The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Finally you updated!👏

Arnav sure is in full contrition. He should be!

Arnav is trying his best to take care of her. Even he wanted to get punished.

So Khushi called her parents. But my intuition is, she will not put the blame on Arnav. Coz deep down inside she loves Arnav. After seeing her generosity Arnav will lean on her I guess. I'm presuming too much of your story. Hahaha.

Looking forward for the next update.

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#702

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I don't really feel bad for how Arnav is repenting for his mistakes. Does it matter though? He kicked Khushi out of the car in his anger, and left her warding off at a new place for an hour! A whole hour! and after coming to his senses, he finally realized his mistake. And now he is repenting and trying to take care of Khushi... does that make him a saint? f**k no!

If that's how the world works, then this place would have been far worse than just one girl being left to fend on her own.

I think Khushi should just leave the place and leave AR. Let Arnav realize the depth of hurt he bestowed on that girl!

Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago

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preethi28

@preethi28

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

an update afterso long.
loved it
arnav is being a real man by coming forward to confess his mistakes and make amends.
update soon dear.

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Well, well, well, look who's repenting. Like that's gonna help.

Couldn't he be a little bit sensible for once rather than being the logical and i-am-so-proud-but-i-still-repent kind.

Like he said, what if she had been killed, or worse, raped? Would his attitude make things alright?

Hmph, really mad at you ASR.

Aww...but he's trying to be nice.

Lol, i'll always end up at going aww..on ASR. damn!

Now its all down to Khushi's decision.

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Finally you updated! Thanks a ton!
And you left us a kind of cliffhanger! What is Khushi gonna do?

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

yayyy!!!! soo glad you updated!!! it was awesome!!!! I knew you wouldn't let Arnav go without his guilt getting in the way!! 😊 Finnallly!!!!! he feels bad!!!

oh n the precap, am sure she won't say anything to her parents! she's Khushi after all!!