A Lost Battle -SwaRon OS- Part 2 updated.

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Yash Inani

@YashInani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

awesome... marvelous... mindblowing... fantastic... superb...

aur kya bolu me is part ke bare me mujhe samaj nahi aa raha...

loved it like anything yaar...

thanx a ton for it...

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Wantubak

@Wantubak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

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@Death_Memories

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

awieee perfect ending to a perfect love story love u for this sudha loved how swayam hugged her without even saying a word keep writing now im going back to swaronland

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Sudha thanks so much for such a beautiful ending.At least sharon is giving life a chance with swayam in it. Any girls dream man is swayam. Amazing yaar for sketching each and evey emotions of swaron. The pain and lonliness in sharon and the calmness of swayam. Well done sudha hats of to you.

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Madhura

@Madhura..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Sudha, I read well the 1st part, it was beautiful!

Sharon's tragedy and the reason, she didnt want to give swayam a chance, lovely and way they both had gelled together.

It was really sad, and practical, and heart touching!

The 2nd part, happy ending!

I really, loved the way Sharon talked to her sis and Jeej, the way they understood her, and best was she finally listened to her heart and love!

Amazing, I loved the last lines of both parts, description was awesoe as well, of swaron and everything, also the beach house part and architecture thing, was mast!

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Yay, I'm so glad you continued. I loved the whole part. Sharon's conversation with her Sister and Jeeju was very nicely written and then their confession. Just loved it. And the update was nicely written. :)

Thank you for the PM

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

superb update...thanks n glad u wrote d 2nd part...really wanted 2 c dem 2gether...thanks for d pm

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

I just read, will comment later, at length.

EDITED

Right, so it is visible! You really have improved since the last time I read from you. So, that's sure a good thing, lady. Well done! I like the opening the most, by the way. It is the most indulging and appealing to me.

Yes, it is evident that you've tried to keep it real which is again a very nice thing. You didn't lose your grip on the original theme. But if I were you, I wouldn't have given it this so-called happy ending. Cause if you see it this way, that ending wasn't all sad, was it? I would just left my readers creating a story of their own as to whether or not SwaRon ever met again?! 😳

Anyhow, this is a very nice read! Thanks for continuing! =)

Thanks for the PM.

-Kankshita

Edited by Savage - 13 years ago

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

First of all, thank god you continued. I felt that it was incomplete before. Very nicely written Sudha. Much better than the previous one I might add.

Her whole realization felt extremely normal and real, like it was meant to be. Her longing too was aptly portrayed. Nice work there.

Love the way she confessed. Love the kiss. Loved the way the sat down to talk about their future. Very much real.

Keep writing. I do enjoy your works.😃

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

oh sudha this was the perfect way to end a complex journey to realise love for each other and rather most suitable way to start a fairytale love saga...