The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update.. but a short one... want a longer one next time... pls update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update!! poor khushi... hope she is fine

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Posted: 12 years ago

Just caught up with the last two updates.. They are simply brilliant.

"'I hate him Devi Maiya. I hate him. But don't punish him Maiya. I don't want him to be hurt. But I don't want to see him ever again. I will not work for him anymore I don't want to set my eyes on his face' she told herself.

But even then, despite what he had done, a deep pain clenched her heart at the thought of not seeing him even for a day." Khushi's Confused soul 😆 nafrat paas ane na de, mohabbat duur Jane na de.

Now Arnav will take care of Khushi how romantic !

Please Rima update soon and PM me if possible.

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MaankigopiMadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ohhh..it was painful ... Poor Khushi ... but I want her hate to grow .. heheheheheheh sorry ... I love the update ... Let the tug or war be there for some more time .. waiting for the next .. 😉

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Suchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Just caught up this FF.. nice story..

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Milii

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Posted: 12 years ago

Won't u update this FF???

It's been ages..😭

Plzzz update

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melanie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Its been sooo long since we got an update. Pleeez update sooon.

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saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

Read it all in a g0...the last part was terr0rizing

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melanie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Pleeez tell when are u updating 😭 😭 going crazy waiting for the update everyday

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incandescent

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Rima,

I have read all the chapters at one go...loved it. I like the flow and the pace of the story and your effortless way of narration.

Eager to read more. Update soon.

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