Arshi FF: Tethered Thread 1 (Ch 1-20) Thread 2 link added

Frequent Posters

livy

@livy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

thanks. that was a great update. looking forward to the next part.

Quote

seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#702

the pace of the story is fine

can't wait to find what happens next

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

This is such a delightful gem of a story, I love your Aman, he is so cute, hope Mahek gives him a chance to say sorry and make up for his stupidity in the past.

As for ASR and KKG- they are gorgeous as ever! She is a perfect match/foil for his grouchiness and cockiness!

I hope the twins, Aakash, Samar and Lavanya, all have their own stories too.

I am so glad I stumbled on it by chance. Looking forward to the rest of this well paced, fun-filled story!😊

Quote

toblerone

@toblerone

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

wow, such a mood-swingy-encounter!! from smirking to glaring and then smiling 😃

i'm good with the pace, keep up the good work!!

Quote

angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

loved it

he is so smart

wnt let her win

never will give her a direct n straight answer

Quote

lastdesire

@lastdesire

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

i lyk samar...his bonding wiz khushi is detested by arnie lol

jealous arnav is a treat

khushi made a fool outa herself infrnt of arnav

Quote

yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

wow...just now saw the update...its sweet and full of ArHi...will arnav take Khushi for the party??i hope he does...and your pace is perfectly fine for me...😊

Quote

laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

cute update, he is enjoying her company and she is affected by him.

Quote

Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Firstly, thank you for replying.

Like some other readers, i feel the story didn't move much in this update.

But this story is really cute. I mean there are other pairs as well.

eg. Aman - Mahek.

However, to keep up the pushing and pulling of Arnav-Khushi's nok jhok, then the pace should be a bit faster. Like at the precap part, you can have an exciting word that sums up the next update.

Your characterization and other stuff are perfectly fine though. But like you said, the story seems stagnant. I hope the next update is longer. But i still love ya dammit! You are an amazing writer 😊