such a smoking hot update lady!...☺️
i loved the entire thing...from khushi's suspicion to her realization to her acceptance to her surrender to her love to her observation!...everything!!...
and arnav loved it from his animal instincts to his determination to his melting down to see her innocence to see helplessness to see her in pain to his slow love making session to his conclusions regarding her body parts!...it was so pure and honest... to his sweet and most honest confession to his observations regarding the marks...LOL the cartoon lingerie...😆! to his love! ...😳
aww loved this line..".Arnav may have been a criminal to the world. Maybe nearly everyone out there was terrorised by him. But he could never bear Khushi to feel the same for him. He would never allow terror to reign in her eyes."
explains it all...his love, his concern...everything...
and now i think this is the last happy update that we are getting!...after this things are going to be dark...you have given a hint of it at the end only...😛...poor arnav..i feel pity for him the scars...and now he has to crack the biggest news about his identity...that he is under the list of people who should be sent to the jail according to khushi...
i have no clue how will she react...on one hand i feel that she will stand by him, she will stick to him and will forgive him...and will be true to her words ...but on the other hand i feel that she will be devastated and will leave him and will also end up regretting this night..though i dont blame her entirely!...i am sure the other update is going to be hell lot of drama and suspense!...and i am so waiting for it!...😃
all i want to see is this love-making thing was so BEAUTIFUL!...speechless i am am..👏
honestly i dont like tooo many ahem scenes...and people who describe everything in detail...like we dont know...😛
but this was crisp and apt! again kudos to your writing yaar!!...i am so proud to follow this FF now!...one of the best i have ever read...
i will always remember this FF...has been etched in my heart forever...
and if i will get a chance i will also promote it by posting...i hope you dont mind...😊
and plss update soon...
PS- congrats on your new thread...though sad that this is going to be last one...😭
stories like these should continue...! ⭐️
KUDOS!..
Edited by shreya0305 - 13 years ago
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