IPKKND: The Love Child [Ch6 Updated]

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue
A black SUV zig-zagged its way through the morning traffic from the Airport. Its owner, possessed by burning wrath. Just as the SUV screeched to a halt infront of RM, the man dashed out of his vehicle and burst through the doors of his home.
"WHERE IS SHE?" he roared.
Everybody just pointed to HER room, afraid of uttering a single wrong word that may put them at the receiving end of his blazing fury! He ran to her room, and stood deathly still when he heard her sobs from the other side of the door. Taming his anger, he gently nudged the door open.
She was crying non-stop like a child. He had never seen her cry like that his entire life, not even when their mum had died. "Di...",he said. She raised her eyes to behold the man, dubbed as "The Sexiest Man Alive" in the Fashion Buzz Magazine, her brother, Arnav Singh Raizada.
"Chotey!!, she cried and ran to him, as if the very devil was after her. She broke down completely when she reached the protection of his arms.
"Who did this? WHO? What's THAT person's name? Tell me Di???? Arnav demanded.
"Her...name...is...Khushi Gupta!!" she responded in between sobs and then handed him the Diary and the Letter which her LATE Husband had handed to her at his death-bed. "Please Chotey do something...ANYTHING...Please...," she beseeched.
Elegantly flipping his mobile open, he contacted Aman, his PA. "Aman!!! Find me Khushi Gupta...I want to know everything about her! EVERYTHING Aman...by TONIGHT!!!" ordered Arnav and just as quickly chucked his mobile away to comfort his recently widowed Di.
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Please comment and let me know your honest opinions regarding this prologue. And let me know if YOU think if its worth while to continue this story or NOT... I would love toknow your views on it. Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey thats great.
what did khushi do?
continue soon
and keep me updated
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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at shyam is out of scene to create any more trouble... nice plot... please continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The story is worth it if Kushi is the love child of late Shyam jha... Not if she is the mother
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What did Khushi do
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic yaar,
the grand entry of arnav.
the story to be unrevealed.
every thing is perfect and fine.
liked it very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please let Khushi not be the mother of shyam child please that would be bad real bad
So what next do give us more details soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Whoa😲

That was one heck of a concept⭐️
da title deifnitely caught my attention & am guessing it refers to Khushi 🤔
well, Am deifnitely curious to know more?!
hope you contnue with this FF😊
am hooked just by da prologue!!!
Written mysteriously and beautifully ❤️
I wanna know more dude😍
please do continue soon
eargly waiting😳
x
Edited by Cheryth - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏thanks.brilliant..concept..please update sooon...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what did khushi do...

pls continue...

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