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Rupa

@voldemort

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

Somebody ddnt like my last comment !!! 😆

heee heee...that was a cliffhanger comment for a cliffhanger chapter...heee heee

of course i had loved the chapter thats y i was red on face cause i did not want it to end there...again a good chapter, and am waiting for an epic in the car situation, here...

ya absolutely fine wth the pace dear...

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Potatoefreak

@Potatoefreak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

This chapter was really nice and sweet !

Arnav and khushi bantering are so cute! haha

Great job! Looking forward to the next update !

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Avisha Rao

@TheDreamer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Sorry to tell you dear...not much satisfied with this chapter...
Hope next chapter will be interesting:)
thanks for the pm

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

The pace is absolutely fine . No issues with that at all . This is your baby , you decide the pace 😉 not us . Also another great update . Now am so eager as to what Arnav and khushi will do ;) Eagerly waiting for the next chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thnks for the PM ...

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Loved the update. Don't worry the story is moving ahead at just the right pace.waiting for the next installment.

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

superb updt

luv it

updt soon

thanks for pm

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zooni

@zooni.blue

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

ASR smiling n it ends !wicked ! lol

super fab update luved the pace and arhi interaction! perfectly in character ! ASR the master distractor

you rock

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

Very entertaining!
But seriously..arnav was annoying.! :|
and no.i dont have a problem with the pace of the story..its more realistic this way..we cant imagine them to fall in love just like that..narration of its evolution is necessary..+its not just about arshi.there s aman and mehak too.