IPKKND: The Love Child [Ch6 Updated]

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prachi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

you know i am very curious to read more...

please please update this one soon

thanks alot for the pm

continue soon

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bhumi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Awesome chapter! Arnav and khushi finally meet!

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Anzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awesome update! Hope nothing happens to Khushi or Riya

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Cheryth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

CHAPTER 1 comment😳

Hey Thank you for the PM hun 😃
& Sorry for da late comment
Its been quite a hectic week for me with a heap load of deadlines to meet and🥱 found time now to read the chapter properly😳
and WOW
Payal & Garima are sooo different in this FF (by different i mean in a very unbelievingly cruel way)
I cant believe the child is Payal's and she was going to abort her kid I repeat 'ABORT' an innocent child😡 (which in my dictionary is similar to murder -.-)
I hate people who don't think twice before dwelling on passion and once they get news of a baby😡 (a blessing and a gift) they, plan on murdering 😭-.-
anyways ignore my melodrama😳
what am saying is I love the way you've portrayed our sweet Khushi in this FF
I mean "yep, dats our girl"
She's definitely and angel😍
Yu said "All I can say is ... Believe in Khushi" and thats exactly what I have been doing and what I am going to continue doing 👍🏼
Well, raving aside now
It was one heart-breakingly beautiful and crushingly sad update⭐️
I was stunned and depressed half way through🥺 (hell, my tears are proof of dat)
You definitely know how to bundle up da right amount of emotion in your writing
am simply speechless ☺️(even though i did rant😉)
Breathtakingly gorgeous
Cant wait to read more!!!!

once again Thank you 🤗

Edited by Cheryth - 13 years ago

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Cheryth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

CHAPTER 2 COMMENT😳

Oooh Chapter 2 ?!! *giggles*

This update was well mysterious😎

I know Arnav planned da whole 'khushi running away and him coming to her rescue' thingy *rolling eyes*

And I can say by the way you described his emotions (which khushi reads in his eyes) that he definitely ain't no saviour nuh-uh

but, am sooo blinded by the fact that they met that I could care less what he's planning 😳

It was not exactly a very mushy romantic meet (which am not a biig fan of) but, It was the kind of a meet I usually do like in stories (given dat am a huge horror and dark romance fan).

Their meet undeniably had the 'WOW' factor it was a perfectly baffling meet !!!

It was a flawless update as always 👍🏼

hope Khushi andda Baby does not have to go through pain in da next few updates

even though my gut says something bad is in store for us

but, heck its your story right?!😳 and am sure you have planned all this well

anyways, as usual

It was a dangerougly captivating update that I cant wait for Chapter 3😍

Edited by Cheryth - 13 years ago

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chavvi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

By god her luck is seriously running bad if she ran into arnav not good whatever he is planning ain't good for Khushi thats for sure
I bet he thinks that the child is khushis right well wrong but still not sure about whole shyam angle
Hope you will clarify soon because the mystery is getting too mysterious
See you soon I hope