and my sister do the same thing... for something which will affect Di's present and future too?
"But you should have atleast come to me.."
"and what would you have done? trust us? and then break the news to the family? what is the big difference anyway? cant you see how much she is broken? My sister and I wanted to stop exactly this!"
Realization slowly hit Akaash.
"do you really understand the torture my sister has been going through with your brother in law trying to grope her every opportunity he got? and I feel ashamed that All I was worried about was for your attention when she really would have done with some support... When NKji could see it through her sturggles and support her.. I didnt..."
"Payal!" He placed his hand on her shoulder tentatively. But she brushed it away
"and now you people think we didnt say the truth because we both were gold diggers and and our husbands watched it silently...pathetically... who needs this life anyway? I am leaving.. "
"wait.." Akaash tried to hold her.
"let her go!" they both turned to look at Manorama standing at the entrance of their room.
"Mom?"
"If she wants to leave let her leave.. These two sisters are anyway spoiling our peace"
"Manorama! stop it"
"Sasuma! dont you see how much shattered Anjali bitya is? how much we struggled to put her to sleep just now? and this girl is wanting attention to herself now that she wants to leave.. Let her leave with her sister.. afterall her sister did.."
"What do you think she did? do you people know anything?"
"Daadima? do you also know something that we dont?" Akaash asked her. How many of them in this house are hiding things from him?
"I know Kushi bitya is just as innocent as Anjali bitiya"
"Nani ji is right" NK's voice rang clearly across the lobby.
then they saw him walking towards the room. "And I have got proof" he declared showing them all the pouch that Kushi used to carry

to be continued...

Edited by abavi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os...can't wait for the story to continue...Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow wow wow abavi such an awesome part 👏 👏
Am thinking what's arnav is going to tell khushi and i think payal should speak up like this before akash...
Awesome update abavi... I can't wait wait for the next part...
Plzzz update it soon na...
Thank u sooo much for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OH MAN WHAT PRROF HAVE YOU GOT HERE...WHEN THEY GOT NOTHING IN THE SHOW...HAHA...JUST KIDDING...ANYWAY NICE UPDATE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice dear...loved it n pliz continue soon n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I wish Payal could speak up like this in the show! I can't wait to read more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written..plz continue soon..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hw i wsh payal wud open her mouth lyk this in the show too...
great updte..!!

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