Heylos!
I have been away for sooo long, i feel guilty! But now that I am back, i am sooo glad to be!!
I read all of the last few week updates together.. goes without saying that this is amazing storytelling ML.. I love the pace of this story.. right from the first chapter, every time you give us something new to ponder over before the next chapter.. and I love how you so tastefully build in subtle (and sometimes not so sublte, like chap 38 😉) romance in the story.. it never seems out of place.. and you never leave your readers without their dose, if I may call it so :):)
But the thrill is here.. and its here to build on over the next few chapters, aint it!
Lavanya's dad knows about the party... Khushi knows about the file.. Lavanya knows about the file going missing..its only a matter of time before the 2 girls chat and link the Rishab-Arnav jodi! I shudder at the thought!!
Aman's mystery man is out prowling.. waiting for the new mission to declare.. Khalid Bhai will soon know about Khushi and wont take that too easily will he.. Aman himself hasnt!!
Akash knows.. and how long can a man in love see his love in the arms of a murderer..specially when he knows that the truth will bring her running to him.. or atleast he hopes so!!
Arnav knows the time is here.. he told Khushi himself didnt he.. I am sorry for everything that I will do to you in the future.. he is going to tell her soon.. isnt he...
So who breaks first ML.. which of the above will break Khushi's heart first?? because that is what will define their story..
On the note.. I can soo believe that this story reached Thread 3.. it is a really good story.. and you are doing a fine job telling it.. and I believe you when you say that you feel each character.. it is visible when one reads the dialogues and the thoughts of these characters... there is a lott of emotion there.. Heartiest Congratulations on reaching thread 3... even if this is the last for Mirage, may you finish many more with other creations!😊
On the rules.. i have always loved your spunk! Comes across in your rules..keep it up!
On your moods.. as i have always said.. keep the faith.. and remember you have truckloads of friends here to talk to if ever you feel like..
Big Hug!!
Edited by tata_tata - 13 years ago
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