The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Oh god... please tell me Khushi will quit the job. I don't think anyone needs to be treated that way.. and that too in a new city, in the winter.. for an hour! This is horrible. And she fell into the pit and is found lying surrounded by her blood... What would she say if her parents find out? They better find out... quit Khushi, quit!

Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Hi! 😊

Aww...Arnav is a good human being at heart. I mean he donates money to charity and respect people who are unfortunate. He had suffered a terrible past without his mother love. I have mostly read about Arnav hating his father but receiving unconditional love from his mother. So this is a definitely new concept and at the same time really hurtful to read about a Arnav trying to do anything to get his mother attention, care and love. Now I am slowly trying to understand why Arnav is so protective of his heart because he has been brutally deprived of the purest form of love, a mothers love. 😊

I am going to be optimistic and think that by the end of this trip Khushi will kinda understand Arnav better and they will have a better relationship. 😊

I really enjoy reading about this Arnav and Khushi. Arnav is kind at heart and Khushi is from a conservative background, sweet and innocent.

Please continue soon. ⭐️

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Arnav is a complex character,living a secluded life...khushi is his reward...but what about khushi..does she deserve all this rude behaviour??the storyline is quite intriguing!!! Rima,i don't think i can wait😆...continue soon,dear!!!😊

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Awesome story
plzzz can u pm me

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Finalllyyy he came to save her...
N Arnav's flashbacks about his mother were soo touchy...my heart just clenched at those...poor soul Khushi...she has to suffer alloott...awesome update...
Update soon...

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Rima,

Thanks for the PM :)

Wonderful update. Arnav's past and Khushi's thoughts were nicely described.

I didn't know Arnav had such a treatment from his mother. Just because of his father the way his mother treated him was very cruel.

I LOVE LOVE these lines...beautifully described 😃

"Mother was a word every child thought of with a smile.

Mother is a relationship that brought joy

Mother meant unconditional love

Mother meant no judgments

Mother meant peace".

I feel bad for Arnav and I understand why he behaved like this but he should also think Khushi cannot be punished for it. Leaving her alone like that was not correct and OMG what happened to her... =(

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Milii

@Milii

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Wonderful story!! 👏

Loved it...

Please continue sooon 😊

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

oh my god did he hit her

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

Omg, my heart is still racing in a fast pace

The chapter was full of sheer tension.

I was muttering a silent prayer for Khushi's safety. Thank you that you made Arnav found her. I hope she is fine. I know it became an ego issue for her to take help from Arnav after what he did to her.But I want Arnav contrite and some how take her along with him. Arnav was outraged, but what he did was not acceptable at all.

Plz Rima update soon and PM me if possible.