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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

that was hawt , great update...can't wait for the truth to vum out...continue soon

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chicagogirl

@chicagogirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Congratz on the new thread! The chapter was beautiful, like always it was perfect :)

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nia252

@nia252

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

thank god he was in his senses

i thought he is gonna be rough wid her

but i love him

n he confessed...nice timing😊

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Awesome!!!! That was hot!!!!;D
Very well written...greAt work loved it!!!;)

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mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

woohoo its a new thread congratulations and celebrations🥳

new thread with new rules and ☺️ update thats just amazing now keep thinking and guessing what is amazing the new thread or the rules or the update 😉😆

awe we the readers get a hug, thats so sweet of you. am like as i never get a hug from any of my favourite writer, some of them are dead long ago and remaining are out of my reach 😛 but thanks to IF that we got a brilliantly delivered story by an extra ordinary writer 😃 love you more Rachel (i read in a comment that your name is Rachel. well i dunno its your pen name/real name but i really wanna know your real name 😊 and yeah i just love your id too molten lava, reminds me of chocolate muffin stuffed with melted chocolate, yummy, sweet and irresistible just like your writing or may be like your own personality 😉)

stalker appreciation 😊 yaayyy am one of them 😃 heheheh we the stalkers are promoted from stalkers to professional stalkers🥳by our very own favourite writer 😆 well dont know about others but am kind of honored 😛😉😆

i must say you should give a thought to write professionally so that you can make more people crazy for your work 😃

and please dont think am buttering you like some crazy teenager am 25 but i cant help to show enthusiasm just like teenager after reading your note and rules 😃😆 so pardon me for that 😳

and for the update am speechless well not really speechless but am sort of shy you know 😳 so really cant say anything but yeah i loved khushi's confusion and fear at the start and then Arnav's assurance to her despite of his fury. morning talk is lovely but that scar is definitly a precap for upcoming scary updates

at the end i really hope that things around you are getting better and I pray you will get out of every trouble soon. always remember bad time will too pass, just have faith and be patient 😊 you are making so many people happy so you will definitly have share of your happiness 😊 stay blessed

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Seriously for min I thought Kushi dips going to run away seeing him angry

Ad congrats on ur new thread

Sorry was unavailable to comment on the previous 2 chapters..

Wow u have damakadar first chapter for this thread

Hot and sweet

That was funny she wearing cartoon lingerie sill gal... Really ...

Oh there she found out the Scars wow os wat is he going to answer

Edited by smileyhug7679 - 13 years ago

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Congrats for your new thread...it was an amazing update...what they shared was beautiful and hopefully arnav will be able to put things right for himself and Khushi.

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Congrats on the new thread

It was great how you described Khushi's feelings as i was worried she would have felt pressured into it. Also enjoyed reading arnavs POV was real cute. Loved how Arnav finally confessed was real heartfelt and i think at the pefect moment for them. Hope Arnav is truthful about the scar.